Title: Chapter 5

I have a feeling Holland and his friends are going to do s0mething to her parents.

I also think Holland is jeolouse of her because of her education and has a crush on her and it burns him up that he do.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2010 06:15 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Loved it. Glad she's going to Paris.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2010 11:33 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I am so glad thet her momma and her business partner told her to go. She wouldn't make it there in that small town much longer before she snapped and said something to the good 'ol boy sheriff.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2010 07:23 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I am so glad that she is going to see Miriam in Paris, France.  Grace is so deserving and she will meet the man of her dream.  I know that she will be stubborn about it and this will be a fun ride.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2010 07:19 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Love the update. Can't wait to see what happens now that Miriam has now entered the pictures.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2010 01:15 am

Title: Chapter 3

It interesting update, so what does Miriam want?  If Grace is unhappy with her life in that small town, why is still living there?  Sure she is part owner of a business,  but that can be easily recitified by Dorothy-Mae buying her out of the business.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2010 04:05 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Me likey.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2010 09:34 pm

Title: Cast

Interesting cast pics.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2010 09:19 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Grace is taking a chance talking to the racist cops that way.  When will she move to Paris?  Ihope soon for her sake.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2010 07:12 pm

Title: Cast

Great cast...thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2010 07:01 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Good start. Holland and Vernon already make me want to puke!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2010 11:20 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Ahh, the good ole boys…don’t you just wanna kill ‘em?  If not literally, at least erase their antiquated and very delusional beliefs of grandeur. Urgh, it’s so annoying.   Anyhoo, Grace reminds me of another person I know [moi] who simply cannot keep her mouth shut when there’s injustice and stupidity involved.  Something tells me her vocal frustrations will be a health hazard if she’s not careful.

I like the plot, the opening cast is befitting of their character, especially Holland.  Jerks like him often mask their true…coveted indulgences of the ‘Grace’ persuasion. But Dorothy-Mae (I love Kathy Bates) is a spitfire that makes the negatives more tolerable with wisdom and understanding.

What’s wrong with her mom?  Are her parents divorced?  (Love your casting choices there as well)

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2010 07:49 pm

Title: Cast

I like this story so far. I think she stay in the town because of her momma and father. I wonder how sick she is.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2010 07:48 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Wow! This is really interesting. I want to see how everything turns out. Keep the chapters coming!

Reviewer: Darling Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2010 07:39 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I am liking this story already, if Grace hates that small town so much why did she stay and open that business?  For that type of racial tension I sure wouldn't have stayed.  Me likey, please update soon.  When will Henri be introduced into the story?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2010 05:49 pm



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