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*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168947
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014


Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

No worries. Didn't notice any glaring errors. Just glad you got this second piece of the puzzle out so quickly. It was really sad what happened to his parents.

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Date: May 27 2014

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Sometimes when it comes to family and their issues, a lie is more acceptable than reality.

 

Acceptable Lies is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 93404
Read Count: 94661
Published: December 23 2011
Updated: January 19 2013


Title: Acceptable Lies

Oh my gosh! You just made Albert and Sugar the main plot. I really want to find out what happens with them. LOL! It is too funny! I hope your muse comes back.



Author's Response:

More is coming.  My muse is back, but I have three papers to redo for class.  So it may not be until sometime next week.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: bambi4real Signed
Date: November 18 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

Oh poor boy. And he doesn't even realize he is just like Franklin. I like Audrey and all but I have to say at this point I'm rooting for Sugar and Albert. Awesome chap can't wait for more.

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Date: November 23 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

FINALLY! The next chapter is out. I'm so glad your muse is back. This is the best Christmas present ever. Albert was brillant. For once I hope he gets away with all his scheming and Franklin gets what's coming to him in prison. I read this 6 times from beginning to end waiting for the update. Please don't wait as long next time to share your talent with us.

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Date: December 14 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

Yeah! Does a happy dance. I still don't like Rachelle she is as sleazy as her son for not doing the right thing. Awesome chapter!

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Date: December 15 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

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Date: December 27 2012

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William Lucas Kapori was a self-made millionaire. At 40 he had everything he ever wanted, a beautiful twenty something girlfriend, a luxurious mansion, and a job that he loved. His life was perfect, so why was he pursuing Ana Kay.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 52745
Read Count: 77979
Published: March 29 2012
Updated: April 10 2014


Title: Chapter 11: {Eleven}

really glad you were able to get this out. I have to say I was completely suprised when I saw this was updated on here. I really like this story and can't wait for more.

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Date: April 04 2014

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Summary:

Carmen Shelly preyed on married men and usually won her sought after prize. Business is booming until her partner sets his sights on her single sister.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41535
Read Count: 39598
Published: July 29 2012
Updated: February 28 2016


Title: Chapter 8: Seven- Going off the deep end

Great so far.

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Date: March 21 2013

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Summary:

When recent college grad, Lily Taylor became the personal paralegal to the notorious lawyer of the stars, Aiden Hawkins, she never knew that she would have her hands tied with him...literally.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 66387
Read Count: 66266
Published: October 03 2012
Updated: July 30 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Rumor Has It

I think the first encounter was good. You did really well withthe scene. Can't say I like alex but then there may be a bit of VD bias bleeding in. I hope that Aiden pops her cherry before Alex can get to her otherwise she may never recover form the betrayal considering her childhood.



Author's Response:

thank you! i can't wait to get started with writing the next chapters! 

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Date: October 21 2012

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Summary:

31 year old self-made millionaire Dean DuPont has only one weakness--his wife Charlotte.  There is nothing he wouldn't do for her.

Nothing.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 21048
Read Count: 20101
Published: December 16 2012
Updated: January 02 2013


Title: Chapter 1: One

This is a promising start. I am intrigued. I don't like lesbian fiction and this has the shapings of one. I hope the story line of Dean and Kai over ride the Charlotte wants to experiment one.

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Date: December 17 2012

Title: Chapter 2: Two

That was to be expected. Charlotte is a bit of a selfish cow.

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Date: December 18 2012

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Summary:

Dr. Tyler Elijah Lenz Solomon Weber is a psychologist who works as the head of Human resources at a law firm. His life seems to be perfect. Not only he has the perfect job but he also is a visiting professor in many Universities for his innovitaive research in developmental psychology. He has a fiancée, Alexandra, who loves him unconditionatly.
However, under the surface lays a man that has been affected by his life experiences and cannot fully trust others. This is his story, and that of Alexandra, and Lucas, the man Tyler fears will take his woman away from him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 49503
Read Count: 16668
Published: December 26 2012
Updated: February 21 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Against the Odds

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Date: December 26 2012

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53943
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Deception

WOW! It has been forever since I saw this story updated I almost thought I was hallucinating or we were getting a notice that it had been taken down. The Ophelia lives twist is definitely unexpected. I certainly am glad she survived. I was certain she died and the idea that she was kidnapped seems a bit farfetched. But then again this is fantasy so dream on!

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Date: September 03 2014

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Summary:

What's a girl to do when there are two after you? 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Threesome+
Challenges: Give Me a Mountain Man Anyday!
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 6583
Read Count: 43887
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: July 13 2015


Title: The McRyan Brothers

It was an unexpected twist for me. I do not under stand the paragraph where Casey says "Does...this...." and Hayes responds. What are they talking about? Does what? and what will Casey always be?

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Date: September 21 2013

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Brody has been in love with his best friend Jordan for years. Technically she is bi sexual so he is hoping he has a shot. She's only dated women since forever so the shots in hell but he is willing to take it. Because he has 2 weeks to get her to give them a chance at being more than friends. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Homosexuality, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 11584
Read Count: 4558
Published: January 13 2014
Updated: June 11 2019


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm not sure where you are going with this but so far it is interesting. I haven't seen anything like it on here before. I certainly didn't think it was a lesbian story much less that the homosexuality was ongoing in the story with names like Jordan and Brody otherwise my own prejudices and bias would probably have kept me from even reading the first chapter.

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Date: February 05 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think it's worth finishing.

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Date: June 25 2014

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Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143262
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015


Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I read this in one go and have to say that I had the dubious pleasure of reading all your author's notes in succession. I wanted to read this earlier but due to my schedule and the length of the story I felt I was too far behind to ever start. Having read it I have to say I really like the story. I think it has enough story line and sex scenes to statisfy erotica as I believe you are going for. The endless whining and supplication for reviews at the end of chapters though could be reduced. I find that people tend ot review when they have time and the mood takes them or something particularly powerful engages them in a chapter or storyline. You can not force it out of them otherwise you will get crap feedback.

The characterizations are great and I think that you ahve take the necesary time to develop each in their own right. I wouldn't speed up the story any because I think the flashbacks and self doubt scenes offer necessary insights. I don't like Kirk as I believe his character was intended to be skeazy and Steve I am still on the fence about. I didn't realize Jodi was 42 which puts all the characters in my opinion in midlife crisis range explaining their nigh schizophrenic behaviour. At times they appear like hormonal teenagers and others mature business people. Jodi has to be the most frustrating character for me though. I want to empathize with her but I feel she does bring a lot of her life's woe on herself. At so many points in her life people want to help her and she rejects that help to suffer in not quite silence. If she came from a broken or underprivileged home where she didn't understand her self worth or people did not care about her welbeing I could understand her reaction to Kirk's abuse and her continued silence even to the detriment of her relationship with her fiance and her family. I have a ningling feeling that Dan is the next one to take advantage of her because she will let him and wonder if it is her fate to be abused. She accepts her victimization she readily it is a bit disgusting. You almost want to slap her and tell her to man up!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments...You will often people in their 30s, 40s and 50s that behave like these characters. Midlife crisis? Probably, but it occurs nevertheless.

Their behavior, especially if they are single, may mirror what I have written in these chapters. A person who comes from money can have the same problems as someone without money.

I hope that I am not misinterpreting one of your comments, but emotional issues aren't based upon one's socioeconomic background.

Thanks again for taking time to...I want the readers to know that I like the interaction - if it's whining, then oh well! LOL!

 

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Date: June 23 2014

Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Prostate cancer...can't say I saw that coming. Then again at his age that was a very real possibility. I would have thought he would have some sexually transmitted disease first though considering how prolific he was at a time when safe sex wasn't really the norm.

I hope Ed gets his protection duties right this time and doesn't allow his sister to push him out the door for her abuser to have free reign.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment, bambi4real! Yes, Kirk has a lot in store!

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Date: June 25 2014

Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

So he was himself abused and is perpetuating the cycle of abuse.....



Author's Response:

Yes, but this is still no excuse for him. He abused Jodi on his own free will.

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Date: June 26 2014

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Summary:

In the small southern town of Perry, Mississippi, an unlikely pair get much more than they bargained for when they fall madly in love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 24408
Read Count: 54408
Published: April 27 2014
Updated: November 27 2014


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

That was unexpected.

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Date: September 04 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Oh gosh she really meant it when she said she wasn't that kind of girl! To wait that long to loose her virginity then to loose it on the livingroom floor with no prep...poor thing. He better make it up to her. I am liking this story so far. I think you have a lot of hanging possibilities and would like to see where you go with them if anywhere. Pissed off women in hick towns can be dangerous to a courtin' man.

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Date: June 25 2014

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