Penname: Caribbean Fire [Contact]

Real name: Lee

Member Since: October 26 2008

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I am currently re-writing and posting my originaly story, 'Trust'. It is also being posted on Literotica or Lite. Any other place is without permission. I ask you to inform me as soon as possible. 


I am enjoying the re-write. My characters are much more developed and multi-dimensional. The plot is also far more interesting (At least in my opinion...LOL). I hope everyone who reads it enjoys the story and can identify with some facet of the character(s). Good critical feedback is always welcomed. 


Thank you. 



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Summary:

When recent college grad, Lily Taylor became the personal paralegal to the notorious lawyer of the stars, Aiden Hawkins, she never knew that she would have her hands tied with him...literally.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 66387
Read Count: 66266
Published: October 03 2012
Updated: July 30 2013


Title: Chapter 9: He Won't Go-Part 2

Very  nice. I liked that you went back to the basics of the story. Lily is very foolish and she needed to get that lesson. Aiden is being very lenient wiht her but he also have to realize that she is very, very new to this game and that she's going to want to jump in head first instead of feet first. Maybe he should watch some of the movies with her or give her articles on the lifestyle to read so that he could answer questions he may have. That would have been better than telling her she wasn't ready and then laughing at her.

I love the dressing room scene. Very hot and to the point where he taught her what he means by him being a Dom and she being a Sub. That was a very good thing he did by telling her what he meant and showing her also. Now with the phone thing, I agree with him. She shouldn't have looked at his messages on his phone. She was out of line.

Overall...great chapter. Keep itup.

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05 2013

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Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 37781
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hot! Hot! Hot! Eshan...Hot! I have nothing to say about IDIOT! and Joss it took ya long enough to rip her. Did I mention HOT? Well done!



Author's Response:

Lol.  Thanks!!!

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06 2014

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I agree with Chris, that IDIOT is stupid enough to tell on her cousin and she really thinks that he loves him. I don't know what words can be said about that level of stupidity. I am proud of Joss that she ripped her properly. While I like that Joss and Eshan's relationship is growing, I wish they were able to have their relationship without IDIOT around...she's like the Black Hole when it come to being stupid. Funny how they are planning on sending her to school so they can still be around each other...nice planning.



Author's Response:

Sahirah is a double edged sword.  She is the bane of their romantic existence on one hand and the unwitting facilitator on the other.  What to do with a problem like Sahirah?  You'll soon see.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Caribbean Fire!

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Date: January 06 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

That is so true Eshan, you no longer have an excuse. Hirah, okay, officially an IDIOT! That girl is not a friend. She is simple minded and such an idiot...she's the type of person who would catch a disease from Chris and say its other women, not him for sleeping around unprotected. IDIOT! Joss, you're the best for doing what you did. I applaud you for sticking with you man and defending him for coming to your defense.



Author's Response:

I cosign everything you said.  Thanks Caribbean Fire!!!

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Date: January 06 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Pearl is like the human version of the 'All seeing eye.' I like that woman. Why can't Alladin shake her hand? Too funny. I like it. For someone who says that there cannot be a realtionship between them Eshan is revealing a lot to Joss. That's good. I'm glad that they speak and are able to share who they really are with each other without the stress of having sex. Many times, relationships are based first on sex then speaking but when you don't know how to speak with someone to begin with, then it's diffucult to find a way to open and keep that line of communiction open. Well do. Loved this chapter.



Author's Response:

I agree.  Sex is lovely.  But if it's all that connects a couple, then there's no real, sustainable relationship.  As for Pearl, she is an unmitigated mess.  And there's more to come.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Caribbean Fire!    

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Date: January 02 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Pearl...you're my girl. Eshan, way to go with the bed. I absolutely agree. Hirah, get a grip. This is getting good.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you think so.  Thanks Caribbean Fire!

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Date: January 02 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Can I say that Siharih is a FOOL! IDIOT! How do you say idiot in Arabic? She's that. How could she possibly think that Chris wants her when he's coming on to Joss in front of her? Did I say idiot yet? And Joss, the only reason why he was there was to make sure she didn't got report him for attempted rape. She's being foolish. She should have reported him. Eshan, baby, I like the way you ask these questions and get your answers but Joss is right, what happens then. Good for you to give in Eshan...nice!



Author's Response:

Sahirah is an idiot and Joss, well, Joss is Joss.  And Eshan is tempting fate.  We'll see how that works for them.  Thanks Caribbean Fire!

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Date: January 02 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Okay now really want to see who's been leaving the notes. Also I like the relationship between Josh and Sahirah. But Sahirah really is very sneaky if she really was able to sleep with Chris with that Arabian chastity belt around. That's some serious sneaking around. I really want to know who is after her because it really does seem as if it is Chris and if Sahirah thinks that Chris is very going to be faithful to her then she is in lala land. She's an idiot to want to sleep around with him knowing that she's sleeping around with so many other men. Also she really put her friendship on the line asking Joss not to slee with him. I feel sad for Joss wishing and hoping that someone like Ethan would look at her but who knows what can happen in the future.



Author's Response:

Sahirah has a dead wish.  We'll see if who grants it for her.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Carribean Fire!

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Date: January 02 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

IT's him...OMG. I can't believe it. It's him. He's the one. LOL!!! Brilliant. I can't wait to see how he stays away from her. Brilliant.



Author's Response:

IF he can stay away...  Thanks Caribbean Fire!

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Date: January 02 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Okay Chris needs to be arrested. Why Joss thinks that what he did was okay because he ate some of Vic is beyond me. Joss, I need to slap you upside your head. Or better yet, where's the person named Pearl, the one who's DNA you just defiled by not slapping Chris upside his head? I do believe your mother would be very disappointed in you. And you had better answer that question...Oh spicy...



Author's Response:

Pearl would be disappointed and a defendant.  You soon see if Joss heeds your advice.  Thanks Caribbean Fire!

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Date: January 02 2014

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow! Now that is one very hot guy. Wall of muscles...yes, I handle that coming to my rescue okay...to Joss' rescue. That Chris is turd but I wonder if he is really leaving the messages for her but then why would he run after her the way he did. Somethings not right there. More to see



Author's Response:

You're right--something isn't right with Chris.  And you'll soon see what it is.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Caribbean Fire!

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02 2014

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Okay I know it's a trip to Spain a place I want to go but lady, you know how to end a story. This brought joy to me and for that I'm happy. Thank you so much. I really enjoyed reading. I love what  you did with Joss' character and that you took her on a journey around the world. That is so wonderful. I'm happy you didn't have her sit at home roaming around the house like the living dead. You gave Joss a realy life and made her a strong person who didn't compromise her integrity. Eshan, certianlly knows how to ask a woman to marry him. He's such a sweetheart. As for Hirah, yes, she deserves what she got. Have I said IDIOT yet about her? *SMH*.  Wonderful Joelle, I really enjoyed this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the lovely review, and for reading, Caribbean Fire!  As always, I enjoyed your insight.  And I'm so happy you enjoyed my little tale.

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Date: January 27 2014

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I stopped breathing for a moment there. She didn't? She really, really didn't. Hirah is such a slut...a wench. I have nothing to say. She's the type of friend that you forgive from a far and never look back to again. Joss and Eshan will find a way. Wonderful emotional chapter.



Author's Response:

Join the Sahirah lynch mob.  The members are many.  Poor Joss and Eshan. 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27 2014

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Joss, that was the best thing you've ever done for the both of them. Hirah is such a tramp and I still don't feel sorry for her. She did everything she could to be with this idiot and now is when she's realizing that he really doesn't want anything to do with her? Brain dead. And now she feels bad that she did what she did to Eshan, that may have caused him Joss? She is such a....if I was Eshan, I would disown her. Should be very easy. Joss, keep on moving. She was never your friend.



Author's Response:

Sahirah is painfully clueless and selfish.  And you're right, she was never a friend to Joss.  Chris was too much of a priority for that.  Eshan doesn't have to worry about punishing her with disownment.  Fate will take care of the punitives.  Thanks Caribbean Fire!

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Date: January 27 2014

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Have I said yet that I love Pearl? Well I do. That's a mother who loves her child if I ever did see one. I'm so happy that she is willing to allow Joss to explore the feelings she is having for Eshan and that Eshan, what a man, what a man, what a man? I do believe that's a Salt 'N Peppa song...back in my heathen days...LMAO. Well he is a MAN. Wow! To go to her mother and tell her how he feels about her daughter and for him to break his rules and follow the respectful ways of Joss' culture and take her out on a date after asking permission...tingling. I love it. I really, really do. This was so good. Very, very good. Wow!



Author's Response:

Between you and SWV Reunited, I'm having to dust off my greatest of the 90's collection. :D  Eshan definitely earned a serenade of What A Man.  I just love him.  Thanks Caribbean Fire!

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27 2014

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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91987
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Rotten Trees, What Fruit They Bear

There is nothing else to say but wow! to how you end a chapter. Damn that was good. Your charaters are so friging explosive. As exhausted as I am, I cannot help  but rub my eyes and keep on reading. Wow! This was such an marvelous chapter and your AMAZING ability to write this story from two different points of view separatey, but still show each person's reaction simultaneouly is simply 'The Best,' let me quote the amazing Tina Turner. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. I'm sorry Joelle, I cannot write you a review on the story or this chapter because I'm still in awe over the writing. Give me a day or so to get the grin off my face about this chapter. I'm hooked again. Bravo..



Author's Response:

I need to frame this review for those dark days when I'm feeling less than adequate.  Thank you, Caribbean Fire, for the amazing review and for making my day.  I REALLY appreciate it!

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Rotten Trees, What Fruit They Bear

Wow! It began as just revenge against the father, a man who didn't even want to acknowledge that he knew her much less that he was married to Nat and now she's pregnant for his son. This is very unexpected for everyone evolved but it was good that she told him as much as she knew there would be a chance that he wouldn't want to have anything to do with the baby.

Anthony now has really been the surprise and one that shows how mature he really is. But along with being mature, it's how honest he's being not only with himself but with her. He may not have much to offer in the sense of financial support but him being there is the best sort of beginning. They are both going to go through the discovery of learning about themselves and each other and then their futher. We are in for a wonderful ride with this story.



Author's Response:

The baby was very much unexpected.   But it's only the beginning of the surprises.  As always, I'm excited to have you along for this ride.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Caribbean Fire!!!

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Date: January 29 2014

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