Title: Chapter 24

This is the cutest chapter. The whole idea of getting caught is very exciting. I'm glad Scott is loosening up. Great job.

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Date: October 25 2009 07:41 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Great update!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2009 05:50 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Cute. Carol has defitinely influenced her. What happened to her morals. Loved the update

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2009 03:42 pm

Title: Chapter 24

That was wild and Mack just continues to bring Scott out of his shell and has him doing stuff he would never think of so apparent Carol is rubbing off on him.  Plus she had the nerve to say she had morals about doing it in the car but turn right around and do it @ her job in the break room. 

WOW!!!! LOL!!!!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2009 02:38 pm

Title: Chapter 24

That was cute...they really are becoming more like Carol all the time.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2009 02:18 pm

Title: Chapter 23

That dinner was more than awkward...his parents are nice but a little quirky just what I expected.  When she told Scott that she loved him and he almost crashed I couldn't help but laugh.  Thanks for a great read.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2009 01:33 am

Title: Chapter 23

Ahhhhh! That is sweet they have confessed there love for one another.  The meeting with the parents seemed to go over well.  Aaron though is a bit much...does he have anything to talk about other then science.

I am glad that Mckenzie is going to take Scott to meet her grandmother.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 18 2009 11:11 am

Title: Chapter 23

aww that so sweet she told him she love him aww. lol ok his mom and dad lol are a trip but you can see his mother is son life unlike dad who dismiss him when he talked about his job. can't wait to scott meet the family thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2009 05:22 am

Title: Chapter 23

Loved the update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 18 2009 04:35 am

Title: Chapter 23

Time to meet grandma, I don't think she will be as strange as his parents. Alright, they confessed that the loved each other. Great update!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2009 04:29 am

Title: Chapter 23

LOL! Ok his parents are crazy! And they said I love you!!! Yaay!!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2009 04:19 am

Title: Chapter 23

awwww they r soo cute. i can't wait for Scott to meet jared and grandma. awesome update

Reviewer: lalala98 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 18 2009 03:28 am

Title: Chapter 23

Can't wait for Scott to meet Grandma.  Great update.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2009 03:15 am

Title: Cast

I am enjoying your story!!

Reviewer: Mercy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2009 09:09 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Interesting family meeting so far. Loved the update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 14 2009 06:58 am

Title: Chapter 22

So far so good

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2009 06:44 am

Title: Chapter 22

This is Great!! :)

Reviewer: lis Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 14 2009 05:31 am

Title: Chapter 22

ok the  mom and dad are cool so far i hope they nice people  to her . like her friend said  be your self and they will love you. like the story and glad to see it post. Thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2009 05:23 am

Title: Chapter 22

She is meeting Scott's parents but says that they aren't boyfriend and girlfriend.  Interesting!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2009 05:02 am

Title: Chapter 22

Ah!!! How cute Scott is so funny...he turns red at the slightest things.  Joann seems to be cool and Aaron is very considerate indeed.

So Mack does not consider Scott her boyfriend just someone she is dating huh?  I wonder does Scott think the same way?  

Thanks for the update can't wait to see what is coming next.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 14 2009 03:30 am

Title: Chapter 22

So she has met the parents. Things are going well for them so far. Great update!

 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2009 03:06 am

Title: Chapter 21

Going to meet the parents?! Scott is serious about MacKenzie.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2009 07:46 am

Title: Chapter 21

Wow, going to meet the parents huh??? Sounds serious. I hope things work out for them.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 13 2009 06:33 am

Title: Chapter 21

I love this story. Scott and Mackenzie are too cute.

Reviewer: lalala98 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 13 2009 04:07 am

Title: Chapter 21

It's time to meet the parents, it is getting serious. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2009 06:22 pm



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