Title: Chapter 34

OH, HELL NO!!! I HOPE THAT KENDRA IS ALIVE, AND PLEASE DON'T LET DELEON KILL THE SHERIFF.  LET THE INMATES I PRISON TAKE CARE OF THAT BECAUSE THEY DON'T LIKE POLICE IN THE HOOSEGAU!!   DONALD IS AN PUNK @$$ *ITCH AND DESERVES A BEAT DOWN.  LOVED THE UPDATE

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2011 08:02 pm

Title: Chapter 34

Wow

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2011 07:19 pm

Title: Chapter 34

IT, sooo good! Please come back soon. Loved it.

Reviewer: Romance Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 10 2011 07:14 pm

Title: Chapter 34

please, please update soon, love your story

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2011 06:29 pm

Title: Chapter 34

She has to be okay, this family cannot have anymore heartache.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2011 06:23 pm

Title: Chapter 34

Well, hot damn. What an update! What a story. What a bastard Donald is. But what happened with them to make him so bitter. Can't wait to find tha out. More importantly I hope Kendra is okay. I know in theory she will be, but a sista cannot catch a break!

Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2011 06:01 pm

Title: Intro

The suspense is going to kill me so please update soon! This is without a doubt my favorite story on the board. I so want Kendra and DeLeon to have a happily ever after!

Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2011 06:00 pm

Title: Intro

Please update!

Reviewer: Pris67 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2011 04:39 pm

Title: Chapter 33

Aw man, just when I gave up hope that this story was going to continue you pull me back in! Happy to have you back! And man, what a way to progress the story, I was just waiting for Hope to show his true crazy. Thanks, cant wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 22 2011 05:03 am

Title: Chapter 33

OMG the sheriff went crazy!!!  I hope DeLeon kicks his ass...

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2011 06:31 am

Title: Chapter 33

Oh, Lord, this man done lost it! Kendra, how could you not trust your gut, when you've been living by it for the past week? Sheriff, when DeLeon gets his hands on you, you're a dead man!

Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 21 2011 04:33 am

Title: Chapter 33

What tha HELL WAS YOU THINKING KENNY!


Thank you, thank you, thank YOU!  I’ve been waiting so very patiently for this update and now I’ve got TWO!  But…


dayum, what tha hell was she thinking!! 


Oh snap…DeLeon’s ‘bout to catch a charge –hell, all of them will to protect Kendra and bring her back safely.  For someone who kinda comes across as a loner, she sure as hell have accumulated an eclectic mix of fierce supporters.  I like that about her personality and I flove her and DeLeon together!  Prince’s apprehension is understandable but when it’s right, it’s right and Kendra is in love with her country boy.


The Sheriff is seriously disturbed;  I'm afraid for her.  It seems her ‘family’ may be too late.  Maybe, maybe not, we’ll see.


Pins and needles  I.T., pins and needles…

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2011 03:00 am

Title: Chapter 33

Please update as soon as you can.

Reviewer: Raven Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2011 12:10 am

Title: Chapter 33

Soooooooooooo, you are really going to leave us on a cliffhanger? Please update a.s.a.p. I don't think I can take having to wait a month for the next installament.

Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 11:10 pm

Title: Chapter 33

no way, all -ell will brake loose

Reviewer: brownie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 10:13 pm

Title: Chapter 33

Oh my God you have to UPDATE, dont leave us in suspence 2 long

Reviewer: tish1234 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 08:46 pm

Title: Chapter 33

Have I told you how much I adore your stories? Poor Kendra.  I hope Deleon can get to her before that lunatic sheriiff rapes and probably kills her, Damn the people in this town re crazy. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 04:13 pm

Title: Chapter 33

that did not make sense for her to get in he car with the sheriff.

I hope she doesn't get raped.  Please.

Where is DeLeon?

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 03:21 pm

Title: Chapter 33

What a Looney!!! Thanks for the update

Reviewer: sharlene Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 02:27 pm

Title: Chapter 33

Sheriff is crazy as a bat. He is as good as dead.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 02:24 pm

Title: Chapter 33

The sheriff mind's den flew the coocoo's nest. WTH??? Is he the hard up for .....??? He needs a reality check with a foot up his ass. She really should have waited. Sheriff was just acting too strange. Hope Deleon can find them in time.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 08:08 am

Title: Intro

OMG- the sheriff has lost his mind! Not only is DeLeon going to beat him senseless but the whole clan is going to whip his ass! I so love this story - thank you for making my weekend with the first update and now my week with this 2nd one. I'm not even mad that you left me with a cliffhanger! Hurry back - please!

Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 06:52 am

Title: Chapter 33

Kendra made a big mistake getting in the car with that lunatic.

Coraline is about to become a widow. That sheriff has lost his damn mind. DeLeon is going to lose his shit on that fool.

I so love this story.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 06:35 am

Title: Chapter 33

Oh no, I really hope someone gets to Kendra in time before that sheriff does anything to her. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 06:28 am

Title: Chapter 32

YAY! I Love this Story

Reviewer: sharlene Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2011 09:00 am



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