Title: Chapter 36

how I've missed DeLeon. And yeah, the Sheriff oughta be dead.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2012 05:02 am

Title: Chapter 36

I'm so upset with you right now...but its fitting...the complete clam up...the non - reciprocation of the words...ohhhh DeLeon

Reviewer: TheSouthernScribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2012 04:37 am

Title: Chapter 35

I ain't saying nothing until I read the next chapter...you just better clean up the crumbs woman...clean up the crumbs

Reviewer: TheSouthernScribe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2012 04:32 am

Title: Chapter 36

damn what a heart wrennching chapter woow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2012 04:00 am

Title: Chapter 35

Great update.

I am glad for this one. 

Thanks

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 23 2012 01:33 am

Title: Chapter 35

That was all so weird with the sheriff. I'd like the backstory on all these Hopes people.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 23 2012 12:50 am

Title: Chapter 35

Love this story. I want to know what happened to DeLeon and I hope they get the sheriff

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2012 12:34 am

Title: Intro

you made my weekend - i missed this story. 

Excellent!!

Reviewer: katie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2012 09:03 pm

Title: Chapter 35

Sheeeit!!!!

That darn sheriff! Can he do us all a favor and jump head first onto a couple of rocks in the Creek????! I really hope that DeLeon is alright and that the second shot was for that scum of a sheriff! Hopefully the first shot missed DeLeon. Darn stinking sheriff!!!

 

I am so stoked that we got an update! I literally got up and did a little jig, lol! Keeping my fingers crossed for another one. You once again outdid yourself I.T. (**,)

Reviewer: JazziePassion Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2012 08:29 pm

Title: Chapter 35

Please tell that DeLeon is still alive and that asswipe of the Sheriff didn't kill.  I so want the Sheriff dead!!!  I have so missed this story, so please try your hardest to give us another update today.  P-L-E-A-S-E!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2012 08:15 pm

Title: Chapter 35

Awesome chapter, I was hoping he would throw his butt ofver the cliff.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2012 07:59 pm

Title: Intro

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 12 2012 06:18 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Team DeLeon!

 

And though I generally hate love triangles, this story is pretty good.

Reviewer: ladake79 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 30 2011 09:59 pm

Title: Chapter 34

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I stayed up all night reading this, then it got tense, an d you just cut me off!! 
I feel deprived!!!!PLEASE UPDATE!!!














Reviewer: LuvTheEars2232 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2011 09:03 pm

Title: Chapter 34

Wow!!! I love this story.  My daughter read this last week and told me I needed to read it.  Can't wait to see them Halpern men and crazy-ass Kendra soon. Please contiune to update

Reviewer: othello Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2011 10:54 pm

Title: Chapter 34

Oh my word!! You brought it back!! I could cry with happiness!!! Thank You thank you thank you!! This is like my favorite story of all time! (^^,)

Does this mean there is an update on the way?

Reviewer: JazziePassion Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 08:11 pm

Title: Chapter 34

Any update for you is a welcome one, but, golly, the suspense!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 14 2011 05:17 am

Title: Chapter 34

Great update! Can't wait to see what will happen next. Please update soon.....

Reviewer: Pris67 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2011 01:50 am

Title: Chapter 34

Oh Noooo, hope she'll be ok. They need to strip the sheriff of his title and castrate the bastard!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2011 08:36 am

Title: Intro

Oh no, I really hope Kendra survives the fall and is okay. That's horrible that that happened but I'm glad Deleon got there in time before she was raped.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2011 07:08 am

Title: Chapter 34

Wow!  Will she survive...she did good trying to save them.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2011 05:00 am

Title: Chapter 34

Not good st all! Maybr we will finally find out what happened with his family.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2011 02:49 am

Title: Intro

ahhh, Hells bells!!!! whatcha go and end it like that for??? WTH!!! If Deleon loses Kendra and he will lose his mind.. This new twist will send everyone in that crazy ass town for a loop..

Please hurry up with the next chapter..

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2011 10:52 pm

Title: Chapter 34

No! Damn it, Kendra fell! IT, I'm sorry but there's no way you could be so sadist as to make us wait another month before we know how this pans out. I need to know!!

Reviewer: islandlass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2011 08:32 pm

Title: Chapter 34

ahh hell naw!!! Hope needs to die.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 10 2011 08:14 pm



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