Chapter 14: Airing Dirty Laundry At IHOP
First off, I am seriously glad that you are back with a new update. I have missed this story to no end. With that being said, I am really getting tired of Mickey and her attitude problem. I understand that she's stressing because the man that she loves is getting married to someone else. WE GET IT MICKEY! But that doesn't constitute her being a complete and total bitch to everyone else around her. First Eli, then her sister and roomate? They may have been wrong in how they went about discussing her life without her consent, but come on! News flash Mickey: not everyone in that damn restaurant was paying attention to you! Geez! Plus, her sister had a point. She's giving Mimi advice on how to save a marriage that is beyond repair (possibly) and she won't even tell the man of her dreams that she's in love with him.
Which is another thing about her that bugs me. I get that the heart wants what it wants and all and that you can't turn love off, but seriously he's chosen Kenzie over her more than once now. The last time being after he kisses her (a girl whom he thinks is his brother's girlfriend, mind you). She seriously needs to wake up and see there's a better guy that's been right by her the whole time. And it's not Jacob. Or maybe that's just my assertion because I am a die-hard Eli/Mickey shipper. Ha ha.
Still, even with all my ranting, I love your story and its ability to drive me insane. Even more, I love Mimi's attitude about her divorce. She's my new fiction she-ro. He he. Although something tells me that her story isn't as cut and dry as she's making it out to be. Please update soon. Because I've been checking this story for months for updates. I can't wait to see what happens.
Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed