Penname: intellectual titmouse [Contact]

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Member Since: January 31 2010

Membership status: Member

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i've decided to change things up a bit, start over, if you will.


a lot of my old [incomplete] stories will be taken down, if they haven't already, and i'll posting new ones.


as i publish the older ones, i will provide links here.


thank you, everyone, for your support and patience over the years.




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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 276]
Summary:

The Demon Seed

Babies should be a blessing. But not all of them are.

Kickass banner by Missus James

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28219
Read Count: 50615
Published: March 29 2011
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

i knew it! i friggin' knew it! this is going to be dope!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

the test before the fall. holy hell, Charly's in for it. chick's gotta realize dude's the goddamn devil and ain't shit gon' stop 'im! even the priest was avoiding that messs. smh. you seriously need to get on that next update. RIGHT NOW!!!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: September 03 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

mmhm, who dat grandma? i don't trust her. and where the hell Charly think she gon' go?! he's the Devil, bitch!

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Date: July 13 2011

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[Reviews - 373]
Summary:

 

Sara Richards lives in Ōsaka, Japan. She becomes embroiled in the drama and comedy of clashing cultures, traditional philosophies and modern ideas as she is reunited with the past. She struggles to navigate the tempestuous waters where East meets West and a love lost but not forgotten that may never be regained, while keeping her eye on the one point in the sky that can lead her the peace of dry land. Her Bright Ōsaka Star.

 

Fabulous Banner by Music!!!

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 72940
Read Count: 166709
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: June 27 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Ichi (1)

please, please, please do more!

yes, there are errors, but it barely detracts from the expertise you've drawn this story with. so well done! the characters are well-rounded even in such a short space.

brava!



Author's Response:

I should probably seek a beta for this. Thank you titmouse!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Ni (2)

well done continuation. looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Hey there! Thanks heaps for you support. :)

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: April 11 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Yon (4)

okay, so i missed two updates! lol

i heart Shouda so much. he's too cute for words and such a smart kid. Sara and the Shinohara's raised him well. love Sara's parents (Darren's off-screen commentary was great) and i really like the relationship she has with them.

my heart bleeds for Kaoru. i'm kind of scared for her. she seems so sweet and so trapped.

Yuki . . . ::sigh:: just keeps fuckin' up! dang it, man! but, hey now, Kamir's fine as hell! but may be too nice. Sara's already comparing him to Yuki, which is a bad sign. i don't know who i want her with, but Sara's too smart to get into anything dumb. not that being with Yuki is an automatic no-no; she'd create some new rules for that ass and Yuki would be too happy to comply. eff his moms, btw. ugh.

great job, woman.



Author's Response:

No worries! You are all caught up now.

Shouda is a sweet kid. Darren Percy is fun to write, hope to have more from them soon. Poor Yuki, your expression match the general sentiment I think.

Yes, hands up for Shahid Khapoor.....fine!

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Go (5)

ho.ly. shit.

showdown indeed. but long time coming.

so glad mom-dukes got told the hell about herself. rudeness. ugh.

and i'm starting to really like Kamir. (btw, you wrote Kumar in a few places; not sure how that fits in.)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the heads up, I'm going to fix that. It was a typo. :)

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Date: April 25 2011

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 69]
Summary:

Zora McQueen only wanted one thing... to go to Hogwarts. It wasn't until she got there that she found out she would be in for the adventure of a lifetime. Who knew meeting a messy haired boy with a scar on his head would lead to so much trouble?

 

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 101074
Read Count: 90464
Published: May 28 2011
Updated: February 15 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Happiness Is..

awesome start.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much :)

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 28 2011

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[Reviews - 213]
Summary:

For married author Dove Morgan, the trip to the big city was the first in a series of things she never thought she'd do. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 44246
Read Count: 29154
Published: July 27 2011
Updated: April 08 2012


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

good to see you back, woman.

and these two? mm. smh. the chemistry is off the charts.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1.

well, this is intriguing. i give a ten, just for pulling me in. but i shall hold off on in-depth until there is more.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6

you did well with the cabbie voice. if you ever need any NJ/NY accent coaching, i gotcha.

nice tension in this chapter. Dove still hasn't "relieved" herself so dinner ought to be interesting. what's for dessert? lol. can't wait for more.

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Date: August 28 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5 part 2

well, damn. i can barely type. GO 'HEAD, DOVE!!!!!!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

uhm, so yeah. i needs me an update ASAP. that was . . . woo! at first, i honestly did not know how to feel about Dove - wait, no, that's a lie, could barely stand her. loved her in the first chapter, adored her really, but when she got around her husband it was like her brain was gone. then again, she was very aware that she'd settled. still didn't appreciate the way her husband and her brothers talked to her and she allowed it. (btw, you have Shon down as William a couple times in chapter 3, i believe.)

but i am too glad i came back to this.

there's a fire in Dove that is not just sexual, obviously. she's much stronger than she allows to be, a part of her that she willingly suppressed for her settled life. her willingness to help works against her in some ways, but she is just like most women with a heart so damn big . . . it almost hurt to read about the sacrifices she'd made and how ungrateful, bratty, and unsupportive the males in her family are.

her first encounter with Xavier, in lesser hands, would have been implausible, considering the differences in the characters. but, you, lady, have done a wonderful, seamless job. i love what they seem to bring out in one another, no matter how soon it may seem. very well done. and i like Dove, i really do. that real part of her is wonderful and i can't wait to see more.

*high five*

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

welp . . . dinner should be interesting. ha!

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Date: September 11 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 part 1

ayo . . . 

i have never, ever been so mad to see a chapter end.

aw, hell!

okay, breeve, breeve . . . I NEED AN UPDATE NOW!!!

woosah!

okay, i'm good. take your time. it's worth the wait. damn!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8,

you. are. SO WRONG FOR THAT!!!

this tension is murdering me, you hear me?!

MURDER!!!!

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Date: September 23 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

oh, xavier, you ass.

but that sex was steaming.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2011

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13

i really feel for Dove and you are still owning this story, woman. the emotions conveyed are pitch-perfect; i can feel how settled, yet uncomfortable Dove is. and how much Xavier wants to be around Dove and his hesitency to tell the truth, knowing it'll mar their time greatly.

cannot wait for more.

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Date: January 29 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 359]
Summary:

  

 

Lila James knows that her friendship with seventeen year old Chase Almeida is extremely inappropriate, but she still isn't prepared when his older brother Jack decides to tell her just how inappropriate it actually is-- inadvertently igniting a fire that had been burning quietly inside of them for years.

*****Lila's Thunder has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 670
Read Count: 65028
Published: October 07 2011
Updated: September 09 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awesome start. extremely effective and well-written. love these characters already. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08 2011

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Summary:

 

Wren Blue didn't do mornings...

 

Especially when she found herself as the fourth victim in a twisted killer's game.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Female/Female, Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Femslash, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 19929
Read Count: 15723
Published: November 09 2011
Updated: February 26 2012


Title: Chapter 8: Preliminary Hearing

damn. this well-woven. tight. clean.

well done.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Fear Factor

aw, hell, Camille.

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Date: January 09 2012

Title: Chapter 9: Strike Zone

aw, poor Avery, thinking he can actually get in between Wren and that freak-nasty in her.

tsk, tsk, tsk

this gon' get ugly.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03 2012

Title: Chapter 7: Predatory Claim

i'm nearly speechless.

the scene was well-played, very well-written.

i'm so happy as a reader. i can't . . . wow.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28 2011

Title: Chapter 6: The Battle of Wills

i am so happy to see this story back and nicely fleshed out. the scenes are creepier and the characters are even easier to "feel."

wonderful job, as per usual. excited for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks IT...much appreciated my friend.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Seek And You Will Find...

*shudder*

damn.

when i can think a little clearer, you'll get a better review.

damn.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 06 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.