Penname: crazykeely429 [Contact]

Real name: Keely Johnson

Member Since: December 20 2010

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Retired
Eyes For Only You by meme
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 335]
Summary:

 

You have had life mapped out at a young age. Get into a performance arts college. Own your own dance studio and stay away from boys.... But what happens when you meet the love of your life?  Then come to find out he has a girlfriend? But, he has eyes for only you...

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 181242
Read Count: 80213
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: December 24 2017

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Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 I Want You

Your story is amazing!!! The last 2 song s pick choose for the chapters are so relatable.  I so glad the Justin and Jalena are realizing how much they like each other.  Keep up the good work and keep updating!!

 

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!! :D 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for both you know music in it's self tells a story you can probably tell its a big influence on my writting I listen to music and my chararacters start talking.

Thanks again for the birthday wish and review sorry it took me so long to respond. 

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Date: July 28 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Consequences Of Bad Choice

This story is AMAZING!!! Justin and Jalena love conflict is so addicting.  I don;t think you under stabd how much I love this story... and I;m sorry for not reviewing but you are doing a great job.  Keep it up and can;t wait for the next update! :)



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!!!!  I love hearing that! I feel Blessed from all my reviewers I really appreciate the love its a good feeling to have reviews like this being my very first time doing something like this... This builds up the confidence. So I thank you sooo very much for taking the time to leave a review. Update will be up tonight!   Oh and thanks for the rating too. :)

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Date: October 31 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Let HIm Go

I LOVE your story!! The way you write is so genuine and I feel like your characters are real high school kids. Your little views inside their dirty minds are hilarious!! Keep up the great work :) P.S.- I love the picture pov! Adds some visuals throughout the story :)  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much I truly appreciate that. I think my mind is still stuck on being that age so I remember that stage so clearly. thanks for the thumbs up on my picture pov I myself love character pics and love to have a visual of them as I read. Thanks again for your review and your rating. :) hope you enjoy the next chapter posting it up either tonight or Monday. Oh and I also have a book trailer I made as well as a cast video check it out if you get a chance.

http://youtu.be/Ml6soEAY7CE

http://youtu.be/_L2FpJMzK54

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Date: February 14 2012
My Girl, Friday by crocuslady
Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 36]
Summary:

Playboy and U.S. gold metal swimmer, Ryan Lochte had everything he wanted until he saw the one woman he couldn’t live without in teammate and arch rival Michael Phelps’ arms.  Friday Jones was not his type but he wasn’t going to leave London without making her his girl Friday.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1771
Read Count: 718
Published: August 10 2012
Updated: August 10 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It sounds really good so far! Please continue...I've been waiting for a story with Ryan Lochte since the 400 IM haha



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I didn't know that there was a Lochte fan club.

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Date: August 10 2012

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