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Title: Ichi (1)

I really like this story.  I'm on a kick for Blasian couples, so this is brilliant.



Author's Response:

Blasian love is wonderful! Thank you!

 Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2011 12:58 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

Intense, captivating, I can't wait to read more. Luckily I just found this and there is more to read.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

 Reviewer: Acorn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 14 2011 04:31 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

Great start to the story.  I guess he married the woman that his family wanted him to and now he finds out that Sara had his baby.  I wonder how his wife and family will react to this new revelation.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yes, he did marry the woman he wanted and the fun begins.

:)

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2011 06:50 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

For chapter one the correct way to type one in japanese is really ichi in romaji there is no such thing as ti its really just chi. Just like there is no such thing as si its really shi. I really like the story! I just had to point it out because I saw it. I can relate because Im Japanese and Black [and other European things)...



Author's Response:

Thank you! I will remember that. Glad you liked the story. :)

 Reviewer: gigichan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 12 2011 06:34 am
Title: Ichi (1)

I really enjoy reading this story and I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.

My only two negative comments is the use of Japanese. In some of the the parts it was used incorrectly. sensei and etc.

And her name being hard to pronounce would actually be the easiest name to pronounce. They would say サ(sa)ラ(ra) but in an A sound not E sound in there pronouciation. It makes me cringe when you say Sarua. As well as China and Korea too would be able to pronounce it well.

Sorry, had to say it but, I understand that you do not speak Japanese.

But I do enjoy this story^^ Thank you!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the story so far. Let me know if you see more mistakes please. I try to research things I have forgotten, but having two heads is even better.

Thanks! :)

 Reviewer: StudentinJ Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 11 2011 08:55 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

Great story so far!  I love Shouda! I am glad that Sara is handling it the way she is, but I don't think Mama-san is going to let it rest. As for the wife, still waters run deep and I think she may blow! And Yuki, I hope he has matured and really become a man, because he was a punk before!  Let's be honest, there are more mature ways to end a relationship!  I don't know how I feel about them getting together, beyond just being there for their son.  Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Thank you! Poor Yuki gets no love, but perhaps he doesn't deserve any. Sara and Yuki hmmm....but he's married. :)

 Reviewer: ladybird08 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2011 04:29 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

Great story



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2011 01:44 am
Title: Ichi (1)

Nooo please dont end there..I do despise spineless Yuki but I would like moree..I love your style of writing and this story was excellent in the emotions it displayed as well as hide..excellent job sweetie!!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes Yuki was very spineless, maybe he will experience a change. Thanks again! 

:)

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2011 11:57 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

Im glad im not the only one feeling bad for Yuki's wife. She cant have children, Inlaws hate her and Yuki respects her thats bout it. Yukis momma needs to go somewhere. Like it is said even the most classy folks can act ghetto. I have a feeling when it comes to her son Sara's Lakeishanna will come out.



Author's Response:

Turn that frown upside down. Hopefully Kaoru will get it together. Yes, Sara has the motherly instinct. Thanks!

 Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 10 2011 10:54 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

Great start! I love BW/AM stories! Will he tell his wife he has a son and how will she react? She might want to get him just because she can't have any.



Author's Response:

Long live BASIAN love!! Yes!!! :)

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2011 09:49 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

:-(   Just one, well you could write for experience and me ;-) LOL!!

It really is a wonderful story and the father and son connection already, well it's just boundless with possibilities. 

Please, think about it...

Thanks!



Author's Response:

I think I missed this review somehow, I'm sorry. :)

 Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2011 08:56 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

I feel sorry for Yuki's wife,but she needs to flee and go find her own happiness. I would love for Sara and Yuki to get back together, but I want Yuki to work really hard for her love and Shoudas.  I love this story and I am so glad you decided to continue.

Author's Response:

The first time I read this I laughed when you said 'she needs to flee.' I don't know why...I'm sorry. *writing* Yuki should work hard for Sara. Got it!

Thanks! :)

 Reviewer: LilBluestar Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2011 08:48 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

Yayyy!!! Thanks for continuing with the story.  Definitely want more lol.



Author's Response:

Your welcome! :)

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 10 2011 07:20 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

Should you do more? OF course. I hooked looking for another update. Yuki



Author's Response:

I don't know how I missed this... Thanks! :)

 Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 10 2011 07:18 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

Do more woman, please! There is so few Asian/Black stories out here.


Author's Response:

So true. I am a whole hearted supporter of Basian love.

 Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 09 2011 06:42 am
Title: Ichi (1)

i would very much like to read more but if this is where the story stops then thanks for the one-shot! truely enjoyed it!

Author's Response:

Love your very diplomatic review. Too kind. Thank you!

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2011 04:43 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

I need more!!

Author's Response:

Got you covered. ;)

 Reviewer: LilBluestar Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2011 08:48 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

Please, for all the things that is holy, please make this into a full story.  I was hook like a fish from the very beginng. Eventhough you have some miner mistakes, it didn't bother at all. update soon!!

 Thank You! ;-)



Author's Response:

For all things holy. Very dramatic. Drama is good. Thank you!

 Reviewer: Elli Mac08 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 06 2011 05:29 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

Yes please.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: ladybird08 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2011 05:22 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

Yes, you should do more!!! It is an awesome story, and I hope that I will be able to read more of it! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for the encouragement. :)

 Reviewer: Faith Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 06 2011 04:30 pm
Title: Ichi (1)

Nia Z that gif lmao!!! But i couldn't agree more. Yes you should write more. This is gewd.

Author's Response:

We should start a Nia Z avi fan club. Thank you!

 Reviewer: Music Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 06 2011 07:30 am
Title: Ichi (1)

Yes, you should definitely do more.

Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

 Reviewer: Ketaj1316 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 06 2011 07:22 am
Title: Ichi (1)

AWESOME! Hell yes you should do more!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your enthusiasm!

 Reviewer: Monique Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2011 06:57 am
Title: Ichi (1)

More PLease!!! 



Author's Response:

Then for you and the Rock. He looks kind of thin doesn't he?

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2011 05:22 am
Title: Ichi (1)

Great start to the story.  Please continue.  Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you. I will.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2011 05:05 am


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