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Title: That was awkard...

Great update!!! Please, please, please let Chad tell Dani about Heather. Don't let him have her all embarrassed by Heather's antics all the way in Tennessee and around his family.

 I have a feeling that if he tells her himself she will know Heather was up to no good. If Heather tells Dani, Dani is going to automatically assume the worst because Chad kept it from her.

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 01:21 am

Title: That was awkard...

What was Ben's problem there? That was odd.

Heather...its women like her that make it hard for us all! Just have some semblance of decorum and class about yourself and go the hell on somewhere! There has never been anything between you and this man that was all that serious!

Chad...dont be a punk! Tell Dani and dont give Heather that kind of power over you! Dont let her run you with this.



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:)

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 01:00 am

Title: That was awkard...

My chick bad...LOL. That song has been in my head all day and then I come on here and it's in the story. Too funny.

I hope Heather gets her face stomped. Update soon! 

 



Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: Shea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 12:36 am

Title: That was awkard...

Heather and her friends are going to cause a scene. I love his family especially Carey, well not so fond of Ben. He doesn't seem trustworthy right now. I was hoping when he got back to the hotel room he would tell her, but that wasn't the case. He needs to tell Carey and with that maybe Carey can head her off at the pass. Snoop around and see f she really has the pics. I enjoyed the update.

Author's Response:

:)

 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2010 12:03 am

Title: That was awkard...

Great chapter.  Although, Heather is still getting on my nerves.  She needs to be dealt with and soon.  I have this feeling she is going to cause a big scene at the wedding or later in the house after Chad and Dani go in.

Author's Response: Thanks. We are coming to the end of Heather soon.

Reviewer: Punkin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 26 2010 11:22 pm

Title: The Introductions

Why is that ho still trying to get her claws into CHad?  Doesn't she understand the word now? And I hope that he really did have bump ugilies with vile  woman.  Great update!!

Author's Response:

:)

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2010 11:22 pm

Title: Nashville, TN

Awesome update!! It was hot. Chad is very romantic, what a hotel suite.

Author's Response: Thank you ma'am

Author's Response: Thank you ma'am

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2010 01:09 am

Title: Things happen

Oh my!! Big mistake not telling Dani what went down. Heather is a piece of work, she staged that some how I doubt anything happened. I love Davids character he is a trip. Awesome update.

Author's Response: thanks lady!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2010 12:48 am

Title: Nashville, TN

OMG I want a chad, that was soooooooo hot. i hopeshe has a little chad and i hopefor the best for them 



Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: Leila7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 07:42 pm

Title: Nashville, TN

wow that was so sweet what he done for her. the flowers the nice bath everything was such romatic. glad they took it to the next level but still worry about him being naked in the one woman room. thanks for the updated. can't wait to the meet the family.

Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 04:53 pm

Title: Nashville, TN

nice lemons

Author's Response: THanks... LOL

Reviewer: cynn333 Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 08:40 am

Title: Nashville, TN

That was a hot sex seen. i can't wait for Chad to show up at the wedding with Dani because some narrow-mined racist relative is going to put there feet in their mouth. its going to be on and poppin.

Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: tcarey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 07:30 am

Title: Nashville, TN

Oh Boy!!! Talk about some hot loving. Hmmm, I fear this love fest is gonna be bust soon if that skank Heather shows up again.

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:)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 06:30 am

Title: Nashville, TN

Well Dsmoothone, you got your wish, cause I enjoyed the hell out of that.  Thanks for taking us along for the ride.

A



Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 05:38 am

Title: Nashville, TN

Great chapter.  I still thinks he needs to tell Dani about Heather's latest stunt and soon.  He should know how she is going to react because of the stunt with Heather on his couch.  It will be better coming from him and not Heather.  Has he learned nothing?

Author's Response:

Dense men...

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: Punkin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 03:57 am

Title: Nashville, TN

Three snaps up and a swirl. That was a great update. Chad and Dani are a great couple but I know drama is coming. Please, please, please update soon.

Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: will2pear Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 03:56 am

Title: Nashville, TN

Awww that was good. Sweet and sexy.

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:)

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 03:24 am

Title: Nashville, TN

She better had of said she loved him, after that. Awesome update. Unfortunately Heather is still lurking in the background. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 03:16 am

Title: Nashville, TN

Awww that was soo sweet and romantic and hot!  LOL...I kind of wished he had told her about Heather first, but we will see what happens!! 

Loved it!



Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 03:02 am

Title: Nashville, TN

That was so nice.  No wonder deho is trying to hold onto him.  My goodness...wow, I am blown away by the sheer sexiness of how romantic he is and was with her.  Great job.  Thanks

Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 01:08 am

Title: Nashville, TN

Nice... I love they way you wrote this chapter.  Now, he isn't sure if he slept with his ex.  Now, he should tell Dani about what happened.  When she finds out it will be trouble. Especially, after they have proclaimed their love for one another.

Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 01:06 am

Title: Nashville, TN

MMMMM GOOD! PLEASE GIVE ME MORE!

Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: keisha2 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 01:04 am

Title: Nashville, TN

That was absolutely lovely, D...I knew their first time would be so special and I wasn't disappointed...but I feel this is the calm before the storm...something tells me the bliss will not continue indefinitely...but at least I got the 'I love you's'...that will have to substain me through the heartbreak and angst coming their way...I loved this beautifully moving update...update soon...loving this story and this couple...

Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 01:00 am

Title: Nashville, TN

Wow that was HOT D... Dani was going to seduce Chad but he was the the one that did the seducing, I'm surprised that they didn't burst into flames.

Please hurry with more.



Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 12:47 am

Title: Things happen

OK Chad had better tell Dani about Heather b4 she hears if from someone else and gets it all wrong.

I think that Heather spiked Chad's drink b/c I can't see him getthng that plastered... Heather will do anything to get Chad back.



Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 12:34 am



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