Reviews For Claiming Mina
Title: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

great start 2 your story, i hope that u will update soon with a few chapters!

Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2011 12:18 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Ooooooo Don't wait to much longer to update!! It's getting HOT in here!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 27 2011 07:26 am

Title: Chapter 4

I really like this story and I hope that Update #4 comes soon....

But I would also like to see the photographs that you posted for Lucas and Mina.  I am now using "Chrome" to see Valent Chamber because it is just better.  But I still cannot see the photos.  Can everyone else see them? 

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 09:29 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I love this story. Just ask someone in the Shout Out box for help in posting your pictures or contact some of the authors of stories you read and ask for their help in posting pictures.

I just love Luke and Mina. I'm also feeling Gabe too. I have no preference. All three of the brothers would most likely keep any readers attention. So, whatever you decide to do with Gabe and Michael, I will read. I just want to read about Luke and Mina first, lol. I cannot wait for your update.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2011 03:26 am

Title: Chapter 4

I like a man who knows what or should I say who he wants..and Luke wants Mina. I love the way this story line is going...glad he did not turn out to be a werewolf...just a Dom! Works for me, but please don't make Mina a weak ass! Keep giving her some Spunk! Just knowing he likes the fact that she has a waxed kitty kat on parade with jewelry gives me the reason to give you another ten!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 07:40 am

Title: Chapter 3

Heck, I didn't need any sex in this part of the story....atleast not with Luke and Mina...because just knowing he is going to rock her world within the next few chapters...is enough to keep me hanging on. I can wait. N.E. Way the way he keeps kissing her is about to make me.......

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 07:15 am

Title: Chapter 2

Ok, this is a story of werewolves and their mates right? I think it is.....anyway, this damn Luke I bet he is sexy as hell since my pix did not come thru..no matter he has claimed his mate already, and I know this is going to be a damn good story!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 06:32 am

Title: Chapter 4

Ok, I''m not sure what I expected, but it wasn't that he was a Dom.  Can't wait to see where you go with this.  I've read numerous stories on this site, but none with this particular storyline.  I'm sooo excited.  Please don't keep us waiting for an update. 

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 05:42 am

Title: Chapter 4

Awww...........that sexy Navy Seal has captured my heart with just a few words in this chapter. I love reading battle of the sexes and hope you can give Gabe a tough kick-ass heroine and probably also someone in uniform. 

Reviewer: Dreamer Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 03:36 am

Title: Chapter 4

She got her Vajay-jay pierced! tut tut naught or what!

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2011 10:38 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

Ran across this story and started to read. It souds surprisingly like BIB. Eerily so. I will read on to see what comes about.

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 28 2011 02:41 am

Title: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

I love this story please update... I like Mina, are they werewolves or something. Please update

Reviewer: trina mas Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2011 11:12 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I'm loving the relationship between Luke & Mina!

Update soon please!  

Reviewer: ms dimples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2011 05:20 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

i hope you are able to update this story soon. I think it's great!

Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2011 06:23 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

I hope you finish the story, please donot let the "Thought Police" bring you down. I can wait patiently for the story.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 27 2011 02:40 am

Title: Chapter 4

hummm...well it seems like an interesting idea that you have come up with but, I think that you might need to be more detailed about the past and some background so we can get a grip of the character because some of the actions seem a little out of place and loosly written.

Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2011 06:42 am

Title: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

hey there cl... i hope ur still going to write this fic gurl it's a winner ur doing great much better then i did when i gave writting a chance i have so many ideas running round in my head but it seems a bit hard to get them out... hell i have a story up and i have rewritten chapter 2 gawd only knows how many time ..giggles and i posted it in march ...anyway plz plz plz keep this story alive it's great story and don't listen to anyone that talks smack... hell they got so much to say then they should im you e-mail you and ask if you would like someone to bounce ideas off of not talk bad about what ur doing it takes guts gurl to post on this site with so many well written storys out there and i give u 2 thumbs up ..love ur mind and i thank you for the chance u have given all of us to have a peek inside ...will be looking out for your next chappie that last one was fire btw ...cyn~

Reviewer: cynn333 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 08:06 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

Please update, waiting not so patiently.



Author's Response:

Tonight.  I promise.  I am working on it when I  get back from my grandma's 81st b-day party.  Bye for now. CL

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2011 09:35 am

Title: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: Chamber _Admins Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 19 2011 09:58 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Hi, :) Just wanted to tell you nice job! This story is very interesting and I want to see where it goes :) Now I saw the previous reviewer's review and don't agree with it at all. Yes there are errors in the story but this is your first time so I don't expect it to be perfect and neither should anyone else. Now for the final time I'll say this all stories are cliches that other story is not the first to feature someone who has been taken in by a rich family and ends up with a member of it who so happens to be older. There are plenty of stories like this out there and for the record it's what the person does with the story that makes it unique so you're all good in my book. The only way you can rip someone else's story is if you plaigarize it. So advice from one writer to a newbie. Keep your head up, accept constructive critique, ignore rudeness (especially from the anons) and keep doing you :) LOL sorry for the long comment

Reviewer: JLeshay Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 19 2011 09:36 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

Wow. Not only do you blatantly rip off another person's story but then you try to replace it with something so poorly written it is barely a step above garbage. You've got some balls. You do not, however, have a grasp on English grammar. Please find an editor and maybe even a revisor. Or perhaps even your own idea.

Mina is nothing more than a weak vessel for the penis of a man who groomed her from childhood. In case you didn't know, grooming is what its called when a pedophile ingratiates himsef to the child he plans to abuse before the abuse begins. Seem familiar? This is sick.

Reviewer: Dee Gusting Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 19 2011 09:18 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Hot damn. This story is smoking.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2011 04:14 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Loved the update. Luke is about to claim his woman!! What are they??? What's the secret?? Can't wait to see what Mrs S is up to.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2011 08:35 am

Title: Chapter 4

Hot Damn!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2011 06:25 am

Title: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

Where are the pics?

Reviewer: Ivix Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2011 05:15 am



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