Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: October 10 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I just love to read.




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Summary:

 A Special Thank You to TokenBlackGirl for the AMAZING banner.

 One night in Vegas changes the luck of two strangers.

Grace is a good girl to the bone, though she loves her job as a teacher she wants some excitement and for her twenty-fifth birthday she wants to shed that good girl image. Not be predictable Grace but a sexy wanton vixen,so her friends take her to Las Vegas, where her life is changed forever.

Kevin is an NFL all star and all around player. He is in Vegas because he was told to lay low after sleeping with the wife of one of his team mates, he has to figure out a way to change his image and quick.

 Sometimes what happens in Vegas shouldn't stay in Vegas and in Kevin and Grace's case it wont.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 14996
Read Count: 61679
Published: June 07 2009
Updated: April 27 2013


Title: Chapter 10: Grace and Rina...Enchange words.

Please tell that the next chapter will postede ASAP!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. sorry for the length of time between updates.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 19 2010

Title: Chapter 1: What happens in Vegas!

Please update this story I love it so.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: July 27 2010

Title: Chapter 1: What happens in Vegas!

Please update the wonderful story!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: August 28 2010

Title: Chapter 7: S.O.B

I don't like Sara, and I hope that he fires that heifer.  That was so disrespectful and I can't wait for Grace to put her in her place.  Kevin will handle his business and tell Sara about herself.  Love this story!!!!

Author's Response: Im glad you enjoyed the update, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: January 23 2010

Title: Chapter 8: Oh no she didn't...

Sara needs to staked and beheaded because that is the only way to kill a vampire!!  Kevin don't want you heifer, satan Grace rebukes you now throw some holy water on her.  Maybe she'll melt or can we throw a house the witch from the Wizard of Oz.

Author's Response: LMAOoooooo thanks for the review, Awesome line!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: January 24 2010

Title: Chapter 12: Kevin and Sara talk.

Thank you, thank you, thank you for this update.  Sara ia crazy, Kevin doesn't want you.  He is happily married to the woman who has become the love of his life.  Please write that he got run over by bus or got pushes on the subway tracks.  Can you tell that I don't like her?  Please give us an update soon, I love this story!!



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoy the story, sorry for the wait.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: June 22 2011

Title: Chapter 11: Meet the team.

Please update theis wonderful story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 20 2011

Title: Chapter 11: Meet the team.

Please give more of this story.  I want Sara and Rina to both choke on their own tongues!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: June 13 2011

Title: Chapter 14: A time for everything

Please finish this story. 

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Date: January 01 2023

Title: Chapter 13: Party!

Thank God my story is back!  DON't stay so long Sade!@  Sara and Gina are still evil I see but more so!  Those two evil itches can try but Grace is a child of good with a little bit hood thrown in.  More please!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Ill do my best to update soon.

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Date: January 16 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Party!

I need an update of this fabulous story!

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Date: April 10 2013

Title: Chapter 14: A time for everything

I really hope that you come back and finish this story.

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Date: September 14 2013

Title: Chapter 14: A time for everything

 Rina was finally honest with Grace and Keep in and admitted that the baby wasn't his!  Rina' virtue has been gone for along time so that punch was much too late and unnecessary. Sara just makes much teeth itch! I love this story!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27 2013

Title: Chapter 14: A time for everything

Please update

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Date: December 19 2014

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Summary:

It is a truth universally acknowledged that a Vulcan in the grip of Pon Farr must be in want of a mate.

---A Star Trek meets Pride and Prejudice Story---



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Film)
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:Yes
Word count: 99273
Read Count: 211592
Published: July 12 2009
Updated: December 21 2015


Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

SO awesome, I am so glad that Spock is now free to pursue Nyota.  I love the pairing of Spock and Nyota so, special after the  Star Trek movie.  Sybok is such a punk, I wonder what Sarek is going to say.  Or will he just try to trick the money out of his father and aunt.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: September 13 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Sybok shame on you, using Nyyota like that.  Why is she so trusting? As a matter of why are they all so trusting?  I hope the Nyota doesn't get hurt.  Great story

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: October 12 2009

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I don't like T'Ping, she's a vulcan ho!!!!  Nyota should feel guilty, but I guess I can forgive because Sybok fried her curcuits.  Thank you for the update, it was wonderful!1

Author's Response:

Well, I am glad that you are willing to acquit Nyota a little bit. :-)

Thanks for reading and commenting! :-)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: June 02 2010

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

How could she treat Spock like that?  Taking a strangers word over Spock's, I am so very disappointed in Nyota.  I want her to find out the truth and soon. She owes Spock an apology!!  Great update.

Author's Response:

Well, next chapter we'll see some of the fall out and Nyota's response. Perhaps she'll redeem herself before the story is done.

Thanks for reading and writing!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 15 2010

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Please finish this story!!



Author's Response:

I'm working on it! In fact, the next chapter is done. I just have to finish typing it up.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: November 05 2011

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Sybok, is evil and I have waiting for him to reveal himself and he has done so in spades.  I want Spock to kill him and I know that his father will be alright with that.  I love Len he is cool people!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: November 11 2011

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I so love this story so thank you for the new chapter.  Why did Nyota's silly self invite Sellek?  That was so uncalled for!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 26 2011

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Kill Sybok, please!!!  Can I just say that I love Spock and Nyota together?  These two are one of my favorite couples.  Please don't make me too long for another update!!!

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Date: February 13 2012

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thank you so much for this update as I have truly missed this story.  Spock is falling apart in his own special way and Sybok is going down.  I can't wait for Sybok to pay for being evil and triffling.  Love this story!!!

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Date: December 29 2012

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

How could end it fight there?  Sybok got exactly what he deserved but he deserved more pain!  I will be on points and needles until the next update.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2013

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

That was awesome, Spock loves Ny can't wait for him to o fight for her.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01 2014

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