Loving this story! Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: sli249 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: August 19 2011 03:31 am
Holy hell! These are some dudes I need to know! HOOOOT!! ALL OF THEM! LOL!
This is going to be goooood! I cant to see the hot monkey sex from these two!
Christina was a bit of a curve-ball, I'll admit. What are her issues?
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2011 02:20 am
Awesome beginning.
Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed
[Report This]Date: August 19 2011 02:06 am
mina is an advanced innocent (dig that oxymoron)......ha...ha.... get that momma under control....don't let her mess this love story up.......now for what i really need to say........bravo....bravo....more...more....more.........did I say more......well let me say it again....more....more
great job!
Reviewer: chelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 19 2011 01:37 am
Yes, I was shocked about Luke's piercing he just seems so straight laced piercing just didn't seem to go with his dominating side to me but I am definitely learning a lot more about Mr. L Spaulding and I like I like =)
True Mina has not lived she is only 18 so her experience with men is very limited but as I have said before she is very mature for her age and very determined to get what she wants and I feel she strongly knows her mind and heart but hey that is just my opinion I could be reading it all wrong or to much into it.
You're right what mother would want to sign her daughter up for an unvanilla adventure in the dom world especially one that does not know about such things but then again Mina may just be into that and not know it yet. I like Christina she is a ferious mom to reckon with and she has wanted to bond with Mina since day one and felt that she failed in that area with not knowing what Mina heard from Luke and Randall not understanding it was not because they did not want her but because Luke wanted her as his.
I hope u r able to give us a short chapter later on I look forward to it.
Oh I love Sean Bean good choice as the father. As for the for the brother I would think you have Michael Stonebridge playing as Gabe ;)
Happy writing!
Author's Response:
Aw, Thunderkat.... You did peak.
Any now back to writing the next chapter. BTW, its interesting that the guy who plays the british Stonebrige is American and the guy who is his American partner is actually Australian. I'm going to listen closely to see if I can hear the slips.
I hope to have something up by midnight.
CL
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 19 2011 01:10 am
The start is so very much like a previously posted story.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 08:52 pm
This story is super hot. I hope when Lucas and Mina finally make love they use protection. She is too young for a baby now. Plus I would love to see her go to college as well as run her business. Mom is only being protective which she should. 9 years is a big age gap when you're only 18. Love the whole family!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: August 18 2011 08:45 pm
I like Luke and all, but I think Gabe is my favorite one. I'mma need you to do a story for him too. :-)
Author's Response:
Gabe's my favorite too. And I was debating on if I should kill him off. If he survives CM, he will get his own story. Him or Mikey.
Maybe I can collaberate with another author for them.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 08:32 pm
Ain't she too young to be getting her clit pierced, she still a virgin and she shouldn't be a freak just yet at least till he turn her out, lol
and plus That was just Nasty, lol just the way I like it!!!LOL
Please continue ASAP That was off the Chain!!WHOA
Author's Response:
You would be surprised at what kids are piercing these days. And I think Mina is a bit mre of a freak than Lucas ever suspected.
I wouldn't want Luke making her freaky anyway. I don't want him to "teach" her. Just support her. I have the same concerns his mom does. Don't want him to unduly influence her especially in light of the age difference and economic difference.
Mina may be more than this Spaulding can handle.
Thanks for the support! Happy reading. CL
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 08:22 pm
LOL! I love it what can I say.
I hate that Christina is gunning out for L and M's relationship she does not want it but she should look at it this way. Mina has always been mature for her age. Mina as she said before has some of the Spaulding ways. Mina and Luke could give her grandchild and she could be her daughter officially that way after their marriage. Mina knows her own mine and can put Luke in check. Mina has the ability to calm Luke down when he get's a hot head some what. Mina has power of Luke cause she has his heart. And last but no least as she said while looking at them at the party Luke is the happiest she has seen him.
Mina's vajayjay is decorated I wonder how Luke feels about that someone else seeing his woman's lady parts. Shoot I was more shocked to see that Luke's nipples were pierced.
Okay I know it is way early in the game but wil this be a series my boys Mike and Gabe definitely have to have their own story. Whoa...I just have my own view of the cast the way you have described them so when you do post the pictures I may not even view them so as not to mess up the images in my head.
Great update. Great story.
Thank you for sharing and you are so mean with the cliffhanger chica.
=)
Happy writing and more more more plz!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Thunderkat.
I think Christina is more concerned about Mina's ultimate happiness. How can she know she wants Luke the way he wants her if she hasn't lived. Also Luke is such the Dom and his mom knows. How many mom's are signing their daughters up for that?
I think that she would feel a bt better if it were Gabe or even Mike because they don't live in the house like Luke.
I think that Luke finds the spruced up vajayjay intriguing because he had his own peircings.
If Gabe and Mike are still around at the end of CM, and I have any creative energy left, yes they will get their own story.
Were you really that suprised to see Luke's piercings? Why? Still waters run deep.
Thanks for reading. Hope to have a short chapter up tonight.
CL
!!! CAST PIC SPOILER ALERT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok. Randall is Sean Bean. I love him!!!!
And I won't tell you which Spaulding bro is the guy from Cinemax's Strikeback.
http://www.cinemax.com/img/original-series/strike-back/cast/strike-back-sgt-michael-stonebridge-456x204.jpg
I'll leave that to you for now.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 08:20 pm
ooooo...where is the next chappie.....ii
Reviewer: cynn333 Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 07:39 pm
WTF!!!!! Where's the damn rest??!!! OOHH!! Ya got me good!!! You need to hurry the hell up and update soon please...Like Right Now!!!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 07:29 pm
Please hurry up and update... Loving this story. Love Luke and how he loves Mina.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 07:23 pm
I know right. It seems like it just disappeared. Maybe they or like you said even one of the authors will take pity on us and bring it back, =)
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 07:07 pm
I am really enjoying this story!!!!
I like how Luke and Mina's relationship is about more than just sex. Luke wants her to succeed and have a life of her own but he wants to be the man standing next to her.
Please update again soon!
Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 06:56 pm
I must say that I am really excited for thsis story! please up date soon!!
With Christina she is unhappy about the situation but still loves Mina right?
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Reviewer: Rapture Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 06:14 pm
I can't wait to read more ! Luke is so possessive, I like that !
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 02:16 pm
I agree with Bain...Plus the author has already stated serval times that the main lead character is aware of the age difference and there is to be no sex while underage this is just the leading and how he feels about Mina and he already knows that she is his soulmate.
The story to me is taste full and there show no malcious, pedphile or sexual acts occuring already in the story with her being 15yrs old just an interest and Lucas already knowing his heart and willing to WAIT until she is age appropiate. He has not touched her in a sexual manner and also as the author said he did not even kiss her when he had her in his arms or let her be aware of his arousal for her.
Don't get me wrong now if there were any inappropiate actions occuring with this child then I definitely would not be reading it and ready to ban the story as well but that has not occurred and I strongly feel that the author has no intention of doing so,
Again thank you for sharing.
Update again soon,
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 01:53 pm
I am so loving this story more more more plz!
I like Luke's domaince and I like he has a reign on it. Mina is his and only his.
That skank Willa needs to get a clue he don't want you ho.
Thank you for sharing and I to was a fan of BiB,
Happy writing.
Author's Response:
I miss BiB too I wish the authors or one of them would bring it back. It was so confusing and twisted. but hey, aren't we all.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 01:35 pm
OMG! I LOVE IT! I definitely need and want more. I wonder how Ms. Christina is going to feel and react to Lucas wanting Mina.
This was a great start and I can't wait to you show us more and what you have in store for this family.
Thank you for sharing.
Happy writing
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: August 18 2011 12:53 pm
I really like Luke. He knew that Mina was it for him but he also knew that the time was not right. He's respectful of the age difference and has done everything he can to remove the temptation by moving to the guest house. Now that she's 18, all bets are off. At least he knows and Mina knows that Luke is serious about her. He could've had her on the beach, but he's waited 3 years and is in no rush, which shows quite a bit of restraint.
I like Mina, who seems to be much more mature than her 18 years. She still has a lot to learn, but she's a smart cookie and knows her own mind. She did have me kinda worried when she wanted to use Rick to get a bit of "experience", but was smart enough to know that Rick would just be a substitute for who she really wants.
Luke is clear in his long-term goal, does Mina understand that Luke sees her as his future wife? Will she be ready for that? Or does she need to go out and see the world before she settles down with him? Will Luke be able to let her do that? Will he be the one to see that she might need to do that, even if she doesn't?
This could go in so many directions. I'm along for the ride. I trust your judgment in where this is going. You've really caught my attention with some very strong writing. I was all caught up in the tale. Brillant, Chica.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 10:37 am
Love it! keep it coming. I like that you have Mi a starting to develop her own interest so that she can build some confidence of her own and I like that Lucas what her to develop her wants and needs (in more ways than one, ha ha).
I can not wait to see when these two get together.
Reviewer: Gloria Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 10:06 am
YES!!! hurry with the next chapter PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ that was sizzliing
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 07:13 am
come on please update bring on the sex make it hot,hot pretty please
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 07:12 am