Who can be mad at such brilliance? Great chapter as always!!!!!
Author's Response:
this is me blushing ..... You are too kind. But seriously, can't wait to put part I of their story to bed. Gabe keeps calling me.
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed
[Report This]Date: June 07 2012 05:41 pm
Damn! This story is just awesome! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 07 2012 05:15 pm
I'm completely in love with Lucas and Mina. I was totally laughing my ass of when Lucas thought "Pistol packing Mama". I don't think Jonas was expecting that and I think that was a complete moron move cause if her Mama went to the trouble of hiding her, do you think she won't be prepared for everything and anything. I am wondering what type of trouble Mina is in with whoever.
Reviewer: lovinn Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 07 2012 05:00 pm
WOW....this story gets better and more mysterious with each chapter!! I hope you update this one SOON!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2012 04:43 pm
whoa!!! i did NOT see that coming!!!! i cant wait to find out what exactly shes running from. more please!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 07 2012 03:04 pm
I love, love, love this! Lucas thinks that this Mina is small and weak and needs his protection, but its the other way around. I know that there is more to Mina than meets the eye and just because she's a virgin, doesn't mean that she's naive weak or stupid. I still say that once they get married, she ought to blow his mind in bed and make 'mr. experience" experience something in bed that he never ever has before with any other woman. He's already sprung but that would really take his butt over the edge. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
i am working on the next chapter now and yes, Mina is going to rock his world.
CL
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2012 11:57 am
This update was awesome, can't believe that it's going 2 b ending soon! I'm going 2 miss it when it's over!
Author's Response:
Claiming Mina is a 2 part series and when I get to the last chapter of part I it will make so much sense why I have to divide it. I think I need the break of only having one story to do. I am looking forward to writing multiple stories when I hit writer's block.
CL
Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2012 11:44 am
Oh my! Did u really have to stop it there really :) JK...
Great update can't wait for more.
Thank u for sharing...Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2012 09:30 am
That was cruel to leave us hanging. Update soon.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2012 08:36 am
Mina dropped Jonas like a gangsta. I knew Mina was holding so deep secrets and wasn't so innocent as she protrayed but a gun toting chick I didn't see coming.
I think it's time for her to start spilling the beans to her husband to be so Lucas don't run into no more suprises. I'm thinking that ahooting probably turned Lucas on more then he already is for Mina. All I can say is Mina better eat up her Wheaties because Lucas is going to work her like nobodies business and then some on their wedding night.
Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2012 08:01 am
Please update soon, I cannot wait until the action starts.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed
[Report This]Date: June 07 2012 06:56 am
LOVE MINA AND LUKE
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2012 06:12 am
First thank you so much for this truly Awesome update . I'm so loving this Mina - pistol packing mama is right . I could so see the surprised look on Lucas' face when Mina pulled out that gun . I'm so loving Mina and Lucas together , they are both totally kicking ass . Can't wait for more. : )
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 07 2012 06:07 am
Luke is good and Mina is lucky! I'm wondering what is going on!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2012 06:03 am
omg... im sitting on the edge of my seat with this story because its so good, cant wait to read more
Author's Response:
I have to make some tough decisions to end this this story and move on. I am glad that you are enjoying and I hope to have the next installment very, very soon after my truly fabulous editor takes a look at it. The next 2 chapters will be the hardest ones yet because i get nervous as I get close to the finish line.
I am so glad that you are enjoying the story and I can't wait to do Gabe's story next! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
CL
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: June 01 2012 04:23 am
i cant believe you left us hanging after all this time, and there i was getting all hot and bothered.
i think we as your beloved audienxe deserve a more graphic scene than you already planned.
cant wait to read the next part!
Author's Response:
I think you will love chapter 11. I revised it just for you! More cow bell!!!!!
CL
Reviewer: chocolateorange Signed [Report This]Date: May 28 2012 11:36 pm
Oh em gee, hawt hawt hawttt! Lol, girl u cannot leave me hanging like this! Amazing chapter btw!
Reviewer: serafina Signed [Report This]Date: May 08 2012 05:09 pm
You've been bad HOW CAN YOU LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT! ARGH
(back to normal) LOL
I loved the SUPER CHAPTER thank you, thank you, thank you. Please update soon.
I can't wait for the title to come true.
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed
[Report This]Date: May 08 2012 12:10 pm
You are definitely an awesome writer! Can't wait to see where you take us next....
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: May 07 2012 06:34 am
Please update soon!
Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2012 01:57 pm
Loved the update!! Can wait to see what her past reveals!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2012 07:44 am
Excellent! He is going to put a hurtin' on her!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2012 03:27 am
So Hot !!! I love Lucas myself . His gift to Mina was wonderful , lucky girl . I'm so loving this story . More please , on my knees begging . : )
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 06 2012 01:58 am
I love this story! I know he doesn't take no for an answer and he's a Dom, but hell I don't think he knows Mina as well as he thinks he does! I think she has a few suprises for him up her sleeve. He thinks he's going to turn her out, but I have a feeling he's gonna get turned out too. LOL
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2012 12:19 am
Hot... Hot... Hot... I am more curious than ever about who she really is and what her life was like pre-Spaulding days.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 09:20 pm