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Title: Chapter 18 - NYC Here we come

Great update. Glad Dani is coming to her senses.



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Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2011 01:31 am

Title: Chapter 18 - NYC Here we come

He should make her work for it LOL



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Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2011 01:24 am

Title: Chapter 18 - NYC Here we come

Chad threw down the gauntlet, but I am so glad that her best friend told her to give him a chance.  This is going to be so good, let the hot butt, naked sex ensue!! I want Cary to release what he has on Heather to TMZ she deserves no less.  I want her to pay and to pay dearly.



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Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2011 01:18 am

Title: Chapter 18 - NYC Here we come

Carey is made of Win. I hope Dani and Chad have some fun times together in NYC.



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LOL... Thanks, I like Carey too... Dani and Chad will get it together...

Reviewer: peach martini Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2011 12:58 am

Title: The Introductions

Hey D.....I miss u and this story, so glad your back...

thanks for the daily updates..you're the best



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Thanks... Its the least I can do since it took me a year!... LOL... Thanks!

 

Reviewer: vlovenaz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 30 2011 12:54 am

Title: Chapter 18 - NYC Here we come

Man, I love Carey! He is too funny.

Chad needs to just grab Dani and put it on her. Maybe that will snap her out of her craziness.

Thanks for the update!



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Thanks... Carey's up next! LOL... Yeah Dani, needs something... LOL

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2011 12:41 am

Title: Chapter 18 - NYC Here we come

Glad they're gonna give each other a chance eventhough she hasn't told him yet.

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Of course she is... those blue eyes are amazing...

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2011 12:34 am

Title: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

This story is so good. Feel bad for both Dani and Chad. I think Dani should give another chance. It's pretty obvious that Heather is a troublemaker and very jealous. Dani is just be stubborn because she doesn't want to be hurt. Love doesn't come without some risk. Well done and looking forward to more.



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Thanks ma'a,. I appreciate you reading.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 29 2011 09:44 pm

Title: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

I think that it's a consensus we all want to smack some sense into Dani, and give Heather a beat down.  Chad has admitted his mistake Dani, now forgive the man so that we can get an HEA!!



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LOL, so I see. Imma have to shape her up and quickly... LOL

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2011 03:54 pm

Title: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

Dani is just really irking the hell out of me...

She doesn't give the man who went thru all these hoops to get her into a relationship a chance to explain... And returning the bracelet by leaving it on his desk is just ugly...

I have a feeling Dani is going to regret her actions... Yes Chad was wrong for not letting her know what happened upfront but he deserves to be listened to and not just dismissed outright over his crazy ass ex...

I hope Heather gets hers soon... Cause now this is affecting their professional life...

Great UPDATE! Can't wait to see how this turns out.



Author's Response:

You know how you have that friend that is a "bag lady" like Erykah Badu said... well, Dani is classically that... Holding on to past baggage... WE're gonna help her get rid of this! And soon... Thanks for reading ma'am...

 

Reviewer: spanishfly69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2011 03:24 pm

Title: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

I LOVE the idea for the clause!! Great update!



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Thanks Kaci! I appreciate you taking the time to read it!

Reviewer: Kaci Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 29 2011 10:05 am

Title: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

Oh sh*t!! Mr Kerrington done laid down the law!! Who's gonna go?? If only Chad had kept his distance and kept his jaw from flapping!!! Please, please let there be some payback for that skank Heather!!

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Heather will get hers... Carey is gonna make sure of that...

 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2011 07:19 am

Title: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

Dani is making me want to shake some sense into her.

Why is she pushing away a perfectly good man because of his crazy ex?

Please let them get back together soon and give Dani a backbone and put Heather in her place.

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

I will address all of those issues before the end... She's a little gunshy, but she'll get her HEA... eventually

 

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2011 05:05 am

Title: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

Dani is really pushing Chad like she doesn't love him as much as he loves her.  Now Mr. Kerrington is going to force them to choose when she has already kicked him to the curb.  Forgive the man, he doesn't that crazy ho Heather.  I want my HEA!!!!



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LOL... She's gonna get her HEA, its just the getting there that's gotta happen

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2011 03:55 am

Title: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

love the story, please update soon



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Thanks... Updated today! :)

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 29 2011 02:49 am

Title: The Introductions

ok, so we understand the "clause" but some way it has to be worked around to accomdate them both.  oh please think of a way to where dani put heather in her place in front of all her snob friends including ben and the rest of the family.  looking forward to next update!



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Good idea... Heather's gonna get it... Thanks for the suggestion...

Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 29 2011 02:47 am

Title: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

Well, it should be interesting to see what they each come up with. They think Kerringston is being a hardass when makes them sign and abide by this rule, but it really can ruin a working environment. And not just for them, but for those around them. Look at how Dani is acting and treating her co-workers, all icy and cold. That needs to be left at the front door.

I really hate that she's giving Heather the upper hand here. 



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Heather has it coming and I really don't have a problem with the Clause... Gotta have some drama somewhere...

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2011 02:39 am

Title: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

Great update.  I think the clause is great and will show them not how to learn how to follow directions.  Now, does this mean one of them has to quit.  Dang...

why can't Dani get past this and talk it out.  He was wrong for not telling her.  



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Dani will get there eventually... Thanks for reading...

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2011 02:31 am

Title: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

Wow well wonder what sexy Chad got to say now? It either stay together and one of them leave or neve see each other agian hard choice.  I hope they able to keep their jobs and Dani and Chad work out their problems and be together agian. Thanks for the update.



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I think we'll make it happen for them... i love HEA

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2011 02:27 am

Title: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

DANG! Dani is being difficult. She knows Heather is certifies crazy; why would she jeopardize her relationship for that lunatic?

Insteresting...what are they going to do?



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Dani is gonna get it together...

Reviewer: 100%FAN Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2011 02:25 am

Title: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

love it :D



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Thanks.

Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2011 01:35 am

Title: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

Ok now I can see Dani being mad for a couple of days, but now it seems that she is looking for an excuse to PUSH Chad away, it seemed that she was always waiting for the other shoe to drop...but Chad is not the type to give up so easily.

Oh and Kerrington really needs to make some changes to that CLAUSE, b/c IMO he put that there for more personal than professional reasons.

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response: You know how some women just can't see the forest for the trees?

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2011 12:48 am

Title: Apologies a little to late

Awww...my heart just broke for both Dani and Chad...Chad is such a lunkhead...such a man...if only he had told her the truth so she wouldn't be ambushed like that...it could all have been better...but no, he took the coward's way out and hoped that everything would just go away...and he should know better...especially knowing how screwy in the head Heather is...hmmm, wonder what Carey has on her...I can't wait for that skank to get hers...oh please, make it good...

Chad's mama is right...he has to give Dani time...right now, she's disillusioned with him...and has lost faith in him...she needs time to work this out...and maybe she'll find it in her heart to forgive...and realize just what a great guy Chad is...she's already in love with him...so that's half the battle...just let time heal all wounds...I'm still hoping they can make it...

Looking forward to more, and welcome back, D...missed the story and you...



Author's Response:

I missed you guys too. I'm not leaving again... LOL :)

 

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2011 03:54 pm

Title: Apologies a little to late

I want Carey to expose Heather's skanky behind right now. As for  Ben, I would love to see his face when his black associates find out how racist his ass really is. His wife is already on the outs with him now and he may be sleeping on the couch tonight. Chad should have told Dani about that tramp but he thought is was over but crazy stalkers like Heather don't understand the word no and leave me alone. Dani and Chad will get their happy ending but not right now. Cant wait to read the next chapter.

 



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They are all gonna get theirs in their own special ways.

Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 27 2011 04:12 pm

Title: Apologies a little to late

Poor Chad!!! Wow, Heather really screwed him bigtime. I hope Carey spills the beans so that crazy Heather could get a grip on reality and leave Chad the hell alone. WTH is the matter with Ben???!! He's a racist jerk!!! He needs a reality check too!!

Author's Response:

Ben is a good ole country boy, a little outta touch. Carey is gonna handle it all...

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2011 09:10 am



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