I am not liking this Sarah ho, jealous much? That is a rough way for Vanessa to find that Sarah wasn't really her friend and that Samuel didn't really love her. Please don't let her take that fool back, I do hope that the karma pays back Sarah in the same manner that she treated Vanessa!! Me likey!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/11 02:12 pm
Yes I am glad you updated. I love where you are going one crazy female who is probably going to start everything. I cannot wait until they arrive in Africa. I am looking forward to more chapters
Took me a while to reply because I didn't know how to reply to messages.
Thanks! I'm going to have plenty of twists and turns once they arrive in Africa. You know there always has to be someone crazy to make the story flow. I will make sure I update soon.Reviewer: foxyprime Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/11 10:56 am
I can't wait to see where you are going with this.
I was a little confuse I think you mixed up the girls names.Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 01:00 pm
Great start, I'm a lil confused of the second part story of Vanessa I guess it was sorta of a flash back of her past relationship it kinda flowed weird iono it's good either way.
I'm curious to what kinda of creature this is...Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/10 12:04 am
I like where this is going! I especially like that Vanessa walked away and didn't give in to the doc's manish advances! Does Mike have a little something for Nessa? Does Jake have something for Alex? Jake's wise ass. LOL!!! Love it. Can't wait for more.
Ending has me on edge especially... Good job with it being your first and hopefully not your last!
Thanks for posting.Reviewer: PasionK Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 10:44 pm