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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 99]
Summary:

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Could she not comprehend that he had a reckoning to deliver?

The Fire Rises



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Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: General, Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 39404
Read Count: 34837
Published: April 09 2013
Updated: August 26 2016


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I am so glad that you updated this story. I've read it many times since your last update. I wonder what Nyssa is up to and what chemical was in the pool to aid in Nem's improvement. I hope the nurse let's Bane know what's ahppened in his absence. Update ASAP...please.

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Date: December 07 2015

Retired
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287718
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 23

Henry, I live him and really want him and Val to end up together. She has a huge breakthrough with admitting everything that happened with that other jerk. I can see why he is defensive of her. She really needs to stand up to her father about evening in her life and how he has a huge impact on her development into the person she is. However, I know it'll take her a while until to get to that point, but with Henry by  her side I think it will be dinner rather than later. It makes me sad that they didn't the months apart. I'm glad Henry contacted her when his father passed away. Hopefully, Val can help him get through this. This is one more situation that will help them grow together. Maybe, just maybe Val well be able to talk with her dad after this. Update soon.

 

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: December 25 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

It takes a strong, confident woman to allow a man to take the lead. It takes an even stronger man to be able to take her where she needs to go.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15313
Read Count: 7268
Published: August 15 2013
Updated: November 28 2013


Title: Chapter 5: Interlude 2a - The Salsa

Uh oh. Dinah is in a world of trouble. Oliver is going to put it down on the dance floor and turn his swag meter up. I already need a bottle of water for what is about to happen. Watch out Dinah, the man is sex on two feet. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I'll be sure not to disappoint :)

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Date: November 26 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Interlude 1 - The Cha Cha

Love it. Both men want her...let the competition begin.



Author's Response:

Thank you! With Mac in the picture, maybe Oliver will get rid of that stick up his butt..lol

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Date: August 17 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Interlude 2b - The Salsa

Please update soon. I love Dinah and Oliver. I can't wait until the chemistry eXplodes between the two of them.



Author's Response:

Sorry about that... I lost my USB and was unable to work on any of my stories. Now that I've found it, I have a lot of work to make up! Please stay tuned, I haven't givien up or forgotten :)

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: September 06 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 277]
Summary:

Lance was a man who had it all and lost it all. He was down and out and was ready to give up because he had nothing to live for. Nina was a woman who had enough of being used and was trying to start her life over in a new city. When these two meet will Lance have something to live for? Or will he continue to live in misery. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 40637
Read Count: 72031
Published: December 09 2013
Updated: July 06 2015


Title: Chapter 24: Second Chances

I am really missing Nina, Lance, Baby and the rest of the crew. I hope Else and jameson pop up toward the end of this story. Please, please update soon

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Date: April 12 2015

Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

How did I miss this epilogue? I read the last chapter about the nursery and it looks like my friend'friend's baby'baby's room - Gray and pink.  I am sooooooooo happy for them.  I absolutely love Nina and Lance and baby Ellie.  I can't wait to see what happens next with them and their wedding. I'm excited for Clark and Jameson' s stories as well.

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Date: July 09 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Routine

Everyone has a story and I am eager to know Lance's. I love how even though everyone goes on about their business during the day, ignores him and sees Lance as nothing, he always has something to look forward with Nina. I can't wait to see where you take this story. I am intrigued.

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Date: December 10 2013

Title: Chapter 17: In Ten

I'm so happy for them!!! Frank is going to try and bust up their love connection or possibly even hurting Nina to get back at Lance for his daughter dying. If something does happen to Nina, all hell is going to break loose and Lance will put a hurting (financially, physically, etc) on Frank. I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Update soon so I can get my Lance and Nina fix.

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Date: September 06 2014

Title: Chapter 21: Plan B

Frank is crazy, but Lance is a tad bit crazier since Nina has been taken. Once Nina is rescued, she will probably be extremely.pissed off that Lance didn't tell her about this side of himself and this secret room. If this is the.same Jameson from Sugar Baby, Elise should be wondering where Jameson is going Jamie is going all the time. Especially since they just started really delving into their feelings for.each other and a relationship. Frank blew that building up, so the cops and/or firefighters should be investigating the situation. Hopefully, Nina can stay strong and figure out a way that hurt Frank, even if it's temporary, unril Lance and his friends can come get her.

 

I bet Lance has some type of tracking device on Frank, so he will be able to find him quickly, but  I dont doubt that he will have a few bodyguards for protection,  but I'm sure Lance's friends will have a way to incapacitate them so Lance can get to.his.woman quickly. Update soon. Oh how.I love that Lance, but this makes me love him even more.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: December 23 2014

Title: Chapter 22: Not Worth It

You truck my socks off. I shouldn't be shocked that Frank killed his daughter, but I am, even more that HE killed his grandson  because of his daughter choosing to marry Lance. He killed two innocent people, who were family. Of one of his henchmen didn't kill Frank, I hope then fun in Lance's hand at least accidentally went off and shot Frank in the knee cap and then he can rot in prison. Those on the inside don't like people who hurt women and children. I hope the story isn't coming to an end soon. If it does, I hope these two show up in Jameson and Elise's story. Is their other friend going to get a story? I can't recall his name at the moment.

 

Thank you for making part of this 17 hour road trip a little bit better only 3 hours in.

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Date: December 27 2014

Title: Chapter 22: Not Worth It

You truck my socks off. I shouldn't be shocked that Frank killed his daughter, but I am, even more that HE killed his grandson  because of his daughter choosing to marry Lance. He killed two innocent people, who were family. Of one of his henchmen didn't kill Frank, I hope then fun in Lance's hand at least accidentally went off and shot Frank in the knee cap and then he can rot in prison. Those on the inside don't like people who hurt women and children. I hope the story isn't coming to an end soon. If it does, I hope these two show up in Jameson and Elise's story. Is their other friend going to get a story? I can't recall his name at the moment.

 

Thank you for making part of this 17 hour road trip a little bit better only 3 hours in.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Clark is the other friend and I'm thinking about having his story next year. Hopefully.

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Date: December 27 2014

Title: Chapter 22: Not Worth It

Lance and Nina had better survive or else I'm going to start going RHONJ & RHOA and start flipping tables and pulling wig-weaves. Update soon so it doesn't have to get to that level. Please and thank you.

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Date: January 09 2015

Title: Chapter 23: Shots and Surprises

Thank you thank you. I've read this three times on the way home. Don't worry, I'm not driving, so no tables will be flipped. I'm glad Lance finished him off. I feel bad for Clark because he's still going to carry the guilt of getting Nina shot for a while. I bet he'll isolate himself and will need a good woman to cheer him up. Since Lance is taken, I can bet that woman :) it makes me wonder what he did in his past life to get an excellent shot off to get Frank in the first place. Great update. Lance better shackle Nina down with a quickness now that baby is on the way. Great update!!!  You have made me some this cold, winter weekend. Sorry for any errors I'm not good a Swype texting from my phone.

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Date: January 10 2015

Title: Chapter 23: Shots and Surprises

Please update! I need to know about the baby, Clark, Nina and Lance. Hurrry and update puhleeeeeeeease.

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Date: February 04 2015

Title: Chapter 23: Shots and Surprises

In the words of Jodeci"

"I can't leave you alone.You got me feenin.Feenin you got me feenin.Got me goin crazy. I can't leave you alone. You got me feenin. [Lance] i'm feenin for you."    Update soonest.

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Date: February 22 2015

Title: Chapter 24: Second Chances

I'm ecstatic that Nina put her foot down and glad they experienced this. While I'm happy they talked it out, I think they need to see a professional about the situation that has occurred just to make sure they can put this behind them and neither one will resent the other. Lovely update :) The feenin' beast has been satisfied...for now.

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Date: February 25 2015

Title: Chapter 25:

Thank you thank you thank you!!! I'm so glad to see Lance and Nina are back...with baby girl in tow. Are Lance and Nina going to meet Elise and Jameson? I can't wait!! Hopefully, Clark will pop up too. This is so exciting. I'm eagerly awaiting on pins and needles. That sneaky Lance setting up a spa day for Nina to relax before going out. I absolutely love him (and her, but mostly him). Please don't leave me hanging I cannot WAIT, even though I have to, for the next update. 

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Date: May 23 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 76]
Summary:

 

British Mogul, Sir Benjamin Harvey Nichols VI has always gotten everything he wanted out of life. He worked hard and played hard. He lived in a world of celebrities, models, and money. However, a series of tragic events has him re-evaluating his priorities. When fate serves him a cup, which will he choose?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 14759
Read Count: 17240
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: January 25 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I want Jasmine with Edward or they become best friends/partners in crime. Good for her going in with what she wanted and setting clear boundaries. It is easy to get walked on being a babysitter or nanny. Can't wait for the next update!

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Date: January 16 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I need an update on this story. It's so good. I hope Ben ships Stacy off somewhere where she isn't needed or can't be found.

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Date: November 25 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34240
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

I love this story. I hope these two go.over the prenup papers and.talk more about Rich before everything starts to get extremely crazy with the wedding and Griffin's career taking off even more. Update soon and.I.shall read it :)

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: December 23 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

I hope Roxie makes her voice known and gets into the business deals that Rich and Mickey are setting up for Griffin. If she doesn't they will lie, cheat, manipulate and steal from him and make Roxie look like that "bad guy" in this situation. 

Oh wow, shame on your Roxie for not telling your Pops. I know you're not on the best terms with him, but dang. I figure if she's grown enough to get engaged, she's grown enough to at least tell him she's getting married and Pops should respect her decision if she wants him involved or not. Just my two cents. 

I love Troy and that beach. Can I have them? Update soon.

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Date: December 24 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Good got Roxie going to stay with her dad, but damn she could've let Griff, Gram, Brody...someone know she was leaving and she needed some time to herself. Griffin needs to het rid of those two douches he has working for.him before he loses Rox for good. I bet they're excited she's gone. Honestly, Roxie needs to work on herself and relationship with her dad before marrying Griffin. All issues she has will follow her into the marriage. Fantastic update. I'm glad that Clare contacted Griff to let him know Roxie is safe. I can't wait until Roxie's perspective.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: February 11 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 519]
Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111869
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017


Title: Chapter 24: New Friends

Elise, sweetheart, did you have friends before Jameson? Nina is awesome and hopefully, they'll be talking or getting together more often , even if it's going over to Nina's house once she has the baby, without their men. She truly does need a few good friends and not the ones from the hospital. My fingers are crossed that she'll meet Clark's woman soon. I'm glad she's communicating with Jameson more. Have these two considered going to counseling together if they're really trying to have a go at it? I know Jamie will try to solve all of her problems, but she needs to make her voice known and more often. Lovely update. Update soon and enjoy the holidays!!

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: December 24 2015

Title: Chapter 21: Breakdowns

Jamie, Jamie, Jamie. I love you, but dang you should've realized when you and Elise declared your feelings/affections/love for each other things in the contract needed to be revised, or even trashed, since it was no longer about appearances. Elise has grown by leaps and bounds and Jamie has grown but at a slower pace. I feel bad for Elise for everything that's going on at the hospital. It's tough to be in a work or school environment where you can't open up to your peers or co-workers for fear of them talking about you. To not have your supervisor support you as well, makes it even worse. Hopefully, her residency rotation at this hospital is almost over. I hope whatever Jamie's mom said to her were words of encouragement that will help her get through these tough times. I want Jamie to have a talk with Clark and Lance  with Nina hearing it so she can talk some sense into him about Elise. Great chapter!! 

I'm going to need an update on Clark soon!! I love him almost as much as Lance :)

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Date: July 27 2015

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