Sara/Yuki, for me! I hope Umezawa-san does something else so Sara can really go at her! She needs to be taken down a bit! Yuki will have his work cut out for him with Kamir in the picture.
Author's Response:
Come now, we must seek peace. Let us not invent situations for violence. That was funny though.
Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed
[Report This]Date: April 30 2011 03:30 am
ho.ly. shit.
showdown indeed. but long time coming.
so glad mom-dukes got told the hell about herself. rudeness. ugh.
and i'm starting to really like Kamir. (btw, you wrote Kumar in a few places; not sure how that fits in.)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the heads up, I'm going to fix that. It was a typo. :)
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: April 25 2011 05:01 am
I didn't realize that there were more chapters. What a treat. I almost missed that damn smackdown. But something tells me that Yuki's mother let that go in one ear and out the other. She is so used to getting her way that she won't take Sara seriously. I felt like knocking hell of her myself.
As to pairings, I really am intrigued by Kamir. Yuki, not so much. However, I have to see more of Kamir to see if he might be good for Sara. I have a deep fondness for Kaoru and hope she's not hurt by this. I know I don't want to see Sara in an affair with Yuki. It would harken back to him having his cake... He's not someone that I think highly up right now.
Author's Response:
Gotta keep up! Ha! I think many share your feelings for the mother. Wanting to do her physical harm is a common theme. Well, lets find out more about Kamir then, shall we? Poor Yuki, he gets no love.
Thank You!!!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: April 24 2011 05:05 am
Sara/Yuki
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2011 07:46 pm
This is definitely a wild ride. Kamir is a nice guy. I wince as I say that because that is usually the death toll to a relationship. But it seemed as if Yuki really wanted to try with his wife.
Wherever you go with this, I Love it.
Author's Response:
Very perceptive of you...wait, have I already said that to you? Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Acorn Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2011 07:54 am
Sara/Yuki get my vote. I'm proud of Sara for not slapping her, becasue I would have went off. Great update.
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Angela Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2011 03:37 am
Gosh I don't know I really love them both Kamir/Sara or Yuki/Sara, but whoever you choose...
Author's Response:
You are the only one who has actually said they love Yuki. I'm floored. :)
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 11:25 pm
man this story is great! i know "ideal" Shouda ends up growing up with his parents Yuki & Sara but in my opinion i feel like that ship has sailed. i'm liking how Yuki & Kaoru are starting something - after 8 years (lol!) and Kamir, or should i say Shahid Khapoor is just to damn fine to give up, lol! the choices, the choices so many - good luck, Sara!
however the story goes i know it's going to be a joyride - thank you!
Author's Response:
You are right, a lot of time has passed. Can Yuki overcome it? Maybe he shouldn't try, I mean, he has a wife and everything. Yes, I know, Shahid is fine - preaching to the choir here! Well, I hope to make it exciting.
Thank you for taking the time to read! :)
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 03:25 pm
Great update!!
Glad to see that both Yukr and Kaoru are starting to grow a pair. I think that Sara's kindness is opening Kaoru's eyes. She is finally becoming a woman Yuki will respect and honor.
Sara should explore things with Kamir. She may believe that she's still in love with Yuki; but I'm not quite up to forgiving his cowardice over eight years ago. I'd stay away from him just to avoid that retched shrew mother of his.
Great update!!
Author's Response:
I think so too. Kaoru is growing. Exploring Kamir is a good idea. Lets try that out. As to Yuki, everyone is capable of change.
Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 12:17 pm
I think it should be Kamir/Sara...yuki had his chance and he did her wrong....she needs some she can trust..and Yuki needs to make his marriage work.. and Yuki's mother needs a attitude check...
Author's Response:
Duly noted! Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Chey2Four Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 09:15 am
I want Kamir/Sara
Yuki and his crazy family don't deserve them
Author's Response:
Too true! :) Thanks!
Reviewer: Trinathesexy Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 08:56 am
Glad Sara called Yuki's mom on her high handedness. Poor Shouda!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah. Thank you! :)
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 08:30 am
There's really not a lot I can say about this story that would do it justice. Its so beautifuly written. I love it. Please update frequently!!!
Author's Response:
Hey H2N!!!
Thanks for reading! I'm happy for your support. :)
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 05:49 am
Finally the showdown. As with the couples I want the unusual story line. I want Kamir/Sara and Yuki/Kaoru. I know not alot of drama right? WRONG! There is more drama then love affair drama. Good job on the chapter and updates, loving it.
Author's Response:
Girl, you got me thinking... Thats all I can say.
Thanks! :)
Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 05:32 am
Sara is the stuff..she told that cow off with such dignity and strength..wow I was proud of her and she brought that old hussy down.
I almost cried for little Shouda , he had to be scared and hungry..Yuki mom is ridiculous..how on earth do you have nerve enough to just pick up someone's child ypu jusyt met..I dont care if he is related to you..heck his dad is just getting to know him hissself..who do u think you are..but Sara let her know...I loved!!
I love Karou..I dont care what happens between Yuki and Sara..though I am all about staying married..I don;t want Karou to be hurt. Sara will be just fine no matter what..and if Yuki keeps growing some balls he might be alright too!
I like granpa as well..he did the right thing standing up for his grandson and Sara!!
You are writing the heck out of this story sweetie..so unique and excellently written..I grasp of other cultures is excellengt and vivdly portrayed through every word and nuiance..excellent!!
Author's Response:
Nene,
Sorry for being late, but I do have a reason I hope you will enjoy (see end notes in current chapter). It took me a while to get things together.
I felt for Shouda too, I can't imagine what it would be like to be in that kind of situation. He's a sweet boy though. Sara is def strong, but everyone has a breaking point. I feel for her. As to Yuki, its about time he gets his act together! He's ticking me off. Kaoru is a special character, I wish her well too. Gramps is a bit of a wild card I think. He did a good deed there, but how far will he go?
Thank you Nene, glad you are enjoying it and hope you like my present!
Take care! :)
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 04:28 am
Great update, I am not surprised that the grandmother took Shoulda from school and demanded that he try on the uniform, etc. I was surprised that the grandfather took Shoulda's side though. To bad Sara couldn't slap the shit out of that old lady. If anyone deserves a good ass kicking grandmother does. I like Sara's brother Ward. So does this mean that Tuki and Karou will be husband and wife? Will Sara form a relationship with Kamir? I was LOL when Ward asked Sara "Will you ever attract anything besides foreign bodies? And who is Darren Percy? Thanks for a great update. Can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response:
You were surprised at the grandfather. He presents sort of a wild card I think. Oh, violence never solves anything...but it sure does help one feel better! :) All roads lead to Yuki and Kaoru giving it a try. We'll have to see what happens between Sara and Kamir. Darren Percy will be explain more in the future, but I'll give you this, its the combined name of her mother and father.
Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 03:10 am
Love, love, love this story. I think Sara should have something fresh and new and Shouda likes Kamir, so why not.
Looks like Yuki and his wife may have a fresh start.
Thanks for updating!
Author's Response:
Thank you! A vote for something fresh and new. Got it! :)
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 02:04 am
Yes, please work on the NEXT one. I am really hooked on this story. I cannot wait to read more.
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
Thank you Nyeesha! :)
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 01:58 am
i think that i would actually like to see yuki with karou. he's way to indecisive for me and what he did to sara is a big breach to gap. i think they should work on their friendship but move on. but hey that's just my opinion. oh and i'm looking forward to the chapter where karou goes off on yuki's mom. i'd pay money to see that one.
Author's Response:
I don't think Kaoru is the type to 'go off' do you? Never know till it happens. Thanks! :)
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 01:51 am
I want Sara/Yuki...she is already in love with Yuki,
The child needs his parents.
put Kamir with Kaoru
Author's Response:
You are the second to mention this combination. :)
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 01:29 am
My first choice is Kamir/Sara second choice is Sara/Yuki, Kamir/Kaoru
Author's Response:
You got something there. :)
Reviewer: Raven Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 01:24 am
Im all for Yuki/Sara... <3
Author's Response:
Fantastic! :)
Reviewer: JCPerez Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 01:02 am
I'm glad Sara and Yuki told Mrs. Umezawa off. She really overstepped her boundaries. Shouda is not a little Yuki and she needs to understand that there are other people in Shouda's life who will fight for him and not let her control him. I can't wait to see what's next.
Author's Response:
Shouda is not a little Yuki, your right. He held up well, didn't he? Thanks! :)
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 12:49 am
Sara kick ass softly and left no marks, Shouda you are a wonderful son. I am so glad that Sara put her foot on Yuki mother neck. Yuki you are still a wimp, I am please with Karou behavior. I like Yuki father he is cool. Excellent story.
Author's Response:
Sara is a good listener. Your sage advice was very good. Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 12:41 am
Yuki had his chance and blew it. I am all team kimar. That is a real man but I do like it now that yuki is standing up to his mum. I love jealous yuki. But I dont think yuki loves sara. If he did he would have stayed with sara.
Author's Response:
We might see more of jealous Yuki. Thanks!
Reviewer: sabrina Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 12:38 am