Title: Chapter 3

That was a wonderful and awesome :update: and well worth the wait I must say.

Valles is a creepy, scary creature. I don't think that Chase should attend the set down either but he has to show his Alphness I suppose when it comes to his woman. I have a feeling though that is only going to antagonize Valles all the more and that even if he is pay the 20 mill by Chase cause you know that sorry ass Dorian is not going to pay cause what happened to the 2 mill he got from Chase in the first place and why does he keep lying and putting his sister in danger. Anyway even if Valles gets the money he is still going to kill Dorian he has already made that clear but I think he is still going to try and go after Sinny and if by some fluke of a chance he gets a hold of her which I so hope doesn't happy Chase is going to lose his ever loving mind. He has already staked claim on lil bella...and I feel so so sorry well not not really for any fool who attempts to take her away from him.

Well girls there you have it Taya has snared our fearless leader Chris....but he is going to try and fight it every step of the way you can already tell and apparently he make our resident diva wild child nervous... :D funny...I can't wait to see and read the fireworks between them and to see what is going to make him really stand up and take notice that he wants her for more then a little rumble in the hay stack so to speak.

Well our lovely engaged couple have finally did the do...deed...horizontal polka and I must say that our Chase is a talker LOL! Anyway I thought so sure she was going to stall some more. I wonder what finally made her let go did it have anything to do with the scare from Valles?

Oh lawd no what has Carm gone and gotten himself into now and you see who he goes to in order to have his wounds tended to. Mia was trying to have her some "Me Time" and he had to come and infiltrate that time alone with his fine sexy beat up self.

:app: :app: :app: Again thank you for the :update: and taking time out of your busy schedule I know it can't bee easy trying to get out assignments and be focused. Great job chica see you on the flip side.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2009 11:03 pm

Title: Chapter 2

First, the Pictures, OMG!  Dorian and Chase are just too sexy and the rest are not bad at all.  The women they will be with are pretty too. That was a nice touch making Alicia pregnant.  I knew Mia was going to start getting under Carmine's skin pretty quick.  If it had been Dom instead of Chase, he would not have let Sinclair stay alone in her home.  I like this story and characters. Nce job!

Reviewer: Lovelybears Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2009 12:38 am

Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad the Nichetti family has a story.  I wanted to hear more about them after their role in the previous story.  I like the story so far.  Carmine and Mia are cute together, but how does he get to play around until he is ready to settle down with Mia?  I have a feeling he is going to be ready sooner than he thought.  I can't wait the see what Dorian is involved in and what it will mean to the Nicetti's and Sinclair.

Reviewer: Lovelybears Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2009 12:31 am

Title: Chapter 2

You know, I was surprised that Chase, after learning that Sin is in trouble, didn't insist that she stay with him.  Bodyguards can be overwhelmed by larger numbers.  How much does he really love her.  He is indulging her as if she were a child.  This is her life we are talking about.  And what is she talking about not letting anyone force her out of her house?  Your life (freedom) or her house....not a hard choice.

I like Dominic and Alicia. They make a WONDERFUL couple.  They are truly in love with each other.  I am looking to seeing how they work out their differences.

Mia needs to step out and have some fun that takes her mind completely off of Carmine, who is taking her for granted.  He acts as if her sole purpose in life is to wait until he is ready to give her his attention, which is going to occur later, rather than sooner. 

And Taya is very smart.  Just as sharp or even more so than Sin.  Taya would have gone with her man to stay safe.  Augustin Valles is a very dangerous man.  Are we looking at a possible hook-up with Christopher Nichetti?  Just how dangerous is he?  As dangerous as Augustin?  Is he good enough for Taya?

I am REALLY, REALLY HOOKED ON THIS STORY!!!!

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2009 08:35 am

Title: Chapter 2

Nice twist with Alicia's pregnancy.  Good update.

Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 05 2009 07:51 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great story so far and I hope that Cris will get a love intrest as well.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 04 2009 02:29 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I absolutely LOVE these men... I love the series of stories that led to this one...

Again you have me HOOK, LINE and friggin SINKER!!! Now I have to just start STALKING you like crazy on two boards...

Chica, I have work and school full time (plus a 2 yo toddler that is going on 30) but when you update... Mama let me just tell you everything STOPS!!! I get thru whatever I have to get thru to make sure I can read in peace...

Yep... LOVED it and can't wait to see where you are going!!!

Thanks for blessings us with your talents.... You have been gone WWWWWAAAAAYYYYY to long!

Reviewer: spanishfly69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2009 05:31 am

Title: Chapter 2

Carmine was flirting with mia big time lol i just wish these two get it on already lol but it good they taking things  slowly  before that next step. Dominick's glad that he making up with the love of his life and they going to have a baby . I bet it a boy they going to have.  Love how chase is  so proctive of Sinclair and they make such a cute couple. love all the charcters in the story and thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2009 04:40 am

Title: Chapter 2

Nice story.  I like the surprise with Alicia being pregnant.  Don't have a good feeling with Sinclair being alone at her place.  She should definitely go with Chase and who knows what good things might happen between the two of them.

Reviewer: qualidee3 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2009 02:58 am

Title: Chapter 2

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!

I NEED MORE!!!!!

This is sooooo addicting!!! i mean jeez dom and alicia, i don't really like dominating guys but jesus, help us all he is sexy!!!! and then carmine!!! i have a special spot for him and mia, they are soooooo cute with their dirty minds and then chase and sinny!!!! awwwwww i just wanna give chase a big hug!!!

this was such a great update, i can't believe it!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Interracial4Prez Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2009 01:21 am

Title: Chapter 2

You have a some grammar issues to work out, but other than that, this was a great start. This story has the ability to be good and soapy.

You did a terrific job setting up the different storylines. Dorian's crap is about to bring the rain on the Nichette family.

Dom's out, but will probably be pulled back in, which will screw up his relationship with Alicai.

 Chase isn't in the family business, but thanks to his "friend" he's about to explore uncharted waters. He better keep his eye's on Sin, because their is a sexy psychotic gangstar with both eyes on her.

LOL at Carmine scaring that poor kid. It would be nice if Mia met a good guy, who was worthy of her. I would be interested to see how Carmine handles the situation. It's one thing to know she's dating losers that won't last, but its another thing to know that she has someone who will be what she needs.  

From the cast pic alone, I am really looking forward to Christopher. He looks like a man who doesn't take crap from anyone. I'm wondering if he will have brown eye, because the others have blue. Will there be a lady in his life?

I would love to see a female who's not completely into the family. I want to see some chasing here, maybe some great banter, that isn't sexual, but more intellectual. 

 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 04 2009 12:51 am

Title: Chapter 2

ok, im commenting on thestory before i even read this chapter to give u two thumbs up for the pictures!!!! everything has been made better for me and if u need help having the pics show up, here: if u put [img] at the beginning of the link and [/img] at the end of the link then it shud work. i've never put pics up on here before, but that usually works on forums and stuff. ok im gonna read now!!!!! IM SOOOOO EXCITED!!!!

Reviewer: Interracial4Prez Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2009 12:18 am

Title: Chapter 2

I am so glad you updated this one again!!  I love this story!

I am glad that Alicia and Dominick were able to work things out!  

It is going to be interesting to watch Carmine fall for Mia!!  :) 

And I love chase and Sinny!!  :)

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2009 11:45 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Wonderful Wonderful update.

I kind of figured that Alicia was pregnant with Nicky's baby. :D and I was excited when you wrote it. Now Dom has his woman and a baby on the way.

Augustin is fine as hell but the way you described him creepied me the hell out.  I am happy that Chase has security on her.  I wonder have they told Chris yet.

Carmine is falling for Mia hell he has always wanted her but still wants to play the field...but I thought it was funny how cool he acted and sounded when he was talking to the blond until he asked him do he want to go to the hospital with a concussion cause he was going to crown him over the head with that beer bottle.  Ms. Sherri already thinking wedding bells girl you better wake up he is stictly on the hit it and quit it forum.

Chase told Sin that he loves him and vice versa.  I wonder where Dorian is at if he gave him the 2mill or skipped out with it...that would be some shit if he skipped out with the money and left his sister there to contend for herself yes, he asked Chase to take care of her but still....that would be some shit if he did that.  I hope he is not swimming with the fish especially if it was not his choice to do so.

Wonderful update Wonderful story.  Keep it coming love your writing and so have missed you.

Thank you.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2009 09:45 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I love Chase and Dom. Carmine needs a lot of work he  has the nerve to be jealous but he hasn't once told her he is interested. Mia needs to get a friend and let him see how it feels.

Mom and dad sounds like they ar going to be a problem. I hope Dorian is okay and hiding out to keep safe, but the drawback to that is they could take his sis and use her to make him come back. Great update!!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2009 09:12 pm

Title: Chapter 2

This is good! Also I LOVE DAVID GANDY! he is by far my favorite modellll! he's scottish accent is to die forrr mmmmm.  i pictured him as Carmine before you posted this pictures hah. I think Carmine and Mia are my faves. 

Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2009 09:01 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Carmine have to redeem for me to like him with Mia.  He sleeps with everything on two legs.  Mia wants him yes but she deserves better so do some acrobat with him so he can become worthy.  Plus the girls at the job he sleeps with that putting it in her face.  Maybe I am wrong but that my 2 cents. 

Dom and Alicia.. Love them.

Chase and Sinny.. Cute she definite will give him a run for his money.

 

Reviewer: Cherry Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 03 2009 08:57 pm

Title: Chapter 1

OMG!!!! I love this!!! I usually don't read fics that have pics, but this is amazing!!! It's sooooo sweet and I can feel Dorian dying real soon!!! I am anticipating what's to come.

Reviewer: Interracial4Prez Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2009 08:02 am

Title: Chapter 1

This is pretty good so far! keep up the good work!

Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2009 04:45 pm

Title: Chapter 1

*Happy Dance* I'm so happy you're back!!!! Love this story already. Love the Nichetti's Looks as if the brothers and cousins love a bit of chocolate :D Hope the family can keep Sinny safe (dumb brother isn't doing a good job) and Chase  needs to tell her how he feels and she needs to do the same. Poor Alicia is not going to know what hit her when Dom gets to her. Carm needs to calm down or he is going to lose Mia while he's slinging his sausage :D Can't wait for next update.

Reviewer: LIL HELPER Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2009 04:12 pm

Title: Chapter 1

 I loved the beginning of this story. Shame on Dorain for putting his sis in trouble, like C's cousin was saying Cubans are no joke and if he is asking him to watch out for her there is more that he's not telling him!!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2009 02:21 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Liking this start so far... Carmine is a trip, but he better be careful b/c Mia maynot be there when he decides he's tired of being a ManHo.

I can't wait to see what unfolds with Dominick and Alicia.

I already like Chase and Sinclair, but her brother is not too bright and I have a feeling that Dorian is in serious danger.

Oh and I can't wait to meet Chris.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2009 05:52 am

Title: Chapter 1

W-O-W!!!!!!! What an Introduction.  I LOVE this story...and it is ONLY the first chapter.  It is simmering hot already!  These Nichetti Italian men,....hmmm definitely alpha, even quite Chase. 

I can't wait for the next Update!!!

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2009 05:13 am

Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful story.  Looks as if there will be a great deal of drama and some deaths.  Dorian is an idiot.

I like.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2009 04:32 am

Title: Chapter 1

ok i love the family girl how close they are the diffenet moods all of it. i love how chase is looking after sinny and that kiss wow that was hot hot hot. i read you other work and it was amazing and no this story is too. thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2009 02:44 am



Enter the security code shown below:
Note: You may submit either a rating or a review or both.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.