Reviews For The Clause
Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

LOL...solid friends..you cant beat it with a stick!

Author's Response: Sure can't

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 04:36 am

Title: Twisted Taco's and Emotions

Oh no, they are busted for a friendly kiss...oh man, not good.  Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: Thanks girl for still reading it.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 04:17 am

Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

TY for the short but good update.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading it

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 03:59 am

Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

Things are moving right along at a great pace!! Glad the friends aproved!! Nice song choice that Chad sang. Thank you for the update it was great.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the update

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 03:30 am

Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

I love the easy-going interactions between Chad & Dani. They're a cute couple.

I learned something new. I always thought that Rose Royce was the only group to perform I Wanna Get Next To You since they're the ones that made it famous. I never knew that The Temptations performed it as well. I need to find that version. 

 



Author's Response: I think they make a good couple as well...

Reviewer: Shea Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 03:15 am

Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

Wow that was so cute, can i have him gift wrapped with a cherry on top please.

Author's Response: Thank you.  Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Leila7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 02:42 am

Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

Loving it...yea

Author's Response: Thank you for reading it

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 02:11 am

Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

Once again, you didn't disappoint with this update. Chad singing to Dani was soooo sweet. I'm actually starting to care for these characters already. These two are great together.

Thank you for being good about updating this story for us. Enjoy your weekend and I'll be waiting for the next update. 



Author's Response: Thank you for reading and caring about them like I do... So I updated anyway!

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 01:57 am

Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

Yay Chad......and Yay Dsmoothone

A



Author's Response: Thanks A!

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 01:52 am

Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

I enjoyed it. She will be his for all time, eventually. I wouldn't call what's about to happen trouble. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and enjoying it

 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 01:49 am

Title: The Introductions

Dani is in denial she was already in trouble before he meet her friends.  He's fine, treats her with respect, had some home training and he has got a good paying job.  What is there not to like about that fine specimen of man Chad?  I can't wait to see the sparks really fly!!!

Author's Response: Sparks will be flying soon.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 01:28 am

Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

wow he cute can  dress has a job no kids and complety in love with her yeah she in big trouble lol but the good kind. he get along with her friends and i just love how he remembers her fav things and never forget them thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks girl!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 01:18 am

Title: Lunch with the big dog

This is my thing why not get them to sign papers to release the company from being sued if they do get together. That would make it so easy.

 

He get to keep his good workers and they get to be in a relationship.



Author's Response: That's too easy... and not enough drama for this "harlequin" romance...LOL

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2010 07:59 pm

Title: Lunch with the big dog

Heather is a used up tramp and needs to leave Chad alone. She will try to get him back anyway she can although he doesnt want her. Dani may have to forget she's a lady and beat that ho down to show her to stay out of her and chad's business.



Author's Response: No violence for my heroines... LOL...

Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 26 2010 05:45 pm

Title: Lunch with the big dog

Great update!!  I just hope Mr K won't be too hard on them.  I just hope Dani makes Chad work for it and not let him hit too easily . . .

Author's Response: Dani will make him work.. Mr. K is a softie and who knows where we go from here....

Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2010 08:34 am

Title: Lunch with the big dog

wow nice  boss they do like each other alot and it great love it. I'm glad he told his ex off and didnt' sleep with her. that hard when you havent' had sex in a long long time trust me i know lol. Chad got some hot brothers lol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Chad's brothers= sexiness times three.... Chad is strong... not going give in to the jezebel that quickly...

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2010 05:05 am

Title: Lunch with the big dog

Wow, this story is starting to get juicy. Heather is crazy and needs to get a life. I hope Dani and Chad will hold strong and not fall for any of her tactics. Please, don't let Dani second guess Chad over some mess Heather might pull.

I want Dani and Chad to be a united couple that won't put up with outside interference, especially since they know each other so well.

I'm also liking Mr. K, I wouldn't be shocked if he sends Dani and Chad on an assignment together just to push those two in the right direction. Great update and I'll be waiting for more.



Author's Response: Get outta my head... LOL

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 26 2010 04:38 am

Title: Lunch with the big dog

why does a hoe messes up a good thing, and then expect everything to be back the way that it was.  I call them delusional hoes.

I think that Mr. K. is not against them becoming a couple, but against what can happen when things go badly.

Fantastic update. keep them rolling.



Author's Response: Thank you ma'am... LOL at hoes...

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2010 03:40 am

Title: Lunch with the big dog

Loved the update. Mr K is a very smart man and can see more than they think. I agree with him that they are smitten with each other. Heather needs a reality check and soon by the looks of it!!!

Author's Response: She will be getting her reality check soon

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2010 03:28 am

Title: Lunch with the big dog

Mr. K. may have to re-word that clause. The ex is kind of scary right now. I hope she doesn't turn into one of those if I can't have him no one can kind of people. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response: Mr. K is working on a master plan...

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2010 03:15 am

Title: Lunch with the big dog

Heather is crazy and she needs to be choked!!!  I don't like that ho, great update!!

Author's Response: She will be dealt with soon. Thanks for enjoying the update

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2010 03:08 am

Title: Lunch with the big dog

My question to Chad is..why did he even let her in his house? I dont understad behavior like that, only because he already knows how she is. She wont take a flat out no for an answer and he clearly can't reason with her, so why do that. It has nothing to do with being civil or polite.

She doesn't know when to quit. She's in there trying to grab his package and practically chasing him around the livingroom, all because he let her in the joint. The fact that she obviously sees nothing wrong with screwing anything with a penis while she's with him should be grounds for him to NEVER let her his home. But thats just me. It's an unnecessary potential disaster he can easily avoid by keeping her out.



Author's Response: Because Chad at his core is good and doesn't know how to be mean.  The reason in my mind that he let her in was because he didn't want a scene in front of his house and neighbors....

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2010 02:12 am

Title: Lunch with the big dog

OOh Busted!! Doesnt seem like David minds. Great Update!! Looks like once those 2 get going Heather is going to be a drama Queen.

Author's Response: Yep, Heather is NOT going to be happy at all....

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2010 01:32 am

Title: Lunch with the big dog

Great Story....

I love the daily updates....

keep it up (+: 

 



Author's Response: Thanks, don't get too spoiled... :) 

Reviewer: vlovenaz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 26 2010 01:18 am

Title: Let's talk about it

Heather needs to go back to whereever she came from. Not only will they have Heather to deal with but Mr.Kerrington as well. They are going to have a few obstacles in their way. As long as they come together I'm good. Karaoke night should be fun. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Yep, a myriad of things to deal with....

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2010 03:18 pm



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