Reviews For The Clause
Title: Rehearsal Dinners and Punches

I knew Ben was a racist all along. I'm glad Chad and the rest of the family gave him a physical and verbal beat down.  After the crap hits the fan, Heather may find herself kicked out of the wedding, I hope.Mama Barbara already knows she is a tramp and will do anything to be in the family. Great update

Author's Response: Thanks ma'am.  Ben showed himself earlier.

Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 05:01 am

Title: Rehearsal Dinners and Punches

I liked it a lot. Big Ben is a racist and even his wife knows. I have to say I was shocked at his reactions. I'm so glad Chad and his family defended Dani. Please don't let Heather cause too much trouble. Loved the update.

Author's Response: She won't cause tooooo much trouble, but she'll cause enough!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 03:17 am

Title: Rehearsal Dinners and Punches

Loved the chapter D... Ben deserved that ass whupping that Chad gave him, he is a A HOLE, I wonder where he learned that racist crap from b/c it didn't come from his parents.  And he thinks that Heather is "every man's dream"  thats funny... he doesn't see that Heather only wants to be with Chad b/c of their last name and b/c mom is famous, she want to brag that she's with a Collins.

On a happy note, I'm glad therewas an I Love You.

 

 



Author's Response: thank you for reading... and heather is about to catch it...

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 02:47 am

Title: Rehearsal Dinners and Punches

Loved it...imagine his brother being the racist.  Now everything is going to hit the fan when Miss Heather drops her bomb.  I believe they probably slept in the same bed, but not together.

Author's Response: The big reveal is coming next chapter! 

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 02:28 am

Title: Rehearsal Dinners and Punches

I can't how ignorant his brother was.  He deserved the punch to the jaw.  The parents are great.  Thanks for a great read.

Author's Response:

You knew it had to be one of them... thanks....

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 02:00 am

Title: Rehearsal Dinners and Punches

I have to say I agree completely with Jules's review. Chad needs to tell Dani so she doesn't get the suprise of her life in front of his whole family.  I also hope Brian's fiancee' will step up to the plate and say something because I have this feeling that if she doesn't she will put her own relationship with Brian in trouble and I don't think she wants that.  Although, she did come off as snobbish when she met Dani so I'm not to sure of her yet.  Another great chapter.  Please update soon.  We are all sitting on pins and needles waiting for the big reveal!

Author's Response: The big reveal is coming very very soon.... I don't think that she is gonna be Dani's ally at least not yet.

Reviewer: Punkin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 01:50 am

Title: Rehearsal Dinners and Punches

Wow...Ben was off the chain.  I was glad that Chad decked him!  Also glad to know his family doesn't feel the same way.

UGHHH  I HATE HEATHER!  I hope that Dani pops her in the mouth!  

Loved it!  Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response: Dani will remain a lady!  LOL 

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 01:38 am

Title: Rehearsal Dinners and Punches

Dsmooth, I still say you are doing this story.  The funniest line ever was Cathy telling Ben he sounded all "red-necky", is that even a word?  lol.  Please update soon.  I feel compelled to offer some constructive critisism.  You know what will make your story even better, longer chapters.  Thanks for the update.

A



Author's Response: Okay I am trying to get better about writing longer. Thank you for reading

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 01:36 am

Title: Rehearsal Dinners and Punches

Another great update!!! I just love Carey, he cracks me up! I can't believe Chad punched his brother but Ben deserved it. I'm happy Chad's whole family likes Dani and is sticking by Chad.

Chad better tell Dani about Heather after they come down from their lovin. If Chad doesn't tell her I'm hoping Brian's fiance will let everybody know the truth about Heather. Brian seems too cool to be marrying somebody that's just as shallow as Heather.

Once again, thanks for the update and I'll be waiting for the next.



Author's Response: Nah, Shelly is definitely not gonna spill the beans to Dani...

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 01:34 am

Title: Rehearsal Dinners and Punches

well glad that he punch that son of bitch for what he said. i can't stand people who dont think they hated people of a certian race or relgion just because the work or have so called friends who the same relgion or race  they dont like. it sounds realy stupid lol. glad that she had her baby back. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks girl!  The champ won again!  :) 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 12:46 am

Title: Rehearsal Dinners and Punches

Heather is a bitch and i hope Dani give Chad a chance to explain what happen. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Coming soon....

Reviewer: tcarey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 12:35 am

Title: That was awkard...

*Rubbing my hands together* Hmm there is scandal afoot! I FINALLY just got caught up with the story Dee. You are weaving a good tale, big sis. I'm definitely into it and can't wait for another update. We'll see how far Heather will get...I'm 'bout to strangle that woman! Good job!

P.S. I need some longer chapters lady! How about a 3,000 word limit next chapter? Yeah? Okay, yeah :)



Author's Response: My ADD having behind struggles with 2000 words at a time

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 03:26 pm

Title: That was awkard...

I dont like Ben or Shelly , they both are coming off as snobs . Chad had better tell Dani what happened because that skank Heather will pull out those pictures before the wedding. Chad's other brothers and parents seem to be cool with Dani.Ben should be protecting his brother from tramps like Heather instead of worrying about Dani.

Author's Response: Shelly is a snob and Ben is an idiot... Chad's not gonna tell he's too scared...

Reviewer: jai_03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 03:02 pm

Title: That was awkard...

Oh Snap...of course Heather is the Maid of Honor...oh I sense some ugliness is about to occur!!

I can't wait for the next chapter...I definitely see some fireworks about to happen!



Author's Response: It's about to go off... not too bad though.

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 06:48 am

Title: That was awkard...

That was interesting. Your formating does seem to be a little different at times and places, but I think it's okay.

Author's Response: I don't understand what you mean by that.  I normally just cut and paste.  Was it difficult to follow? 

Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 05:20 am

Title: That was awkard...

My chick bad, my chick hood....LMAO! What do white boys know about hood!  So funny!

I love me some Chad, but Carey could get it!  I love me some Carey and his soiled, slusy self! LOL! Please consider writing a story for Carey...PLEASE!

I just discovered this story and I just want you to know that I love it!  Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying this... Cameron and Tavin are one of my ALL , SUPER DUPER ALL TIME favorite couples... Girl, you did that!  :)  And just caused you asked, Carey might get him a story after all! 

Reviewer: Chaynetv Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 05:08 am

Title: That was awkard...

Loved it!!! Also really loving me some Carey!!! He has me cracking up. Oh oh, Heather is BAD news and I can see the drama coming. If I were Chad I'd be scared right now not knowing when Heather is gonna blow. Hmmm, I'm thinking she drugged him or something, then stagged the whole thing. I don't know if I'm feeling Shelly either....What a snob!!! I'm sorry but it makes me wonder about Brian because I'd have called her on her sh*t. Is she really that shallow??? Brian really is into her??? Sad!!!  That sh*t shouldn't be tolerated. WTH is up with Ben giving Dani the cold shoulder????

Author's Response:

You know when you're in love you can't see the forest for the trees. 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 03:28 am

Title: That was awkard...

Hey D, this was a good update... Chad and Dani are so cute together, you can tell that they only have eyes for eachother.

I thought that I wasn't going to like the mom, but she was kinda funny, and seemed to really like Dan, the dad was not bad eitheri... Brain and Carey were their usual crazy selves.

OK I don't like Shelly, I don't know what Brian sees in her, but she's a snob, and I can see why her and Heather are friends... I don't like Ben either, he seems like a jerk... as for Heather, she needs to come up missing.



Author's Response: Just make her come up missing... LOL.. Hmmm... nah.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 03:12 am

Title: That was awkard...

Forgot to rate.

Author's Response: thx

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 03:10 am

Title: That was awkard...

I like Dani and Chad together, but it's obviously Heather is waiting to drop the bomb.

Author's Response: yep she is... bomb coming soon...

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 03:08 am

Title: That was awkard...

wow i so hated heather i wanted to kick that woman behind and rip her hair out but that not acting like a lady lol. love how he looks at dani  with love and how she getting along with his family so well. love the story and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks dear. 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 02:51 am

Title: That was awkard...

yo that trick needs to get pimped smack thats what she needs! any who good work with the chapters now just keep updating.

Author's Response:

:) Thanks

Reviewer: june Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 02:25 am

Title: That was awkard...

Awesome update!! Hmmm the jurey is out on Shell, she seemed a little fake to me. As for Heather she is going to make a screne. Chad's mom is a hoot!!  I hope my girl Dani can hold her own with Heather. Look forward to reading more.

Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 02:00 am

Title: That was awkard...

I can see this getting ugly real fast and the reason for the clause of no fraternizing between the coworkers is going to be evoked because I can see Dani and Chad having a big falling out because of Heather.  Chads mother is a mess...didn't know her son was into the swirl?  Yikes. Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 01:29 am

Title: That was awkard...

That's Awkward!

Thanks for the update~ I love Dani/Chad together. Why is Ben being so cool to Dani? Is he a fan of Heather or has Heather been spreading viscious lies about Dani? There's not a doubt in my mind that Heather will try to antagonize Dani by showing pictures of Chad/Dani getting busy. Hopefully Chad will clue Dani in so that she's isn't blindsided by Heather. I'm certain Dani can hold her own in any professional situation, but when her heart is involved, her emotions are much too strong. It appears that she has an ally in Chad's dad, George. The future Mrs. Collins is obviously a snob and will encourage Heather to go for it with Chad and embarass Dani. I'm looking forward to the next update and expecting Chad to be the gentleman I know he was raised to be. Otherwise, this leaves Dani in a hostile environment without any support.

Author's Response: He's definitely a Heather fan which is why he's so blase blah about Dani.

Reviewer: Traci Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 01:23 am



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