What Dani said was fair.
Author's Response:
I thought so too, but she's being a little mean too.... Hurt people hurt people...
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2011 04:03 am
Long time in coming but totally worth the wait. Good luck with school and please update soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks, sorry for the delay, but I had to get back on my school grind... I will try to update again soon...
Reviewer: will2pear Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 26 2011 08:08 pm
Ok, what's up with Ben??? Is he a racist or something?? I don't care if he is my brother or not, but someone like that should stay the hell away from me if he will always come up with those racists remarks. If he can't accept my relationship and make my partner feel uncomfortable, then I don't want him in my life. We are living in 2011.
And as for Dani, I can understand that she is mad and hurt. But she knows how Heather is and Chad already explained to her how much of a stalker Heather is. This just shows that she does not trust Chad at all. And Chad should have told her!!! I hope that after this he WILL get a restraining order against Heather. He should not care that she will loose her job on E. Chad is not a saint,so he needs to stop being nice to her, because she will continue to screw his life. If he gets that restraining order on her, she will get the hint. And Carey better spill the goods that he knows about Heather out. If that will make her stay away. Then so be it!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Great reaview. Thank you. Ben is indeed a closeted racist. Heather is well she's a trip...
Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 26 2011 06:03 pm
well now, i am surely dispointed in dani. it's not like she didnt already know heather for the lying skank that she is. why not do a little something herself now i know chad momma would kick another women's butt if they ever, ever tried to hit in old man dave, just like any other sister that would infringe on what's hers and she knows he is . but no she goes home and hide, dont think so! any women esp. a sister you just dont walk in a mess with her man, now something needs to happen to take care of heather once and for all and dani not chad needs to handle her business, and then handle chad!!
Author's Response:
So I made her a little weak, but I think I explained why... She's non-confrontational....
Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 26 2011 08:53 am
Poor Dani...I hope she can work things out with Chad... men can be a little thick sometimes, and Chad should really have told Dani when it happened, but hopefully they can get past this.
Welcome back; looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
They will eventually get past it... Thanks for reading and I'm glad to be back... missed you guys!
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2011 08:37 am
I really want to pull Heathers hair out! And where is the smiley icons!??? I really want the slapping face one! Oh, hi by the way. I really love your stories! Great job! Please tell me that yoiu are going to have Heather hit by a mac truck?! LOL
Author's Response:
Thanks for enjoying my work. I love to write and even though I took an extended absence, you guys were always in my heart...
Reviewer: Singinangel12 Signed
[Report This]Date: June 26 2011 08:31 am
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2011 07:57 am
That is so sad. I understand where she is coming from on being embaressed but if she really thinks about it, she knows that Heather set all of that s&%t up. I can't wwait until you come back with more!!!!
Author's Response:
Soon. I'll give you more soon... :)
Reviewer: Alixermixer Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2011 06:43 am
I feel for Chad but can understand where Dani is coming from.
Author's Response:
I believe in HEA's, its just the journey getting there...
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 26 2011 06:15 am
Now Dani is mad, hurt and a whole punch of things. However, she needs to think and see reason for something.
I hope they get past this.
Author's Response:
Sometimes we don't think or see reason when we're hurt... Imma keep on writing though. I think I'm back on a roll... lol
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 26 2011 05:20 am
She just needs time to think it over. He should have come clean, but I think either way she would have been pissed with him.
Author's Response:
Hmm, I don't know. Dani is really easy going, hates to be embarassed, always wants to be in control. He took control away from her, by not telling her... Ya'll know I believe in HEA's, but its the getting there...
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2011 05:11 am
Dani didn't waste anytime gettting out of dodge!! I feel so sorry for Chad why didn't he go ahead and that restraining order on Heather he could have himself the heart ache. He should have know that Dani wouldn't be receptive now and he should have told her what happened. I want my HEA. I loved this chapter but it was short. Thank you for another update.
Author's Response: I know it's short, but I wanted to get another in, so I can get back on the roll? Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2011 04:02 am
I know she tick off I would be to myself but I hope she give sexy a chance again they make a amazing couple and make each other happy. I'm glad he told Heather off and wish someone run her over with a car. Yes I'm writting still suprise that I could do it lol. Love the story and thanks for the update. Question are you going to make the Randy Orton to a story or leave as a dabbler?
Author's Response: You guys are making me want to continue the story. Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: June 26 2011 03:42 am
I wish that I was in this story, so that I could BEAT Heather until the WHITE MEAT SHOWED, oh and I would BEAT Ben's ASS also the DOUCHE BAG.
I know that Dani is mad, but Chad needs to give her time... what she is mad as is the fact that he never told her, now she thinks that she can't TRUST him... I know they will get past this,
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'll try to update again soon. Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 26 2011 03:24 am
Wow, that was intense. What does his brother know? Why wasn't Heather outraged by the pinch? Did Dani over react? I hope these and other questions will be answered in the next update of...Dum, Dum, Dum!! "THE CLAUSE" !!! Great Job, can't wait!
Author's Response: Dum dum dum, stay tuned for these and more to be answered in the next installment of The Clause Reviewer: Buddha Signed
[Report This]Date: June 26 2011 03:05 am
Loving it. update again soon.
Author's Response:
I just did. It's a short one, but I did. Thanks!
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 26 2011 02:09 am
Welcome back!
I thought you had given up on your writing....
Heather needs to have the beat down to end all beat downs or be so publicly humiliated that no one in those social circles will want to be associated with her... Carey needs to hop to it and reveal this ho-bag heffa for the trifling trick she is... (Can you tell I don't like her???)
Dani should have never walked away... I don't care what another woman says to me in public, NEVER give a trick the satisfaction of seeing she got to you...
Can't wait to see how this is going to work out... Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks maam. I never gave up, although I started to several times.. Reviewer: spanishfly69 Signed
[Report This]Date: June 25 2011 11:03 pm
I just had to read this chapter again.
Author's Response:
:)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 25 2011 05:02 pm
Yay! You're back! I honestly thought that you dropped the story, but I understand that life gets in the way and a girl's got things to do. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
Chad...Chad...Chad...you are so screwed, dude. I hope your butt can talk fast because you got some 'splainin to do.
Author's Response:
There were so many times that I was gonna pull it, but I got my muse back... and she's rolling today! LOL... Thanks for picking it back up!
Reviewer: Shea Signed [Report This]Date: June 25 2011 03:36 pm
It's funny how it's acceptable for Heather to act like a drunk ho at the wedding but her friends make it a priority to criticize Dani for being black as if Heather's behavior is classy.
I cant wait to see how this is going to play out. I hope Dani doesnt jump to conclusions being that she knows what a skank Heather is.
Author's Response:
But you know how some women still jump to conclusions... Thanks for reading...
Reviewer: 100%FAN Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 25 2011 03:33 pm
Great update. I like...Now what is Chad going to do.
Dani isn't going to play games with him.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Nope Dani is about business, :)
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 25 2011 02:54 pm
Awesome story. looking forward to next update. hurry!
Author's Response:
thanks
Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 25 2011 08:16 am
great update. I m mAD AT CHAD for not coming clean with dani. He is going to regret not telling her as soon as he got back from his trip. Heather is a total skank who is desparte chasing after a man that doesnt want her.
Author's Response:
Yep, he's going to regret it...
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: June 25 2011 06:41 am
I think I need more! Dani shouldn't have walked away like that. She may be affected by those words, but never let that trick see it! Its time for Carey to work his magic.
Author's Response:
more coming soon
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 25 2011 06:35 am
Glad to have you Back. Please have Dani kick Heather's skanky ass in public.
Author's Response:
Now you know my characters are always too classy to fight. LOL... but good idea...
Reviewer: jai_03 Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 25 2011 05:31 am