Penname: BilliMonroe [Contact]

Real name: Jas

Member Since: July 04 2011

Membership status: Member

Bio:


Hola todas! I'm a twenty-something city girl with an affinity for four-inch heels, mini dresses and fictional bad boys with hearts of gold and more than their fare share of mystery. Stick around to read my stories and I promise to feature all of these vices.  




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[Reviews - 224]
Summary:

 

 

Jacob Thomas just proposed to his girlfriend of almost two years, Kenzie Dalton. Everyone is ecstatic by the news. Well, everyone except his long time best friend, Michaela "Mickey" Robertson. She is completely thrown off, and broken by the sudden engagement. But she puts on a brave face for her best friend, knowing that her heart has just been ripped from her chest. Elijah Thomas, Jacob's younger brother, becomes Michaela's only source of an outlet, being that he's the only one who knows about her true feelings. But the situation becomes more difficult for Michaela when she asked by Jacob himself to be Kenzie's...Maid of Honor? Will she accept? If so, how will she able to handle watching the love her of life walk down the aisle with someone else?

 

"How can I pull this off, when I'm head-over-heels in love with him?"-Michaela Robertson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 37406
Read Count: 48379
Published: November 24 2010
Updated: April 09 2012


Title: Chapter 5: Ok...?

Ha ha. Kitty is a mess. Love her though.

Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed
Date: July 10 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Airing Dirty Laundry At IHOP

First off, I am seriously glad that you are back with a new update. I have missed this story to no end. With that being said, I am really getting tired of Mickey and her attitude problem. I understand that she's stressing because the man that she loves is getting married to someone else. WE GET IT MICKEY! But that doesn't constitute her being a complete and total bitch to everyone else around her. First Eli, then her sister and roomate? They may have been wrong in how they went about discussing her life without her consent, but come on! News flash Mickey: not everyone in that damn restaurant was paying attention to you! Geez! Plus, her sister had a point. She's giving Mimi advice on how to save a marriage that is beyond repair (possibly) and she won't even tell the man of her dreams that she's in love with him.

Which is another thing about her that bugs me. I get that the heart wants what it wants and all and that you can't turn love off, but seriously he's chosen Kenzie over her more than once now. The last time being after he kisses her (a girl whom he thinks is his brother's girlfriend, mind you). She seriously needs to wake up and see there's a better guy that's been right by her the whole time. And it's not Jacob. Or maybe that's just my assertion because I am a die-hard Eli/Mickey shipper. Ha ha.

Still, even with all my ranting, I love your story and its ability to drive me insane. Even more, I love Mimi's attitude about her divorce. She's my new fiction she-ro. He he. Although something tells me that her story isn't as cut and dry as she's making it out to be. Please update soon. Because I've been checking this story for months for updates. I can't wait to see what happens.

 

Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29 2011

Title: Chapter 4: The Inappropriate Offer

Okay, two things. First, I have to admit that even though Jacob sounds (and looks) yummy, I was instantly pulled into the story by Eli. I can't help it. As soon as I saw your cast list, I was hooked. Strange obssession. Don't ask. ha ah. Be that as it may. I like all of the boys and their relationship with Mickey. It's super cute. Secondly, I absolutely adore how she talks to herself so much. I do somewhat of the same thing. I swear, it's like sarcasm just courses through my bloodstream. But anyway, just wanted to let you know how much I'm loving this story. If it's not finished, then keep up the good work. And if it is finished, then I can't wait to finish the rest.

Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed
Date: July 10 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Surprise News

Ha ha. The boys on the banner caught my attention, but the story is keeping me interested.

Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed
Date: July 10 2011

Title: Chapter 6: 27 Dresses...

Kitty's so freaking mean. But funny. Poor Issac though. And poor Mickey as well.

Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed
Date: July 10 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Faux Beau Syndrome

I love this story! Have I said that yet? Well in case I didn't. I do. I love it. Love it. Love it!!! And I'll be reviewing every single chapter.

Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed
Date: July 10 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

Dijnae Anderson is a full-figured high school junior. She's dealing with crazy best friends, a protective brother, her insecurities, and her attraction to the Co-Captain of the Football team. No one said high school was easy and she's definitely being put to the test.


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 15199
Read Count: 14469
Published: October 16 2011
Updated: February 02 2012


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Awww, this ended way to quickly, but maybe that's because it feels like I've been waiting for this update forever. Lol.

Be that as it may, Dijnae is a really smart girl. She knows that all the "You're beautiful"'s in the world isn't going to make her feel good about herself if she doesn't believe it. She also knows better than to get involved with Austin while her self-esteem is so low. Nothing good could come of that, and the relationship would end faster than it began. However, she is beautiful, you've shown that she's talented, and clearly she's smart.

 So my hope is that she gets over the skinny complex, get the guy before he gets away, and gives a glossy, diva hair flip to all her haters. And soon!

Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed
Date: January 07 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Take away love and our earth is a tomb ~ Robert Browning

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 5754
Read Count: 8095
Published: December 19 2011
Updated: February 27 2012


Title: Chapter 3: II. Not one for goodbye...

Wow! I love the build up. Every story that you write is like a puzzle. I can't wait to see how you put this one together.

Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed
Date: December 31 2011

Title: Chapter 4: III. Vulnerability

They are dysfunctional, but what epic love isn't? I am hooked on these two. So don't keep me at bay.

Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed
Date: December 31 2011

Title: Chapter 2: I. The Words We Never Speak

Damnit Scribe, you totally did it to me again. I was supposed to be trying for sleep and instead you just gave my insomnia an outlet. This story is heartbreaking and amazing. I can't wait to find out what happened between them and what they'll do to fix it.

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Date: December 31 2011

Title: Chapter 5: IV. Beneath the Surface

I love this story with a fiery passion. Every time I see an update, I scream like a kid in a toy store whose parents just won the lotto. Seriouslsy. And the fact that you don't give it all away at once is what keeps me wanting more. Well, that and the fact that I love your writing. Can't wait for an update.

Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 

TVD

 

A Mixed Signals - Sequel

 

One heartbroken Bennett plus a grimoire equals a second chance.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Bonnie Bennett
Classification: Alternate Universe, Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: Damon/Bonnie (Vampire Diaries)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4757
Read Count: 4146
Published: February 25 2012
Updated: March 11 2012


Title: Chapter 4: Double Jeopardy

I've already replied in length to each chapter on FF.com, but I just wanted to let you know that I originally read this story on here and couldn't wait to reply. It reminded me of the Scribe classics such as Kisses on Friday (which I reread and fell in love with all over again over the weekend). It also has kept me from working on the novel that I'm trying to finished. *shakes head*

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.