Penname: Missus James [Contact]

Real name: Jhordan

Member Since: August 24 2010

Membership status: Administrator

Bio:

"Writing is a struggle against silence." - Carlos Fuentes


I am a twenty-something-year-old Floridian in the education field. I am a hobby photographer, graphic designer, and writer. I love to read books, fanfiction, and orginial fiction. My collection mostly consists of romance, drama, angst, dark, supernatural, and interracial books in which those genres reflect in my stories.




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"Power is the ultimate aphrodisiac.”- Henry Kissinger

 

In the game of social politics not everyone has power and some don’t understand the power they wield. The power to make and break lives rest in the hands of one man but be careful, he is always watching.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 36415
Read Count: 62999
Published: December 14 2010
Updated: November 09 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I like, I like! I can definitely feel mysterious vibe going on. :) I like it a lot! Please update soon. :D

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 14 2010

Title: Chapter 4: Welcome to Hell

Poor Amelle. I can really relate her. I know how it feels to be in a place where you feel like you just don't belong or you won't fit in because of your background, ethnicity, or whatever it may be. 

I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Please update soon. 



Author's Response: Amelle is in a position everyone hates to be in, so I am glad that you could relate to her, and I thank you for your review!

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Date: December 14 2010

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Summary:

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 Banner by Missus James. :)

 

"If you prick us do we not bleed? If you tickle us do we not laugh? If you poison us do we not die? And if you wrong us shall we not revenge?"- William Shakespeare

 

She didn’t believe in love at first sight, yet when she met Fabian she believed in anything. Even the belief of her death at the hands of her lover…

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 10873
Read Count: 20211
Published: December 28 2010
Updated: July 17 2013


Title: Con Te Partiro

I don't think Fabian was very happy when she asked him if he was Remy. Now that she's awake in his house/mansion, I'm interested to see the interaction between the two of them in the next chapter. I love foreign guys. I haven't read too many interracial romance stories with German men, so you know I'm buckled up for a bumpy ride with this tale. 

I'd love to see how these two in Fabian's territory and not in a neutral location like Meka's job. 

Update soon. 



Author's Response: You're lucky. I just updated. :} well the next chapter is in Fabian's territory. He got the power now! Haha. He is a bit more aggressive. And authoritative.thanks mj!

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01 2011

Title: Con Te Partiro

Wow.

They aren't even together and Fabian is already giving her orders. To say the least, this was a very interesting chapter. The controlling nature of Fabian should have set off warning signs for Meka, but I suppose her attraction -- whether she wants to admit it or not -- to him is too strong.

Since we already know how the relationship is going to develop between the two of them, it's very hard to like Fabian even though we are still in the beginning. Though I won't lie, I'd like to know more about his character. Though since we're looking from Meka's point of view, we will learn things about Fabian as she does. 

Good update. 



Author's Response: Yes he is. Bad Fabian. But as you can see Meka easily obeys. Resulting in cockiness of power. Understand me? Haha. Yes her power to him is too strong. As released that she is a virgin. Haha. I will continue to post a few in his character. I actually like doing him a tad bit better than Meka.

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02 2011

Title: Con Te Partiro

I probably shouldn't be reading or reviewing right now because I have my own stories to write, but after reading this chapter, I was highly tempted. Wow, what a contrast. How Meka views him and what's it like in Fabian's mind is like looking at two different people. Well, three different people if you want to include his future self.

I like how we finally get to take a peek inside of Fabian's mind as it really explains why he acts the way he does and how he feels about Meka. Good update.



Author's Response: Haha. Well I am glad you did. It is an increased contrast. You're thrown from little Meka to Fabian's controlling world. Its like woah. Haha. Four considering also the person Meka will become. With Fabian that is the least of his back ground. Thanks. ;}

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Date: January 02 2011

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In the left corner is Tanya Rodriguez, a woman that has it all. A great business, the best friend in the world and a mother and father who love their baby girl. But the one thing she's always wanted but never had is love. True love.

In the right corner is Jaycee Cristoforo. He's at the top of his profession as a sports entertainer. He's sexy and with millions of adoring female fans Jaycee knows he can have nearly any woman in the world but feels he is still missing something.

When these two meet will they find what they are looking for?

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 47718
Read Count: 18764
Published: February 09 2011
Updated: January 01 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Darn it! It was just getting really good. "I'm so excited! I just have a feeling this night going to change both of our lives." Yes, Tanya, you are very, very right! Tonight is going to change your life forever and forever!

I love Jason's reaction to Tanya sitting in the crowd!

Please update soon! :) 



Author's Response: Yeah love write that jayson reaction when he seen tanya. thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent selection of cast. I can already tell that Jason and Tony are going to be something else. Tanya looks like she is going to have more than a handful in dealing with Jason, but she seems like a tough cookie who can take him on head to head without blinking an eye. :)

Onto the next chapter! :) 



Author's Response: Oh yes tanya is tuff cookie and that it going to be a fun and crazy ride with these two. thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12 2011

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Summary:

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Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 122661
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014


Title: ME&U

thank jesus

LET YOUR MUSE JUICES FLOW! 

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03 2014

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She really had nowhere to run, She had no family, and she needed her job. Her boss was a thug in a three-piece suit, hell bent on making her another one of his office sluts; and the janitor,her only source of help was an ex con, who was or was not a racist. She had to choose her poison.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: The only thing that matters
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 54189
Read Count: 101065
Published: March 04 2012
Updated: March 04 2016


Title: Chapter 5: {Five} In the arms of the Concrete Dog

Please, update this soon! I'm dying here to find out what happens next! :)

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Date: July 19 2012

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Seven years on the run, and a bullet with someone else’s name was all it took for Angel to finally meet the man of her dreams, a ridiculously handsome, overly possessive Russian mobster named Aleksey who would kill anyone to keep her.

 

This is the THIRD edition in the "Unbreakable Bonds" series.

 

The main characters in this story are formally introduced in Chapter 97 of "Love Reawakened."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Unbreakable Bonds
Chapters: 44
Completed:No
Word count: 151124
Read Count: 139210
Published: June 18 2012
Updated: August 08 2017


Title: Chapter 13: I Always Feel Like Somebody's Watching Me...

Wow, I love the direction this story is going. Those two really deserve each other and I can't wait for the wedding! But I couldn't help but grin like a fool when Aleskey mentioned the whole bachelor party thing. Does she have something up her sleeve or was she a little jealous about the whole thing? And that ending was hot like fire! Update soon. :)



Author's Response:

A bachelor party in Miami of all places... I can hardly wait to write about it, but there are a few things that must be dealt with first.

Thanks for the r&r! =)

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08 2012

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In this twisted love story of Pandia and Ares hides undisclosed desire, desire of lust,desire of another's love, undisclosed truths of abuse in many forms that is so bloody that no one knows, and learning to really forgive past mistakes and to really love



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: Undisclosed Desire Series
Chapters: 26
Completed:Yes
Word count: 77355
Read Count: 50527
Published: July 13 2012
Updated: August 24 2012


Title: Chapter 5: Dreams Discarded

I love this story so much. The characters are so fleshed out and love the interactions between all of them. I can't wait for more. :)

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Date: July 19 2012

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Summary:

Noah Bianchi has been in lust for his new secretary Eliza from the moment he met her, but how will he introduce her to his dominant lifestlye? By bending her over his desk of course.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chains & Whips Excite Me
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 7176
Read Count: 7409
Published: July 26 2012
Updated: August 10 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Come Into My Web

Where I can find a man like Noah? This was an excellent start and now I am dying to know what happens next! Please, update soon!

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 26 2012

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Summary:

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Short tales and lemon limes from Undisclosed Desire Series 

 

Lemon Lime of couple matching and scenes that didn't make the cut in the story.

 

But so happens fount its way to get your attention.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Undisclosed Desire Series
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 12461
Read Count: 2573
Published: August 05 2012
Updated: August 12 2012


Title: Chapter 1: I. Apollo

Wow, I love your writing and your characterization of these immortal beings. I really need to find a gif of an audience clapping or something every time I read one of your stories because that is exactly how I feel, LOL. Keep these coming! :)

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Date: August 08 2012

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Summary:

 

Cara Nightingale had made the same mistake twice.  Could she recover from past mistakes and get her life in order?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 66737
Read Count: 71672
Published: August 07 2012
Updated: October 15 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Paying the Piper

I really love Cara's parents and I am so glad that they laid knowledge on them and didn't take any prisoners. I feel really bad for Stephan and I can understand why he is so mad with Cara. She kept the fact that he fathered her child from him for like two years! And she had plenty of time to go to him and fess up, but she didn't. Hell, she could have even went to him at the end of her pregnancy with Josiah or after he was born!

Needless to say, I am mad at Cara, but I understand why she did what she did in a way. She didn't want to run to Stephan because she didn't want to look like a golddigger. I can understand that, but she should have put her pride in her backpocket and involved Stephan. He's missed the birth of his son and a lot of his son's firsts even his first birthday!

Please update soon!

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:
Tom Williams thought it was going to be an okay day, until Joe, comes in to tease him while he's at work.  He has a genetic disorder called lipodystrophy, which causes weight lose in his face and limbs. Tom has the appearance of an old man, the kids at school give him hell for it. To make matters worse he sees the beautiful black woman walking to his register, while he is being harassed by Joe.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Slash
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 11328
Read Count: 20347
Published: August 14 2012
Updated: July 04 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Affection and contact...

OMG, I hate Joe so much. I hope he and Lung die in a ditch somewhere! I really, really love Tom's personality, he seems like a very good person but he also seems like he wears his feelings on his sleeves. Though I really like Sam and how she protects Tom, I hope she doesn't do anything to break his heart. I am glad that Sam finally sees Joe for what he is, but honestly it looks like he hasn't really changed.

Wonderful update. Update soon. :)

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Date: November 25 2012

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Summary:

When recent college grad, Lily Taylor became the personal paralegal to the notorious lawyer of the stars, Aiden Hawkins, she never knew that she would have her hands tied with him...literally.

makeme



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 66387
Read Count: 63558
Published: October 03 2012
Updated: July 30 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Hometown Glory

Wow, I love your way with words! Really sucked me in. I am curious to find out more about Aiden and I wonder if Lily is going to be down with what he has in mind for her next. Only time will tell, I suppose. Also, Owen is awesome! I'd love some more scenes with him in the future. Please update soon! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! haha Owen is my spirit animal! 

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2012

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Summary:

We all heard it, and read about it. The main question remain: What happened in that suite?

This is what happens when one of the most prominent men on the planet stumbles on a chambermaid in a five star hotel...

 

This story is my property. Please do not copy or post it or extract it to any other websites. Copyright 2012 VMckeon




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 22359
Read Count: 28039
Published: December 03 2012
Updated: November 30 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. The call

Wow, what a very dramatic start. I am very interested to see how this plays out. Please update soon. :)



Author's Response:

Well, get comfy, this is going to be a long and hard road to take...

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03 2012

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[Reviews - 48]
Summary:

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A chance meeting on a bus ride headed for closure. 

Much thanks to my amazing beta Curiously Amused



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7159
Read Count: 7986
Published: April 30 2013
Updated: May 17 2013


Title: Chapter 1: 8 Hours (Washington, DC)

Wow, I love your writing. It flows so smoothly and it's vivid in the simplistic sense. It's not overwhelming, but it's just enough. It's personal enough to keep the reader interested. I've always found it difficult to write in present tense, but you have perfected it beautifully! I really like Eric and Dani, probably because I can relate to them in a sense. Just last year my mom finally found her birth father, but he also kind of a deadbeat too. It was an emotional experience for my mom, so I am very curious about how Dani and Eric will feel once they see these men who are suppose to be their fathers.

Excellent first chapter. Now time to read the next one. 



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! I hope the actual meeting for them feels realisticand sincere for the readers.

Thank you for reading and reviewing, it means a lot

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 09 2013

Title: Chapter 2: 15 Hours (Atlanta, GA)

I really like being inside of Eric's mind. Personally, I loved reading what going on in the minds of male characters than female characters. I like this journey that he is taking. In a way, maybe he is viewing Dani as a bit of a distraction? He is about to have a most likely life-changing encounter, so it would make sense. I don't think it would be necessarily a bad thing either if he did view as a distraction because maybe his feelings will evolve further than that ... maybe they already have. BTW, Dennis is a funny character, he made me chuckle a few times.

Very good chapter. Onto the next one! 

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 09 2013

Title: Chapter 3: 22 Hours (Birmingham, MS)

Man, that scene under the tree was so cute, but it showed a lot of character development. I like that Eric's emotions are slowly surfacing more and more. At first, it was intrigue at drew him to Dani. Now it's kind of a different beast, but the approach is more subtle. I also liked finally learning a little more about Dani. It wasn't a lot, but it was enough to make me love the character a little more than I already do. 

Dennis is such a nice character, however, Dani is right. He wanted to be dramatic and he missed his chance. Life isn't like a movie. That is his fault. I hate it when guys do that. The right moment for them is the past opportunity.

Wonderful chapter! Onto the next one. 

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 09 2013

Title: Chapter 4: 1 Day 3 Hours (Kilgore, TX)

Wow, this chapter showed a different side to Dani. I think it is kind of refreshing to see her a little angry, but to see her perspective on Eric's situation showed a different light to her. However, she is still kind of naive. She wants this fairy tale meeting, but like Eric asked, what if it doesn't turn out the way she wants it to? Can she forgive her birth father?

Dani was right though. Eric shouldn't forgive his father just because. Sometimes, people need to have consequences to the decisions they make. Just forgiving and moving on is like a free 'get out of jail' card. No, Eric needs to show his father what he was missing and how he grew up to be a good man without the help of his father. That should give his father some shame because he wasn't apart of that. 

Or maybe he was apart of that. Maybe Eric is the way he is because he didn't want to be like his father, so in a way his father kind of helped him ... I don't know.

Beautiful chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Update soon. 



Author's Response:

I think you're gonna be surprised as to how it all plays out and I hope it doesn't disappoint.

Thanks again for reviewing.

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 09 2013

Title: Chapter 5: 1 Day 12 Hours 35 Minutes

Wow. I still don't think Eric should have been so easily forgiven. So what, his father thought leaving him and his mother would be for the best. You still have a kid! You couldn't have visited him once a year. Sent a birthday card. Something to show that you cared? Something to show that he existed? Eric's mother struggled to be a single mom and she raised him well. But it shouldn't have been her alone. Honestly, I expected more of a confrontation from Eric.

My heart hurt for Dani. Her birth father is an ass, but maybe that was what she needed for closure. This trip definitely forced her to grow up and she has shown so much growth as a character. I am very proud of her. If her mother was still alive, I think that meeting would have been warmer maybe. At least, she does have a loving family back home. 

Excellent chapter.



Author's Response:

I think once Eric got a good look at the man with a drinking problem he decided he couldn't really be too upset about him leaving.  He's hurt but he understands living with an alcoholic would have done more damage. He also thinks his dad could he popped in occasionally so he's mad about that but I don't think he wants to dwell on the past. I think he wants to make the relationship work now as is, flaws and all.I don't think it would be in his character to have a big blown up confrontation.

Thank you for reading

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14 2013

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[Reviews - 71]
Summary:

Masks

 

“We understand how dangerous a mask can be. We all become what we pretend to be.” 
 Patrick RothfussThe Name of the Wind

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: The Masquerade
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6636
Read Count: 7948
Published: May 14 2013
Updated: July 08 2013


Title: Chapter 2: When One Door Closes

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NOOOOOOOOOO! WHY DID YOU STOP THERE? Ali, my poor baby! Damn you, Tom! DAMMMN YOU! Sadly though I completely understand where Tom is coming from, but that didn't mean that he shouldn't get his ass whooped. Ali is a good one, but I would have tore that ass up then sashayed to those elevator door and peaced out. Yes, at his job. You damn right. 

From author to author, I am going through that "insecure" phase right now. It really gets you down, but you are a natural writer, woman. You know how to spin a tale and capture a reader's attention. Make their heart clutch in pain and tears bubble in their eyes. Not everyone can do that. Not everyone is meant to do that. But you can.

Remember that and I am glad that you are back! And you better update soon.

 

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14 2013

Rated: All Ages
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Summary:

So I decided to try this writing prompt because I had nothing better to do and someone keeps pushing me into writing more. I will not say her name...cough...cough...(Missus James), but I am usually the one that reads and reviews because who doesn't like to read and leave their ramblings. Si here I go....



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Lonely Highways
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1250
Read Count: 1966
Published: July 22 2013
Updated: July 30 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So this is what it feels like after reading a cliffhanger. I am sooooo happy you decided to do this challenge, however, I am pissed off you left it like that. That's jacked up. You can't leave me hanging like that. Just because I do it to you does not mean you can do this to me. Do as I say, not as I do! Love it. I can't wait to see more postings from you.

I BETTER SEE MORE POSTINGS FROM YOU.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I thought it was only fair since you love to do it to me. Btw, where is my Epilogue??? I have written a story so I should get my Epilogue...Write it woman!!!! Thanks for reading and more to come!!

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Date: July 23 2013

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Summary:


 


Brooklyn streets are grimy, grimier than the gunk on the concrete pavement, can't trust anyone or anything. But for Ekene Sosa, high school art teacher, it was the safest place in the world. That safe world soon gets turned upside down as she uncovers the dark secrets of her families past and finds herself being a number one target on every gang banger and crime mob hit list. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15393
Read Count: 3571
Published: August 14 2013
Updated: October 17 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Communication

Your writing style is very nice. It flows so nicely. I can picture the gritty streets, so you have your descriptions and the interactions between your characters down pat. Please update soon. 



Author's Response:

thank you so much! I'll try my best. :)

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10 2013

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