Reviews For Claiming Mina
Title: Chapter 6

I like Mina but I think she overracted.  Running away because your boyfriend is trying to protect you from things he thinks will hurt you is pretty juvenile.  A rational person would just say, "Hey, don't hide your kinks from me.  I can handle it.  Sure, I'm young, but we can go about it slowly.  Now I'm gonna go graduate and later on you'll teach me Kink 101."

However, Mina is somehow hurt beyond belief by her overprotective boyfriend not sharing everything with her; she has to leave all the Spauldings behind just to make her mark on the world?  Also, there's the fact that she runs a twenty-one employee business and said boyfriend is her silent financial partner.  People are obligated to contact silent partners when they make important financial, logistical (i.e. leaving), and sale decisions in regard to the mutally owned business.  Her plan to "put this place in her rearview mirror" makes no sense to me.  Does she just mean she's moving out of the house but still staying in town?  I think I'm just confused. 

Gabe is awesome and too hot for his shirt.  He should just walk around the Spaulding home shirtless. Maybe he could fall for some cute little military chick (non-SEAL, 'cause women can't be SEALs) who is trying to stand on her own but he can't help but try to protect her with his awesome shirtless body...just a suggestion/intense wish...

I'm psyched for the next chapter.  Perhaps the mysterious phonecall recipient is a long lost relative of Mina's?  Keep it hot, CLady.

Reviewer: tens Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 06:53 am

Title: Chapter 6

I am really loving your story. It has so many layers. I can't wait to find out who Christina called!!

Please don't make us wait too long!

Reviewer: annette Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 06:46 am

Title: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 03:07 am

Title: Chapter 6

Wow! Love it!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 02:43 am

Title: Chapter 6

Wow, who did she call?  I smell trouble, the shit is about to hit the fan!!  Mina  is about get hurt and it won't be Lucas but the her adopted mother.  Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 01:58 am

Title: Chapter 6

Hmmm....this was an interesting chapter, and an interesting setup. Lots of moving parts...

First, as Gabe and Luke was talking: I was thinking along the same along lines as Mina. Before you assume that she can't handle the Dom lifestyle, try her! Talk it over with her and get her take on things. She might be a freak with it too! I kept thinking, how do you know she'd hate it unless you ask her about it? This is a woman he's going to make his wife, so she deserves that much. I confess, I don't know a thing about the lifestyle, but I'm thinking this a reasonable course of action to take with your intended. After all, no one is strictly born a Dom or Sub, right? I'm taking for granted it's something that's basically cultivated if one has natural tendencies toward it. And while I think she should be planning to storm off after her party, I don't think it's out of line that she's insulted by this. They basically called her a weak mindless idiot. Suggesting that she would do something degrading to herself as a woman and a person, just to please what she would consider to be her man's depraved notion of sex. Really? She's not that sheltered. And she has ears, eyes, and a brain to reason things out.

Gabe: I just think he truly cares and he doesn't want her ambushed. That comment about how 'we'll have nothing' did throw me off a bit, I have to say. And he perhaps does seem a little too interested, but in the end, I think its brotherly, not romantic.

Christina: She's baffling me completely. I want to know what happened to her? Randall mentioned earlier that she was more or less projecting her own family issues onto Luke and Mina. Luke in particular. My problem is, she raised this young man, but she's acting like he's some kind of sexual deviant who Mina should be afraid of. She's acting like a person she doesn't know and who should maybe be locked up. That sounds extreme, but look at what she just did. We don't exactly what it was, yet, but she seems to almost fear for Mina's life! She was clearly traumatized in her life and was it by Randall? He doesn't seem like it, however, his three sons are into the lifestyle, so was he the one that introduced it to them? I don't know, but something happened to her.

And yep, I know I was whining for more. I make no apologies for it...lol!

Good stuff!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 01:32 am

Title: Chapter 6

Thanks for this taste of a chapter,can't wait for the rest!!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 12:46 am

Title: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

Oh boy! How can Gabe and Lucas not suspect that Mina wouldn't wake up and hear their conversation.  I know I would have with them in the same room and play possum too. Since she is grown she need to confront them both.  If they continue to want to make the decisions for her then run.  

Lucas is an alpha male with claims on Mina so she better run and hide deep underground.  He is going to search high and low for her.

I love Gabe, he seems to have a low key demeanor with some sexy on the side.  He needs a mate for himself.  With him being a seal and having be out of pocket when out on missions, he will need someone who is strong.



Author's Response:

You know Mina was listening.  As you can see from the next chapter, Mina is going to confront Luke rather than run away.

If Mina were to ever run for him, you know that there is no place on earth she could hide from him.  I can't wait until Gabe's story start.

 

Thanks for reading!

CL

Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 12:21 am

Title: Chapter 6

Yep Gabe does need his own story!! But I can't seem to get that possible 3some between Lucas/Mina/Gabe out of my head...my mind is dirty...very dirty. I hope Mina have her nikes tied up tight, cause  Lucas gonna chase her down faster hunting dogs on a fox. I wander who the mama called? You got me curious as all get out Ms. Crouslady!! Can't wait for the next update! Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 12:04 am

Title: Chapter 6

*AMN, you sure don't disappoint, lol! I was not expecting an update this soon, but I am thrilled!!!! So Mr. Lucas and Gabe had a talk while they thought Mina was sleep, huh?...Are they stupid? You can never be to sure if a person is sleeping or not...AND what they were talking about,...Gabe got descriptive as hell. No, let Gabe have his own story, lol. Gabe was talking about Luke, but I am sure Gabe could give anyone a run for their money on any day of the week. I almost feel sorry for who his mate is, lol...ALMOST. Luke and Mina appear that they will be enough together, without any one else. No, I would not want to listen to something obviously not meant for my ears, but dang, I am positive I could not stop listening to what they were talking about.

So, Ms. Mina is going to pedal up out of there, huh? Well, the chase begins, lol! This is going to be soooo good and Christina made a call to someone to make sure Mina would, I assume be leaving. But what Christina does not know is that Mina has made up her mind to leave already. Goodness, I love this story! Well, until the next update.......



Author's Response:

thanks!  I wonder about that gabe.  Payback is a bitch!

Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 11:25 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I need to see some CAST Photos !!! Please



Author's Response:

I copy and paste but when I post the story there are no pictures.  I don't know what I am doing wrong.  If you know please, please, please explain.  Thanks

Reviewer: Nicole Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 11:06 pm

Title: Chapter 5

It was worth it and it was excellent!

I can do nothing but respect the hell out of Lucas for this. That wasn't even about him and he took a backseat because he already knows what he wants and what he's doing. This is about making sure that his woman knows without a nanosecond of doubt, who she is, who she is to him, and what she means to him. He's right, if Mina doubts for in a second, those harpies around them will make mincemeat out of her. He knows this because he's older and his past is his past, and his world is what it is, he can't change it. And Mina's younger and inexperienced. Those sharks would smell that and try to destroy her belief in herself, and, therefore, him to make it together as a couple and future spouses. Because, make no mistake, Luke's endgame here is nothing less than marriage. Mina never was some plaything to him.

Now that he's come out and claimed her, and has had a taste, those heifers are no more. He won't be giving any of them the time of day from now on! For real, Lucas is a catch, and they want him. However, he was only placating himself with them while he was biding time for Mina. He's sees the trouble up ahead and needs Mina strong emotionally and psychologically, with absolute faith in him, and them together, to deal with it. With the type of personality they each have, I could see them together destroying a whole gang of hoochies stepping up to them...lol!

We need another update real soon here..lol!

Good stuff!



Author's Response:

You really get what i was going for in this chapter.   It was all about explaining why Luke wouldn' t take what she offered him at the beach and going more in depth about his plan to claim his woman.  I always wondered what happened to Cinderella after she gets the Prince.  Unless she had a hell of a back bone and a rock solid relaitonship with the Prince, there can't be a happy ending.

 

Mina is going to learn to stand without the power of the Spauldings.  She has a voice but needs to get used to using it to withstand a Dom like Luke. 

 

Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 09:17 pm

Title: Chapter 5

This man got the restraint i'm amazed.Waiting to read what you'll pull off.

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 08:53 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Lucas is quite the alpha male. I hope Mina is planning on birth control. She doesn't need a baby now. Great chapter!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 07:23 pm

Title: Chapter 5

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cannot wait. I do not even want to guess what's going to happen, lol! I just want to read. Great update.

Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 07:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

Great update! It seems that Mina has been claimed. That was hot!! More please!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 06:17 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I am so glad that you have updated this story. I wonder how is mom is going to try n seperate them. I can tell Luke really wants to claim Mina. Please update agaun

Reviewer: primesgirl4 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 04:26 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Another just for the hell of it!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 04:14 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I can't speculate because I am busy trying to get my hand around the fact that there is no next button! I keep wondering if I close my eyes and hit the refresh button, will the next button magically appear!!! I can feel the crackhead itch coming on!!! LOL! 

On a serious note, who doesn't have typos. You have VERY FEW! Your writing is very clean and consistent and I LURVE that!  The language is descriptive and active rather than passive and I LURVE that...I just LURVE this story  and can't wait for more!! Great job and good luck!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 04:14 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Love it. Please update!!!

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 04:06 pm

Title: Chapter 5

After waiting so long, a five minute wait was not in the cards for me. Please make your next update reasonably substantial.

Reviewer: Way too short Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 12:24 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

Did you post photos?  If so, I cannot see them.  I am using Goggle Chrome and there are no photos here. 



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Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 09:49 am

Title: Chapter 5

Ahh i'm so glad this story it back! It's awesomeness! I love Lucas, so controlling but Mina is secretly exactly the same! Match made in Heaven if you ask me! :D More please! 

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 09:33 am

Title: Chapter 5

I'm so glad to see you're back! You had me & a cousin of mine worried that u wasn't gonna to continue on this story. She loves this site. She freakin' luv this story and I luv it too. Loved the update and can't wait for more!



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Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 08:41 am

Title: Chapter 4

This story rocks!!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2012 11:03 pm



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