Penname: monsgors [Contact]

Real name: Elise

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*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168958
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014


Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

So. My emotions are running full speed. Karma better be a bitch to those people. More, please?

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Date: May 31 2014

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Summary:

 

 

Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 127254
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3...Part I

Wait...so Coco and Aunt Loose Booty are half-sisters through their daddy?

Reviewer: monsgors Signed
Date: July 05 2013

Title: ME&U

Yes. It all makes sense now! :)

Reviewer: monsgors Signed
Date: July 05 2013

Title: ME&U

WOAHWOWWOAH. 

uh...plot twist? holy shit. LOVE IT.

Reviewer: monsgors Signed
Date: July 06 2013

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Summary:

mother of the heir

 

"My ascension to Hell is far from what you're after; the birth of the End of Days is hardly suited for the faint of heart. Even if it was my fate from a life before this one. No one teahes you how to trust yourself in times of uncertainty. Nor do they warn you about the power of your own vulnerability. The worst part is knowing too late that you're never whole until a vampire has consumed you into the absolute darkness."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Horror
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 73939
Read Count: 19270
Published: January 27 2012
Updated: May 11 2018


Title: Chapter 8: FOUR : The Fallacy of Fear

I like the dialogue in this chapter, especially because it makes the relationships more clearer and Nef was given more agency instead of just cataloging whats going on around her. Sometimes when authors go too in depth with the atmosphere I loose my connection to the characters and their actions. Also, it helps distinguish tones between Nefs more introspective POV and the 3rd person, its a nice comparison to have.  



Author's Response:

THIS IS WHAT I WAS LOOKING FOR! Much mahalo, my honey! I'm much like you in that I often find detailed conveying of the setting a distraction from what's actually being said, much less the tone set by the dialogue. I'm relieved that the arrangement paid off a little. 

 

Thanks for taking the time to read and give feedback, doll!

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Date: November 06 2016

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Summary:

“A mighty pain to love it is,
And 'tis a pain that pain to miss;
But of all pains, the greatest pain
It is to love, but love in vain.”



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 28555
Read Count: 11890
Published: April 01 2013
Updated: August 15 2023


Title: Chapter 6: Instant Gratification

Good Lawrd. The sexual tension was worth it. I can't wait to see what happens, Charley is such an interesting character. 

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Date: March 05 2014

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Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287515
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 24 pt 1

UGH I JUST REREAD THIS PLZ COME BACK.

I know you're busy, but if I fall anymore in love with this book I might be on Maury talking about *cue Maury angles*  "Unguarded" has two children that are 500% his. 

 

Is it too weird that I made the book a him? Cause that's how much I love it...

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Date: April 20 2015

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 20

I AMMM BAWLING GOOD LAWRDS.

This character dev is too good and the bittersweet-ness is crushing my lungs. 

good lawrd. Although the cheesiness is there, it's not overbaring in the face of Hen & Vals problems...speaking of which, when is Val gonna confess anything???

I must keep reading. 

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Date: January 04 2015

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 23

Honestly, I know Henry has problems as well, but I feel like all Val does is hop in to comfort him. Like every time they are apart she changes but he is still hung up on her not going anywhere. Is this because of his ego and confidence? Where does he go, I feel like he is tooooo careless when it comes to giving her what she/they wants.

ugh Romance...so good. Good chapter!

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Date: January 04 2015

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 24 pt 2

Amazzzzing as always!

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Date: September 18 2015

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Summary:

College student Rory Daniels has a problem, and it isn’t how she’s going to pass her final exams.

You see, she can do this thing where she can manipulate objects… and other things, and as far as she knows she’s the only one who can. So when she’s forced to use her powers at a crowded bookstore and attracts the attention of a fellow student, she’s anything but happy about it. When it turns out the student has no interest in turning her over to the government and actually wants, of all things, a double date, she’s pleasantly surprised. That is, until her date ditches her for her friend and she ends up stuck with his.

His friend turns out to be Victor Ryken. He’s tall. Built like a Greek god and has a set of the most memorizing hazel eyes Rory’s ever seen. And, oh yeah, he does nothing but infuriate her. After the date from hell, Vic has for some reason taken an increased interest in her and what’s worse… her powers light up every time he touches her. When Vic’s around her abilities go haywire and his presence marks the beginning of a string of unusual events. Suddenly, she’s become a person of interest to nearly everyone she meets and strange people pop up in her life that have her question her own weirdness. When Vic himself displays a whole new level of weird while saving her from an attacker, Rory ends up concluding one thing. 

Maybe she’s not as alone as she thinks.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 126441
Read Count: 55753
Published: August 22 2013
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 37

This was such a kick-ass book! Rory is totally frustrating sometimes, especially cause even when she's wrong it turns out right, but I let it go because her and Vic r q.d. pies. You are really good at writing the action in, and I can't help but think this is the better version of x-men. I kinda wonder if another heroine will come in and steal her spotlight, because she can't be the only one capable of next level shit, right?

 

On to track the sequel! 

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Date: March 08 2014

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Formally Ashes, Ashes

Red flashing lights…

Heavy footsteps echoed through the deserted hallway.

Fire alarms blared...

Breaths lodged in throats as the search for survival worsened.

Pungent smell of death overwhelmed as the Z’s closed in...

Survival was futile now, running was the only escape; in this new apocalyptic post war world, living was no longer guaranteed.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Horror
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 6
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 65447
Read Count: 77311
Published: October 12 2013
Updated: June 05 2014


Title: Chapter 16: The Way Out

ohhhhh shit. Great writing! 

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Date: April 18 2014

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Summary:

Five years ago, Breezy Collins, left Baton Rouge, Louisiana and vanished without a trace leaving everything and everyone behind in order to save herself from further heartbreak from the only man she has ever loved. Breezy's sister Phoenix is the only person who knows her whereabouts but not her secrets. It's her sister's wedding that brings her back home for a week. She can only hope that she can avoid running into the man that still haunts her dreams and owns her heart.

Jace Bennett, has spent the last five years searching for something that he knows doesn't exist anymore. His Heart. He's colder and more distant. All the things that use to give him joy now only bring him misery because of her but a promise is a promise and he'll uphold his end of it no matter the cost. But when a chance encounter brings him face to face with the one woman who holds the key to his happiness, he'll do everything in his power to ensure that she never leaves him again. By any means necessary, he'll try to convince her to give him Just One More Try.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19790
Read Count: 43832
Published: May 20 2014
Updated: September 13 2014


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

There is a puddle on the ground. It's my heart. 

This chapter has melted my heart. 

I can't stand the cuteness. 

Can't wait till the next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with me. You guys are awesome.  I'm trying to get back on track. They are getting to know each other again. It's going to take some time but he's slowly wearing her down. 

New update next week well actually this week since today is Sunday. LOL! !

Thanks for reading and leaving a review.  

Much Love,

Yevette 

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Date: September 14 2014

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Summary:

Not everyone gets a happy ending...

Hey guys,

Heart of Lies Book 1&2 have now been published under one of my pennames Alma Muerte.

FB Author page: Alma Muerte.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2951
Read Count: 32556
Published: January 27 2015
Updated: September 10 2015


Title: Heart of Lies

I feel like Lyssa hating the vampiric side of herself is not going to bode well for her...ever. She needs to come to terms with it and embrace it, or else she'll never be mentally strong enough. I hope we get to see that later on! 

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Date: July 22 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

is this coming back! AHHHHH. i was so in love with it before

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Date: October 07 2016

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Summary:

Bağlılık, the gem of southeast Europe. At its center is Putra a city as bright as the sun with secrets as dark as its shadows. Daniel Winters comes to study and finds herself linked to one of Putras most distinguished families. A link that will challenge her beliefs, shatter her dreams and give her insurmountable hope.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 25007
Read Count: 39120
Published: August 31 2015
Updated: October 06 2015


Title: Chapter 7: Reprimand

I think this is a AU, because it's not complete fantasy. She and I would probably have the same reaction.



Author's Response:

I'm getting mixed reviews on this, but thanks for your opinion. I might change it. I appreciate you taking the time monsgors! ^^

Reviewer: monsgors Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16 2015

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Summary:

Coming home can be harder than staying away sometimes.

Home has now been published on Amazon and there's quite a bit more added from where I had originally ended this story. Hope you all enjoy it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 21
Read Count: 18591
Published: June 10 2016
Updated: October 06 2016


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Shit I completely thought Alec would listen to her at least a little about the Sean thing. I had no idea he would be such a nob. Hopefully in this last chapter, someone realizes something! Either way I am here for this. :)

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Date: August 30 2016

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Summary:

 

Emmeline Carson always had a crush on Jason Bryant, but feelings would eventually change, when she became involved with his best friend. When her heart is broken, she swore off anyone who had ties to her ex—including Jason. Yet, a chance meeting leads to an embroiled love affair that is kept secret and locked away inside each other’s respective bedrooms. And although Jason and Emmeline have their own secrets, they will soon find out they aren’t the only ones.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 68048
Read Count: 13846
Published: September 08 2017
Updated: April 16 2021


Title: Chapter 7: Reunion

HOMGAWD. The. Tension. Can't wait to see what they do next! Also Jase and Emmy are like all Fire and Freak, which is hot, but I'm concerned that it's gonna burn out soon. Brendan is creepy, but I'm concerned he's gonna be the one to douse the fire. The whole convincing thing brought a turn to my stomach like "'You're mine!'"

 

P.s. Michael needs to drop it. 

Reviewer: monsgors Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23 2018

Title: Chapter 8: Hidden and Revealed

OMG. Well I feel like Emmaline and Jason are loving on a prayer TBH. The way they interact is not the most reassuring that they have the strong emtional ties they say they do, and still seems like puppy love/lust. Espcially as Jasons tryna talk about his "wife" one second and then calling her a jealous bitch the next. Plus  ...I think what would reassure me is if he confronts Michael and Alyssa for telling lies on Emmy and Emmy confronts Emily or Brendan.

 

And where is Michael???! Why is he so angry over a woman he was "glad" to have cheated on???? Is it just GP, cause he's acting as if it isn't. Why are they being soooooo shadddyyyy? Everyone has an agenda and I' not here for it. Please I'm hanging on for the next update. 

Reviewer: monsgors Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 23 2018

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: An Unforeseen Event

ON HIMSELF??? Does it have to do with Emmy? OMG Brendan is a POS. I hope he is not the child. 

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Date: April 18 2021

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Summary:

Ethan West has never been one to control his wolf, he let his instincts rule and they never failed him. Until his wolf insisted on marking Mia Kane as his mate. Maybe it wouldn't have been so bad if Mia wasn't a human. Ethan despised humans and taking one as a mate was the last thing he wanted to do.

Mia Kane should be living her best life, her music career took off, she won a Grammy for best new artist and she was selling out arenas all over the world. Life was perfect except for the fact that she tragically lost her family in an accident the night of the awards show. When the whirlwind was over her best friend and manager Elizabeth Jones forces her to take some down time at her parent's bed and breakfast. When Ethan shifts and bites her, her life takes an unexpected turn for the worst.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 28478
Read Count: 66885
Published: January 22 2018
Updated: July 08 2019


Title: Chapter 10: Life of Leisure

GET HER GROOVE BACK. She needs major tlc from a rudeboi

Reviewer: monsgors Signed
Date: August 28 2018

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Summary:

Who knew that one night to a Rock concert would be the beginning to hell on earth for Angel. A night out on a day off one Friday night changed life as she knew it forever. There's two sides to every story, she just so happend to be his begining and his ending. A rockstars paradise, he would end everything and everyone who stands in the way of his peace.

 

This is a supernatural story about drugs, sex, money and rock and roll. Meet the band, meet the girl, meet the family and discover nothing is ever as it seems.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 30073
Read Count: 35458
Published: May 21 2020
Updated: January 01 2021


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:Enjoy The Show

okay, but know i need to know how this develops

Reviewer: monsgors Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 26 2020

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Summary:

New story



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 50846
Read Count: 3786
Published: October 17 2020
Updated: November 21 2020


Title: Forget Me Not

oh mannnn. Damn, I am getting more and more nervious about her being pregnant with this man in the house that obviously doesnt care about her. Like can she go stay with Leigh for a bit? or just have him leave? 

Im having a hard time trying to figure out what is old Jared vs possible behavioral change fromt he accident. Like he obivously needs to just go home and figure himself outtttt

Reviewer: monsgors Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 27 2020

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.