I'm so enjoying this, hope you will finish, but if not, I know writers block can be a b---. Lol
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2016 09:05 am
Please finish this story!!!l
Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous
[Report This]Date: January 03 2016 02:26 pm
ok on 2 the next chapter
Reviewer: minxie Signed [Report This]Date: November 12 2014 10:16 pm
wow marco is crazy how exactly did he frame blake with no body
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: January 02 2014 01:31 am
It's to funny that you updated to because I just re-read this story last night to refresh my memory and then today you post a short but good update
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2013 10:06 pm
Wow! They move fast! They sure did consumate their... (whatever it is they're calling what they got going on) ... in a hurry!
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2013 03:25 pm
Dag, I though he was supposed to be walking her to her car. He up and left her in a bar like that? Hmmm...
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2013 03:19 pm
Marco is insane and she shoukd feel guilty brcause Blake warned her bout Marco but you didn't listen. The has a pathological hate of Blake and dated accepted his ring anyway. Dumb, dumb ditty!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2013 02:02 pm
Hiw could you end it right there? Did the detectives put a wire on Leslie? Why didn't they tail her to the mansion? Do these cops know what they hell they are doing? Marco is pycho, I am glad that she is asking herself,"how could she have been so stupid?" I am wondering that myself but when you use people to hurt someone you get burned that way. It was her stupidity that lead to Kimho to being killed!!
I need another chapter asap, please don't make us wait as long for anther update. I still love this story!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2013 01:55 pm
UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! :-)
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 06:45 am
what?! CLIFFY?! You aint right!!
But I am glad Miss Leslie getting her sistah souljah on....
Reviewer: Aleta Signed [Report This]Date: August 30 2013 04:48 am
ah hell, imported italian chocolate is crazy as hell, isn't he? I KNEW his ass was TOO fine to be true!
Damn x3!!
Reviewer: Aleta Signed [Report This]Date: August 30 2013 04:41 am
why are you committed to giviing me high blood pressure?! she said yes?!
please give Les a sidekick, best sistah friend to talk her thru all this Effery!
Reviewer: Aleta Signed [Report This]Date: August 30 2013 04:12 am
i KNEW it!!!! DAYUM DAYUM DAYUM!
this is hurting my heart! my girl Les has her career and future set, white chocolate walks in steals half her soul AND breaks her heart! Imported Italian nutella struts up stirs her lust with his torn brooding dominant alpha ass and damn near wrecks ms kitty! now we find white chocolate about to have a mini me with a woman he cannot stand!
My girl I am sending you my therapy bills after the next chapter!
Keep it up!!! HOOKED!
Reviewer: Aleta Signed
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 04:00 am
one word: DDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYUUUUUUMMMMMM
you are a wonderful storyteller, but gurl you have a GIFT for character casting.
Sho'nuff
Reviewer: Aleta Signed [Report This]Date: August 30 2013 03:40 am
omg the waiting game!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 01:38 am
I am so glad you are back...love update, please update soon
Author's Response:
thank you hun!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2013 03:44 am
Great start! Leslie seems really young and we don't know much about her. Why would she fall into bed with Blake one day and be considering getting with Marco the next?
Author's Response:
I mean, when you find out the man you slept with was married...I'm not sure I'd pursue a relationship rotfl
Reviewer: msjonsy Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2013 02:55 am
I am so glad to see this story return but it ended so quickly. I am going to reread this from the beginning to refresh my memory. Good stuff!
Author's Response:
ended? it's far from over! haha
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2013 02:23 am
Leslie is working my last nerve, she is some timey. Marco is crazy and Blake is going to be frame and all because both Kim and her were stupid. Leslie this is all your fault. I wish that Blake had recorded that conversation with Marco though. This is going to be bad!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 28 2012 03:11 am
Marco is definitely a piece of work! Loved it!!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 27 2012 08:45 pm
great
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 27 2012 08:33 am
update soon please
Reviewer: SoccergirlBianca Signed [Report This]Date: January 22 2012 07:18 am
That is not the same woman in your introduction or on that page when a woman of fair color with long brown hair when your introduction picture is chocoale i'm not getting it.
Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 31 2011 06:43 pm
What the hell...Marco is crazy!!! Leslie should not have put any credence to a rumor being spread by the one person who would not want to see Blake and her together and who had an extramarital affair with her current fiance's ex-wife. Marco spreading that rumor had everything to gain from Leslie's mistrust of Blake and she just fell into that. I know Blake did her wrong, but she did agree to marry him, and if she's going to do that, she has to learn to trust him instead of believing ol' boy Marco. I can't wait for the next chapter!! Happy New Year!!!
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2011 06:09 pm