Hey there!
I loved it at usual, such a good story! You may want to edit the last 2 paragraphs, it got a little confusing in there...
Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: Okay. Sorry. I'll look at it when I get home. Reviewer: Nicole Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 12:05 am
Oh oh, please oh PLEASE let Heather's downfall begin and let it be painful. Carey needs to release the tape now too.
Ben also needs a reality check and I hope he eats crow when the truth about Heather's whoring ways are exposed. Its a pity he feels its ok for Chad to marry a slut. Chad deserves better than that!!!
Author's Response: Thanks girl!!!
Date: July 03 2011 09:00 am
Go head Dani! Heather was way out of line. I hoping Heather gets what's coming to her and soon. What is Ben's problem? What an ass!!! Terriffic chapter!
Author's Response: Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2011 12:16 am
Thanks for the update... I don't know I wanna PUNCH more Heather or Ben, both are just being A-HOLES... Heather Chad doesn't WANT YOU move on... and not b/c of that TMZ reporter, I have a feeling that Dani may try to close her heart off to Chad again, she better not b/c then Heather will win.
And I wonder if Ben always had designs on Heather and wants Chad to get with her to keep her close, I say they both deserve eachother.
Author's Response: Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 02 2011 07:39 pm
I'm starting to dislike Chad a little bit, or may be a lot. Carey his little brother seems more like a man than him. If he was the one with Dani, he would have done everything to keep Heather away. Chad is not doing anything. After all that when down especially at his brother's wedding he still did not get a restraining order against Heather. I mean what is this guy waiting for?? If he doesn't do anything, Heather will always but in his life and he will never be happy. If after this he still does not do anything then I will think that he still have feelings for her, or that he just enjoy that this woman is still stalking him. I can understand that he doesn't want to much drama and things like that, but really he has to do something or this woman will never stop.
Author's Response: Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 02 2011 05:30 pm
Loved it, Dani got to bitch slap the ho. lol
Hopefully next chapter up soon, pretty please.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I may update later this weekend Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2011 03:21 pm
All dam not good not good at all for Chad or Dani. Why couldn't Heather person just walk away but nope she had to start stuff agian. Thank for the update.
Author's Response: Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2011 02:26 pm
Loving it,update again soon/
Author's Response: Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 02 2011 11:26 am
What an update. I see action is on the horizon.
Author's Response: Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 02 2011 10:48 am
So, not fare to cut it off like that...Good job
Author's Response: Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2011 09:29 am
Things got heated up in that party!
I'm so happy Dani stood up for herself and didn't let Heather step in and ruin her time with Chad.
Ben is an ass. I wonder if he has slept with Heather too.
I'm loving Carey more and more with each update. He cracks me up.
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 02 2011 08:21 am
grest chapter :D
Author's Response: Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2011 07:19 am
Ohhhh no. It's funnie because as soon as Heather tried to cut in I was thinking "Don't hit her Dani. You're working and their are probably cameras everywhere". Obviously she didn't hear me. LOL. Cant wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Reviewer: NaeNae1495 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2011 06:59 am
Love it
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Date: July 01 2011 09:35 pm
It's interesting that I'm not all that concerned with "the clause" in both of their contracts now as I am in if Chad will find a way back into Dani's good graces...right now her faith in him is "shook"...but she loves that man with every fiber of her being...and she at least acknowledges how much she missed him and his companionship...yes, he's a boneheaded...but I can't be mad at him...he's hopeslessly in love with that girl...and he won't give up on her or them...my kinda of man...and Dani knows she's misses her gentle giant...please don't let that trollop win...Dani and Chad deserve to be happy...together...keeping the faith...can't wait for the next update...
Author's Response: The next update is coming soon, Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2011 06:22 am
Well ok then! Cat wait to see what happens when Casey gets there.
Author's Response: Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2011 11:41 pm
Sweet. She couldn't forget him if she tried.
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:)
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: June 30 2011 05:34 pm
Glad to see that Dani is coming to her senses and that Chad is going to woo her back . I do like your new banner with Sanaa as Dani and Matt Bomer as Chad. Hope the next chapter has Carey exposing Heather's skanky life on TV and on Twitter. Not only will she lose her job but a lot of angry people will be ready to beat her ass.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I think the next chapter will be the biggie...
Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 30 2011 05:27 pm
Good to hear Chad! Dani finally came to her senses. She would be crazy to let that fine man go. That's the problem with past relationship, people tend to bring all the hurt from that to their next relationship. Love that Chad is going to fight for her. Wonderful chapter. Me likey!
Author's Response:
Thanks.. glad you like it....
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: June 30 2011 05:23 pm
Please more and make it longer
Author's Response:
I try to write longer, but when I write it's like I'm writing an episode of a soap opera or tv show... Which is why I try to update more often. I promise I'll try to get to 2000 words for you. Gonna be hard, but I'll try! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2011 10:00 am
okay they are in nyc together now it's time for heather to enter the picture so can dani do what a woman does that loves her man and knock that skank out! or at least show everyone what a snob and drunk she is.
Author's Response:
Its time for the Draft... Heather will definitely be in the place soon...
Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 30 2011 07:59 am
:D
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Thanks
Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]Date: June 30 2011 06:12 am
Update again Update again
Author's Response: Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 30 2011 05:31 am
Oh Boy, Dani better watch out b/c Chad means BUSINESS, he is not going to let her go, Clause or not.
And Dani Dani, never let what happen with the last JERK set the tone for your next relationship... I'm glad that she is seeing this, and not letting Heather win, b/c thats exactlly what you are letting her do by being the "Ice Queen"
Oh and ITA with Casey, I would expose Heather for the Tramp that she is.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 30 2011 01:58 am
Alright glad that he not giving up on her and he going to fight to win her back. Yeah when us women get hurt by a man we take it out on the next guy and some times losing some one who could have been great for us. Can't wait to see what happen next thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2011 01:44 am