Penname: Tabitha Kumwembe [Contact]

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Member Since: June 17 2014

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[Reviews - 481]
Summary:

 

The Scar

 

The Scar on her face....could never match the one on her heart. 

 

Kick ass Banner by the great Valhalla!! 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 53873
Read Count: 66794
Published: February 14 2011
Updated: June 28 2017


Title: Chapter 3: The Bluest Eye

OMG!This is waaaaaaaay to sad. I hate them all except Emma of course. Poor girl. Shame man!

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: February 13 2017

Title: Chapter 3: The Bluest Eye

Jeremy needs to die!!!!!

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: February 13 2017

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 76]
Summary:

For long as she can remember, Mika's life revolved around work and home until her research into the Ozuno clan changed her world forever. A ninja assassin named Raizo unexpectedly entered her life then quickly disappeared. Could a new assignment bring about his return?

Disclaimer:

All publicly recognized characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The plot is the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Rain-licious
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 38881
Read Count: 23687
Published: October 26 2011
Updated: October 01 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow all that sexual tension.  Wow thsee two are a hot couple.  Raizo is a gentleman.

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: March 29 2016

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Really,  really like really enjoying this story to the max. My only wish was that Mike shared that piece of information with her boss soon  and the find those children. Great update

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: March 29 2016

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Mika and Raizo are just waaaaay tooooo cute. I like how they finally admitted that they have feelings for one another. It was much needed between the two of them. Reading this makes me wish they actually made a sequel with this story as a script.  That would be amazing!!!! 

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: March 29 2016

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, just wow. I'm really blown away. Thank you for taking the time for actually writingthe second part of this story. I feel like now I am piece with this movie and I have u to thank for that. The ending was beautiful! Kudos to you for writing this story.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you Freshbreath and sorry that my response is like a year late!!!! I'm barely on the site these days and life keeps getting in the way of my but I apologize because its fans like you that we depend upon to not only read our stories but taking time out to leave reviews! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: March 29 2016

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Of they are going to meet at meet at Mr. Kim party. Very exciting. I wonder how they will react when the see each other.love this couple😯😄😄

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: March 29 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I remember this movie. I loved it. It was really good. So excited to see what you have in store  for this plot line. Oh and I hope they kiss here lol, cuz I don't recall them doing so in the movie....lol. Great start, looking forward to continuing this fanfic!!!!

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: March 28 2016

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[Reviews - 731]
Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 105970
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

OMG. THE FIRST CHAPTER REALLY GOT TO ME. I LOVE IT.what jayday did to tam was really harsh. Hope he makes it up to her in the best way. What a jerk.

LOVE THE STORY SO FAR!!! 

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: October 16 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 67]
Summary:

I never said I was the  good guy. I'm nobody's hero.

 

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 15545
Read Count: 7950
Published: May 11 2013
Updated: June 08 2014


Title: Chapter 3: 2 weeks

DAAYYYYYYYUUMMMMMM. THIS IS A VERY SEXY COUPLE EY. SO DAM SExy. Alicia and Morgan are smoking hot and crazy to which makes the story interesting : and very spicey)

I enjoyed this story more then I thought I would. From chapter 1 it immediately captured my attention. Seeing the abuse he had to see as a little boy has affected him and I believe it will affect his relationship with Alicia. They already said I love u. This should be interesting hehe.

WATEVER U DO SON, UPDATE THIS STORY BECAUSE I WILL BE SO MAD AT YOU. PLEASE. I LOVE IT. DONT LEAVE A GIRL HAnging.

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: October 27 2014

Title: Chapter 3: 2 weeks

(in a singing voice.)

 

AMAZING STORY!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: October 27 2014

Title: Chapter 3: 2 weeks

(in a singing voice.)

 

AMAZING STORY!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: October 27 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Jonah Ace gets a bright idea and offers to tutor Chanel Birladeanu in AP Calculus one afternoon. But there's a catch; for two months, Chanel has to 'fake date'  Jonah. This deal will get Chanel the grade she needs and give Jonah the girl he yearns for and the popularity he can only dream about.

But this isn't so bad. A full school year of tutoring for only a two month relationship? Easy. Plus, Jonah Ace might just be a real hottie underneath his nerdy exterior.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Books
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 8215
Read Count: 5151
Published: October 04 2014
Updated: October 04 2014


Title: Chapter 1: I

HEY!!! Think this is pretty interesting :) and I think u should definitely continue writing this. It has a lot of potential.

I think u should continue writing this. Sometimes its gotta be the other way around, its gets tiring to hear about bad boy popular boy who gets to sleep with anybody he wants with cute innocent perfect girl. At times u gotta switch it up make it different which of course brings in creativity.Right the story the way you envision ed it in your mind because that's the only way you'll enjoy writing this story. Don't let anything deter u, write this story the way u pictured it.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I'll definitely be writing the story the way I envision it going. You don't have to tell me twice lmao :D. Thanks for reading and giving me a boost of confidence.

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: October 05 2014

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

 

Another Tangie story celebrating the couple who inspired me to begin writing fanfic. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:Yes
Word count: 25172
Read Count: 22065
Published: May 31 2015
Updated: December 22 2015


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OMG! !!I'm so glad that they were able to resolve their issues! I would have been devasted if they didn't. They deserve happiness forever and ever and ever to eternity. Good writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey FreshBreath,

To see that you wrote this review so long ago and it just showed up in my email - it would have reached faster by mail LOL!!!

Thanks for enjoying. Yeah my babies deserve all the love and happiness even if they have to go through conflicts and stubborness :) Again thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: March 28 2016

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Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

Isabella "Izzy" Salvatore is just like any other first grader who likes to draw and color pictures and is living the happy carefree days of childhood. However some of Izzy's drawings are not so happy and carefree some are just really dark and twisted.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 27153
Read Count: 6964
Published: February 07 2016
Updated: November 26 2016


Title: Chapter 3: THE MONSTER'S GRIN

Regina is A DISGUSTING MOTHER. I HOPE SHE GETS WHAT IS COMING TO HER. Some people don't deserve to be mothers!!! Is she that lazy that she would let the landlord slept with her child for rent? What a b*tch!!! I will destroy her!!!

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: February 14 2016

Title: Chapter 5: HIS HEART

I like this chapter. Dude is about to get his butt whooped!!!

Reviewer: FreshBreath Signed
Date: February 24 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.