Reviews For Claiming Mina
Title: Chapter 2

Is he a vampire???

Reviewer: madameblaque Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 07:06 am

Title: Chapter 7

I'm so curious now. Who is Mina really? What is really going on? This chapter was too short. more please!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 05:01 am

Title: Chapter 6

This story is kinda mind blowing. Both brothers are into kink. Wow, mom knows about it. What else do you have up your sleeve?

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 04:56 am

Title: Chapter 7

 

 

I get that Mina is young but her reaction to Lucas & Gabe conversation, proves she may not exactly be ready for what she wants with Lucas.  Both deciding to run, then somehow showing her independence by staying but leaving Lucas without a "real" valid reason is immature.  She's angry because he wants to protect her, yet he has no idea what her real name is....come on really?  Like her foster mother Christina, the girl needs a reality check.  Some things you don't do when you are in a relationship or apart of a family one of those things include jumping to conclusions without really knowing all the information. 

Maybe Lucas should give the girl a few more years to grow up a bit cause I don't think she's ready for an adult realationship, she's too stuck on the fantasy of what dreamed they would be like together, instead of dealing with the reality of an adult realationship. It's hard work and if she ready to bail after one day then maybe she just isn't ready.  Feeling awfully bad for the complete 180, Lucas is about to experience.

 

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 03:11 am

Title: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

Glad that U R back, can't wait 4 the next update!



Author's Response:

I definately had a lot on my mind.  I'm glad to get this out.  I decided that I would get it out even if it wasn't perfect.  I'm already having some regrets about chracter development.  There were scenes I should have added in retrospect, dialogue to include.  Some areas are definately rushed.  I can always fix it later.

 

Maybe I'll even get published! 

 

See you next chapter and thank you for reading.

 

CL

Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2012 11:44 pm

Title: Chapter 7

this is good...its turning out to be a mystery and i cannot wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: kell369 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 29 2012 06:14 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Who did she call?  This is going to drive me crazy.  How did that phone help her to stand on her own two feet?  At 18 you may be considererd an adult by law but you not fully adult until you are 21, she is a little playing at being grown.  She will regret that phone call, and only Lucas will be able to save her.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2012 06:06 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Intriguing update! I read Chapter 6 and wondered why didnt Mina just talk, argue and stood her ground with Lucas and let him know what she wanted or should I say what she needed. The thing is, the man worships the ground she walks on, so why wouldnt he listen to her? Or better yet he is willing to bury that part of himself that he thinks will break her, so why was she going to run instead of calling him out on his misconceptions. Glad she decided to stay and is excited to see what happens next. However, I suspect that either she or Christina has set something in motion that would have a profound effect on them all.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 29 2012 03:46 pm

Title: Chapter 7

OMG! - I love this story and the building up is so well written. Lucas feeling for Mina is so intense and possessive and I so like that! And now she's running away again..? Can't wait for next update.

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 29 2012 12:53 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Dunt dunt dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

and the plot thickens.........



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Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2012 12:19 pm

Title: Chapter 7

What has Christina done?

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2012 11:06 am

Title: Chapter 7

You're Dr. Evil!

 

Don't make us wait. Please...

Reviewer: annette Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 29 2012 10:33 am

Title: Chapter 7

Oh my curiousity is KILLIN' ME!!! I got a sneaky suspicion that Dr. Evil is family and I'm not saying from who's family. I think once you let the cat out of the bag...we are gonna be hella shocked. That's just me...Chica when you came back, you came back with a full tank of gas and you are just slinging these updates. I wish I could do that...sometimes I'm just too damn lazy. Can't wait for the next update and for your info...I don't whine...I nag ;) 

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2012 08:50 am

Title: Chapter 7

I have a million questions now...lol!

See, it appears our little Mina likes to get down like that too! All Luke has to do is talk to the girl. It's going to be something that they share. I guess that was Gabe's point to Luke. Communicate with your woman!

I am glad she's moving out though, and for all the reasons she herself mentioned. It's time. However, I don't want her to be reckless with her life just to prove a point.

Getting good!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 29 2012 08:22 am

Title: Chapter 3

Dayum please make Luke Chris Hemsworth aka sexy azz Thor

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2012 07:06 am

Title: Chapter 7

"Sometimes people who are very smart do very dumb things.  He couldn’t believe she called.  He doubted that she even realized the full extent of what she had done.  The danger.  After years of just waiting patiently, the lamb was being presented to the lion.

And the lion would without hesitation devour her."

He had expected more of a fight, but perhaps she hadn’t truly understood the consequences that reaching out would entail.  This was going to be interesting.  Entertaining.  But no matter how it happened, it would finally end.  There was no turning back now.

 

Now what makes me think this is in response to Christina's call and not Mina's?

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 29 2012 07:05 am

Title: Chapter 6

Please. Please. Please no threesome.  I thoroughly enjoy this story.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 11:29 pm

Title: Chapter 6

His mother should stop being so conniving. Mina isnt a little girl anymore. And you cant always protect her. But Gabe is right Lucas should have just told her instead of her having to find out. I wonder just how far she is going to go to prove to the Spauldings she is her own person. I sense drama coming. 

Reviewer: CMH Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 10:18 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter!!!! I want Mina and Luke together badly, but Mina leaving or attempting to will take things up another notch, which I will love. I did not though, completely understand why Mina was so pissed at Luke. Sure, I can understand her being a little set off since he told Mina that he wanted everything open between them and then she hears that he is holding back on her and what he really wants, but in his defense, he is fearful he may be too much for her. Then, I also understand why Mina is set off; he should explain this to her, but how do you come out and tell someone you adore what Luke has to say, lol! But then again, that would be a risk he has to take since he wanted everything open between them.

I could definately see Mina leaving and having a fit after what Luke did in a prior chapter when he was with that other woman screwing. I know he wished it was Mina, BUT it wasn't. NOW that is something I would leave about. No, they were not together, but he has a lot of nerve telling her she could not be with anyone while he can sit and screw his nights away if he pleases because he knows Mina is safely tucked in bed sleeping. I could have jack slapped Luke when he told Mina how it was going to be, but since then, they became lovey dovey, which is fine, but her leaving over Luke over not her telling her a darker side of himself in fear of her rejection or acceptance (then only to hate what she became as Gabe put it) does not seem worth leaving over.

But anyway, Mina is leaving and I think no matter what the reason, she needs to for a minute, just to, if no more than to get Luke to finally trust her enough to tell her who he really is and what he wants in their relationship. He did tell her some of the things he wanted, but he also left a big chunk out.

Cannot wait for more!!!!

Reviewer: Tia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 08:16 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I'm really happy this story is back!!!!!!

I don't think Mina is thinking rationally by trying to leave. Lucas won;t let her get too far anyways because he will be watching her like a hawk.

Gabe definitely needs his own story! I think he was looking out fer Mina more as a brother than a love interest.

I hope Christina's husband figures out who Christiana called. I think it may be Mina's biological father. Who knows? 

There is a lot of plotting going on but I hope things don't fly to far off the handle.

Thanks for the update and I can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 07:32 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Good story! Dont see a threesome though. Lucas we have read so far is too dominant a character to share Mina. Everybody seems to be plotting and underestimating Mina's character, even Christina who seems to have some issues going on. Hope she does put Mina in harm's way though. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 07:17 pm

Title: Chapter 2

OMG it's BAAACK!!

Girl I was too hurt, when your story was gone, you know I had a fit! LOL but now I'm so happy your baackk!! Thanks for bringing it back, I came out of lurk mode when I saw this DIAMOND!!!

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 6

love it all the brother need a story more an sooooon

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 05:50 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Wow, Gabe, Luke, and Mama Spaulding have all failed to understand who Mina is to one degree or another. But I suspicion that they're about to find out. My major fear is that Christina has unleashed something that will hurt Mina more than Luke could ever do so. I hope Randall finds out about his wife's activities. It's clear she's seeing things thru a warped prism. She's actually not seeing Mina at all, but herself. How could she not see that Luke has been quite honorable in regards to Mina? If he finds out that his own mother is behind the shit storm that's coming. Christina will be in a world of hurt. I wonder if Papa Spaulding is a DOM, since it seems all of the boys are. hmm

Loving this. Well done, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 09:04 am

Title: Chapter 5

Def worth the wait, Oh girl I loved it, and to be honest I thought this was going fast, meaning their relationship, which I had based it on the last chapter. But not anymore especially when he's planin on wooing her(; haha I lovvvve it! 

Reviewer: serafina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 07:46 am



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