Penname: Jaye Sims [Contact]

Real name: Janine Aiken

Member Since: March 04 2015

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Avid reader, sometimes frustrated writer (lol).  Mother to the most fantastic 19 year old boy (man? man-child?) anyone could ask for.  Newly transplanted resident of the great state of Georgia.




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[Reviews - 162]
Summary:

 

Shonti Brown, Chicago socialite and events/party blogger, is stuck in Hohenwald, TN due to her late grandfather’s, a man she barely knew, unusual stipulation of her having to stay two weeks on her newly inherited farm if she wanted to keep the farm in the family or the other partner, Richard Vaughn, would get full ownership of the farm.  Shonti goes through an emotional roller coaster as she tries to cope with living in the shadow of her late grandfather and falling in love, reluctantly, with Richard.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 39734
Read Count: 65821
Published: June 08 2012
Updated: June 25 2018


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Whooo chile,  I hope Ms. Shonti's attitude improves soon.  Right now, I can't muster up the slightest amount of empathy for her.

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Date: May 16 2015

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 49]
Summary:

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BOOK I | GENESIS 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: Undisclosed Desire Series
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2376
Read Count: 72249
Published: July 13 2012
Updated: November 08 2017


Title: Undisclosed Desire

I was looking forward to reading this because I love greek mythology, but I couldn't get through the first chapter.  The grammar and spelling was SO hard to ignore.  You seem to have a great imagination because the premise the story is great, but you need to employ a beta reader because bad grammar and spelling can pull the reader out of the story quickly.

I don't like giving negative reviews, but as writers I think constructive criticism is a useful tool to help hone our craft.  If you're still visiting this site and you read this, I hope you take in the well intentioned spirit it was given.



Author's Response:

Thank you. For some time I wanted to go back and do a fine tooth comb through this story and the second. i've notcied alot of bad grammer and spelling and haven't found the time. Plus, I do want this story published so alot of this was going to be fixed and edited. Until that day comes I will be fixing it. 

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed
Date: April 22 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 149]
Summary:

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Bruce Wayne didn't have time to waste searching for someone to replace his beloved Chef Toussant.  He was busy living a double life and saving Gotham from nefarious villains.  So, when Lucius Fox suggested his niece, he was happy to take the advice of his trusted friend.  Lauren Fox seemed like the answer to his culinary worries.  The only problem was, he saw her . . . and his mouth began to water.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Erotica, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Be My Hero
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 16708
Read Count: 37489
Published: August 12 2012
Updated: November 12 2012


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love this story!  Two things and I'm probably nitpicking as it is your story, but Spiderman is from the Marvel Universe.  Batman is DC comics, so they probably wouldn't know of each other.  Also, the webs that Spiderman shoots are actually chemically engineered and are encased in capsules he inserts into the wrists of his costume. (Can you tell I'm a bit of a comic book fangirl, lol).  But again, this is your story, so keep the good stuff coming!

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Date: March 07 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Baby girl bit his DICK off!  LMAO!  This chapter gets a 10 just for that!

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Date: March 07 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 193]
Summary:

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Chance. I don't believe in it. Everything that happens in our life happens for a reason. I've always believed that. But, it's funny. Who would have thought a night of clubbing could result in my marriage to the tattooed quarterback for the San Francisco 49ers?    



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 88367
Read Count: 110957
Published: March 16 2013
Updated: March 14 2016


Title: Chapter 2: The Morning After

I don't usually like stories that include celebrities, but this is really good!

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02 2015

Title: Chapter 14: Yes or No

It's okay about the sex scenes.  Even some people who are not virgins are uncomfortable writing them.  I will say, that for someone who has inexperience with them you did an awesome job.  

It's great to see Arianna let her guard down, but she's never gonna get past her issues if she doesn't get treatment.

I'm loving how you're building this story.

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Date: April 03 2015

Title: Chapter 20: Stadiums and Photographs

Dun dun DUN!  LOL!

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Date: April 03 2015

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Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 35128
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Joelle Jax, you are a WONDER!  Beautiful story!



Author's Response:

Thanks Jaye Sims!

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Date: April 20 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Snippets into the lives of different characters. A foray into emotions and interactions.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 9617
Read Count: 5063
Published: November 14 2013
Updated: May 08 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Seeker

This is SO good.  You've created a world that is SO engrossing.  You have to finish this.

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Date: May 08 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Howl

Please, please, PLEASE continue this one.

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Date: May 09 2015

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Summary:

People always say, "if you love something, set it free." Yet people also say, "love yourself more than anyone else." Which one do I go with? Should I let go of the woman I love and hurt myself? The woman who has made me a better man? Or should I love myself more and take what is mine in order to be happy? 

He's stubborn but beautiful. Cruel and yet kind. Smart but so stupid (in the most funny and adorable way). But he's hiding something from me, and all I want to do is hide from him. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73339
Read Count: 50491
Published: November 27 2013
Updated: August 09 2017


Title: Chapter 12: Can We Be Friends?

Why would Briella automatically accept Chloe's offer of friendship?  ESPECIALLY when she saw ol' girl pick up a knife and hide it behind her back!  That just seems odd and disjointed, imo.  

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed
Date: March 16 2015

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[Reviews - 279]
Summary:

Lance was a man who had it all and lost it all. He was down and out and was ready to give up because he had nothing to live for. Nina was a woman who had enough of being used and was trying to start her life over in a new city. When these two meet will Lance have something to live for? Or will he continue to live in misery. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 40637
Read Count: 70101
Published: December 09 2013
Updated: July 06 2015


Title: Chapter 12: Leave

This chapter, especially the last paragraph was confusing.  I couldn't tell when Lance was speaking and when Frank was speaking.  It's like everything ran together.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed
Date: June 23 2015

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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 201257
Read Count: 84916
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Losing Another Talerico

This story is EVERYTHING!  I love the way you're weaving this tale.  Any time I find myself reacting to a situation within a story like it's happening to me personally...that's good stuff right there.

I don't know who I dislike more, Merecedes or Barb.  No wait...I'm lying.  I DESPISE Barb, but I'd like to deliver a shot straight to ol' Merc's chops.  Manipulative ol' biddy.

Great Story!

 



Author's Response:

Lol!  Thanks Jaye Sims! 

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed
Date: March 30 2015

Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

Is it weird that applauded at the end of this?  I think it's weird, but I don't care.  Amazing as always, Ms. Jax.



Author's Response:

I don't think it's weird.  I think it's marvelous.  Thanks Jaye Sims!

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Date: April 13 2015

Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

Joelle Jax you have done it again...some more...repeatedly.  10,000 stars!



Author's Response:

Thanks Jaye Sims : D

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Date: April 10 2015

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Impatience is a Virtue

That was BA-RIIILLIANT!  LMAO at Rich.

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Date: March 15 2015

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Flight Plan

I thoroughly enjoyed this.  I hope that we get more chapters or an epilogue.

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Date: March 15 2015

Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - The Cruelties of Fate

Good Lord, woman!  I'm over hear gettin' all weepy.  I'm glad that the revelation that Nat knew about Richard not being Ant's dad didn't cause him to explode at her.  Ant's a real man and a good person despite his jacked up parents.



Author's Response:

Woo, woo, woo (a week later : / ).  The stars aligned to soften the blow of Ant finding out Nat knew the truth and kept it from him.  He needs and loves her, so whatever anger he felt was sure to fade.  Thanks Jaye Sims!

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Date: April 03 2015

Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

Got me over here snotting and crying.  How dare you, Joelle Jax.

 

Perfect ending to this story.

 

I still want to roundhouse kick Barbara and Karate chop Mercedes in the throat.



Author's Response:

Understandable.  They certainly deserve it.  Thanks Jaye Sims!

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2015

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[Reviews - 292]
Summary:

She's a mess he can't help wanting to fix.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Southern Gentlemen
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 90
Read Count: 68925
Published: January 11 2014
Updated: October 19 2015


Title: Alexa and Brody

Daaaaaaaaammmmmmnnnn.  Just. Daaaammmnnn.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30 2015

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[Reviews - 201]
Summary:

Nika James was dragged out to the club by her best friend and client to celebrate her divorce being final. Unfortunately Nika doesn't feel much like celebrating. However when Elijah Luke, a young sexy billionaire with a taste for chocolate sees her in VIP and invites her to a celebration in his limo, things might not be so bad after all.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Beyonce
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 39055
Read Count: 47526
Published: February 05 2014
Updated: November 03 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Ride of My Life

I'm really enjoying this story.  However, like so many stories I've read on this site and others, the female lead always fights against a good thing.  If it were me and Elijiah came to my office looking for me, he wouldn't have gotten two words out of his mouth before I was climbing him like a tree.  I might be a slut, though.  LOL!

 

Great story, though.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 07 2015

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[Reviews - 280]
Summary:

She was only a debt to him... or so she thought.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 26251
Read Count: 75511
Published: February 23 2014
Updated: July 08 2015


Title: Chapter 16: Sixteen

I know you're working on Tainted and I know that it's hard to work on one story when another one is in the forefront of your mind, but would you please, please, PLEASE update this one?  Please?  It's SO good.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 25 2015

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Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 137291
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Erotica IS intended to be sexually arousing, but erotica can and often is very romantic.  Romance and erotica aren't mutually exclusive.



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed
Date: May 25 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

Forbidden Fruit

Magdalena was the only daughter of Ezra, the Great. She was the fruit that was never to sampled until an Alpha won her hand in the competition that was to be held at her 18th moon.  Now with her festival for her birthday about to start, who will win the right to claim her?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15365
Read Count: 6693
Published: May 24 2014
Updated: July 13 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story has great potential.  I think that you may need a beta-reader, though.



Author's Response:

Thank, I think so too, I tend to not be so good with the grammatical part such as sentence structure because of the type of things that I usually am required to write are not really of this nature.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 13 2015

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[Reviews - 331]
Summary:

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She joined Citrus because she was once weak, she wanted to stop evil and the ruthless of man that was so prevalent in this world. Her only dream was to make a difference. He joined Citrus because he was powerful. He was Citrus's secret weapon. What happens when two people from warring factions are put into the same division? Will they be able to work as team? Can she put her duties first? It was because of his people that she lost everything, her friends, her family and home.  Will these two be able to work together or is her the past too much to bear. (Interracial Romance). Rated 18 and above. Adult Fiction



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 423
Read Count: 63156
Published: June 17 2014
Updated: March 23 2018


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the mash up of sci fi and erotica.  You maybe need an editor to smooth things out.  There were a few grammatical errors and I can't speak for anyone else, but it distracts from the story.  Absent that, I really like where you are going with this.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 13 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.