Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: October 10 2009

Membership status: Member

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I just love to read.




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A'isha is a fashion designer by trade. Though she is in a business filled with superficial spoiled brats and air heads she is different. At 5’3 tall and what most would call a plus size girl she is far from the norm in her line of business, a tulip amongst roses. She shy’s away from the spot light and always has a kind word for everyone she meets her beauty shines from an inner light that refuses to be extinguished.

Elton is a prominent plastic surgeon. Making money from the insecurities of women and men alike in A’ishas line of business has been his way of life for many years. In every person he meets he can spot their flaws in an instant, but meeting A’isha changes his life. Opening his eyes to the possibility of someone who didn’t need to be changed in any way, someone dare he say it perfect.

When the two meet sparks fly and lives are changed forever.

 (The Banner is a temp until I can make something better. I just wanted to give the reader an idea of the characters I have in mind.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4484
Read Count: 18772
Published: June 14 2010
Updated: November 19 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was sexy, they having sex with their eyes!!!  This is only going to get better.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the start.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: June 16 2010

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

They are to hot for each other and when they do the do it will be H-O-T!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: June 14 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am so glad to see this story Sade, I thought that you had forgotten about us.  Elton has stacked his claim and Aisha has acquiesed giggling all the way.  Please don't make us wait for updates of your other stories.

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Date: November 19 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What a sweet and romantic kiss and their watching the Avengers. Now that's my kind is date!  Sade you have made so happy two update from you dare I hope for another?



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

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Date: April 05 2013

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Natasha Roberts is a paediatrician with a healing touch and warm smile at 30 years of age, she is a beautiful woman with a broken spirit which she keeps hidden. When with her group of friends she is the listner, understander and the one her friends depend on for all the answers. Her secret is she that is unable to have children which is the reason her ex-husband gave her for their divorce, she lives to heal children even if it reminds her of what she can never have.

Angelo Luciano Salvatore is a mob boss and the head of the Salvatore Crime Family. He likes to think of himself as a business man when most would call him a ruthless bastard. The day his wife died he become a heartless shell who begins to neglect his son turning to his business for comfort. Until his son is taken to the hospital for a simple check up and is found to have the very disease that killed his mother Polycystic kidney disease. which in time would have killed him if not for Natasha who falls in love with the Christopher’s loving soul and finds herself as a match to donate one of her own kidneys to save his life. When Angelo meets Natasha he is cold and hurtful , Natasha in turn gives him a piece of her mind. Hands on her hips her eyes spitting fire she tells him off then walks away leaving Angelo to reflect on her words and the beautiful woman that Saved his son and made him whole once again.

 (The Banner is a temp until I can make something better. I just wanted to give the reader an idea of the characters I have in mind.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4521
Read Count: 11986
Published: June 14 2010
Updated: November 19 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Me likey, keep the updates coming.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Im glad you enjoyed the story thus far.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: June 16 2010

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Angelo is a hot mess!!!   Natasha doesn't know whether to kick his ass or kiss him.  SO awesome!!!  Chapter 2, I give it two thumbs up!!!



Author's Response:

 thank you for the review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: June 14 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Angelo played Nastasha like a stratavarious violin and stoked her like cat and she was purring!!!  This was hot!

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Date: November 19 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It was about to be on like a pot neck bones!  Natasha is jonsing for Antonio but wants to deny her feelings.  I can't wait for the hot, butt makes sex!  Thank for updating your stories. You have one story to update, it stars JHud and Tom Brady, hound doggy!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

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Date: April 09 2013

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Summary:

*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168947
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Intro

Well, that was a sweet update.  I am glad that she now knows who she is, but besides being attracted to her what is the Sheriffs problem?  Loving me some Dax!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: October 11 2010

Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

OH, HELL NO!!! I HOPE THAT KENDRA IS ALIVE, AND PLEASE DON'T LET DELEON KILL THE SHERIFF.  LET THE INMATES I PRISON TAKE CARE OF THAT BECAUSE THEY DON'T LIKE POLICE IN THE HOOSEGAU!!   DONALD IS AN PUNK @$$ *ITCH AND DESERVES A BEAT DOWN.  LOVED THE UPDATE

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: July 10 2011

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

So Prince is really jealous, I am glad that Kendra spoke up and told Prince her true feelings, Prince is being a butt head!!!  I love Pa he is too funny and Victoria and Ralph are way to cool.  I love this story.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: June 18 2011

Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

Please tell that DeLeon is still alive and that asswipe of the Sheriff didn't kill.  I so want the Sheriff dead!!!  I have so missed this story, so please try your hardest to give us another update today.  P-L-E-A-S-E!!!

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Date: January 22 2012

Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37

I have missed this story!!  Now I want to know why that damn sherriff is still alive?  He should be dead for what he tried to do Kenny.  Why should both Kenny and DeLeon suffer because that crazy sheriff.  More please!!!

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Date: March 07 2012

Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38

That was so sad, Prince that ahole.  Pouring salt on a open wound like that, I thought that he cared about Kendra?  DeLeon go get your woman!!!

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Date: March 08 2012

Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39

I was hoping that Kendra was pregnant.  Wah, I want my HEA!!!

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Date: March 08 2012

Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

I.T. you have made my Monday morning fantabulous!!  Kendra and De Leon are one of my favorite couples and I am so happy that she lived so they can continue to love.  Love thec conversation between Prince and De Leon it shed some more light into Kendrea. K and D both deserve love and happiness. So good!! Thank you I.T.!!

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Date: August 25 2014

Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

I am going to have to reread this as I don't remember her living. Glad to see this story back and equally glad that Pa ain't dying.

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Date: July 09 2012

Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

I love these two together, but Kendra lose the attitude with DeLeon.  You left remember!!!  Yay, they worked it out but damn it was painful to read.  Excellent!!

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Date: July 11 2012

Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

I have missed this story thank you for updating.  Kendra and Deleon are two of my favorite characters.  You have made my Sunday!!!

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Date: June 10 2013

Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

This chapter was heart breaking.  No one got charged in the murder of his parents, how awful. My heart goes out Del Leon!

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Date: May 26 2014

Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

My story is back, but now I have read it again from the top. DEL Leon is the coolest!!

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Date: May 13 2014

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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 213868
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

The boy doesn't want to be a policemen his father should let him work out his dreams.   His father had his dreams smashed and he is trying to do the same thing to Ryan. THat is just sad.  Pursue your dreams Ryan, your life will be richer for it.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: July 27 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Thanks for the update, I really have missed this story.  I love that Charlie openned up to Ryan, they have each developed feelings for each other and I think that it's wonderful.  I just wish that he would break up with ho Christi!!!  I just wish that she would talk to her father, they need a family confab.  Charlie is hurting because she thinks that her father is blaming her for her brothers death.  Charlie it wasn't your fault, your brother was stupid.  NOthing good happens in hood late at night. When is her father going to show up?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: August 27 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

THe people in this town are crazy, I know that Charlie is sacred but give the boy a chance.  He's hot and he wants you Charlie!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 28 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I don't like Christi and I never have personally I think the little ho should shipped off to a nunery.  I don't know how I feel about Wes but I know that she doesn't deserve him.  Did Ryan's father have a thing for Viviene back in the day?

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Date: October 24 2013

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