You have a some grammar issues to work out, but other than that, this was a great start. This story has the ability to be good and soapy.

You did a terrific job setting up the different storylines. Dorian's crap is about to bring the rain on the Nichette family.

Dom's out, but will probably be pulled back in, which will screw up his relationship with Alicai.

 Chase isn't in the family business, but thanks to his "friend" he's about to explore uncharted waters. He better keep his eye's on Sin, because their is a sexy psychotic gangstar with both eyes on her.

LOL at Carmine scaring that poor kid. It would be nice if Mia met a good guy, who was worthy of her. I would be interested to see how Carmine handles the situation. It's one thing to know she's dating losers that won't last, but its another thing to know that she has someone who will be what she needs.  

From the cast pic alone, I am really looking forward to Christopher. He looks like a man who doesn't take crap from anyone. I'm wondering if he will have brown eye, because the others have blue. Will there be a lady in his life?

I would love to see a female who's not completely into the family. I want to see some chasing here, maybe some great banter, that isn't sexual, but more intellectual. 

Thanks for updating.

I liked Anthony, he may be my third favorite Nichetti. Roberta was ridiculous!  Dom should have set his parents down first and told them about the pregnancy. It was completely irresponsible the way he handled the situation, knowing how his mother felt about Alicia. That said, his mother should have showed some class and waited until later to tell her son of her displeasure.

I'm sorry, but Mia and Carmine were rushed. The best thing about them was the anticipation and build up of them becoming a couple. Wiating for that first kiss which leads to nowhere, because he's being unselfish and wants to keep her safe. Her wanting more, them clashing and then the prelude sex. IDK Jmho

I'm hoping for some Christopher in the next update. Wait make that LOTS of Christopher, with a side of Taya. There are already three couple, I really hope that Chris and Taya take longer to get together.   

Aww that was a cute ending.

That was some really nice tension at the end. I also enjoyed the flashback. I'm loooking forward to the next chapter. 

Oooh Another good chapter. I love that they don't like each other right now. It will make the story all the more sweeter, when they fall in love. lol

Harrington needs to get that chip off his shoulder. He doesn't even know Alicia for him to be so freaking rude. He's boiling everyone in the same pot, without knowing any of the particular spices.  

OMG, I've been looking for this fic! I read the first chapter and have been hoping for the next update. I totally forgot the name, so I thought that you had stopped writing it. I am so glad that you continued. I can't read it right now, (work) but I will later.  

Thanks for updating.

OOO, Great start. I like you writing style. 

Alicia seems pretty grounded, as if she has a good head on her shoulders. She's knows that she needs to concentrate on the bigger picture, and not worry about the little things. But she also needs to just let go a little, and Gina seems to be the perfect person to help her.

Gina is a trip, goodness if I didn't know girls like her in high school. Although, I have a feeling that beneath that tough girl exterior, is someone with a good heart.

Hmm, I have a feeling that the Ford guy is a new kid. Will he be a blessing or a curse

Thanks for sharing

I think Alicia is going to be in more trouble than Jeremy. I'm really looking forward to their first kiss. 

 I love Jubilee, she's kind reminds me of my cousin, except he's a boy. He wants to be a lawyer.

Thanks for updating 

LOVED IT! I soo love this story. I get excited every time I see a new update. 

Jeremy is falling and I have a feeling Alicia is too.  I know Jeremy wants a **** buddy, but he better get over that and go after Alicia. Daryl was creeping around the theatre and I'm more than willing to bet you--well someone else since you're the writer-- that he wants to Alicia back.

Looking forward to another update! 

It made a great point...it made a great point.

Glade to have you back!

I really enjoyd seeing a different side to Harrison and I'm digging Mrs. Astor. I was happy she put him in his place. I have feeling she is the grand dame of the east coast and few people, with the exception of her husband and son, will tangle with her. Amelle needs and ali and I think she'll have one in Mrs. Astor.    

Amelle, that is not the type of dress you were to a galla in Connecticut.

David is so damn clueless. He is killing me, so I can not imagine Tom Welling in the role.

I do not like Nadia. 

I know characters aren't always perfect, they aren't supposed to be, and every person isn't going to live happily ever after. However, complex characters must have a strong foundation to carry out a complex plot.

I agree with Olivia in regards to David as well as why his parents wanted them to move to CT. Harrison is a pig, I hope he gets the royal flush. I wished Amelle had told him that it's sad that a man like him needs to threaten a person to in order to get what he wants. Harrison may have power, but he is truly weak. I enjoyed this chapter, I felt a little more of Amelle's personality and I'm intrigued by Olivia.