Awww....I had no idea Randall felt so strongly about Mina. He really considers her basically his daughter. So sweet.
So Mina...or should I say Carmina...is some kind of La Femme Nikita type in witness protection or something? Interesting.
You need to hurry the Mina and Luke love night up now! We've had more than ample build-up about these two. I feel like I'm gonna explode if they don't bust a nut already....lol!
Please explain Christina soon. Its just getting more weird with her now.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed
[Report This]Date: May 05 2012 07:51 pm
LMAO So I just read a review that said to make up your mind on his name....as fine as that man is I don't give a damn if he wants me to call him "Grand Master of all Three Legged Unicorn Pinky Toes"!! ROFLMAO!
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 05:23 pm
You are one baaaad mama jamma! You are officially one of my SHEROES!!! If I could give you a bajillion rating stars then I would. Don't be surprised if I just pop up with ratings without a comment for the hell of it!
Author's Response:
You are too funny! I can't wait to get the next few chapters out so I can still back and let the story tell itself.
Thanks for rating but don't break the button because chpt 11 will be a doozy. (I hope :l ).
CL
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 05:20 pm
This is such a good read that i didn't realize i'd meet the end with no more to be NEXTED. I am so enjoyin Lucus and Mina they are really good together. I like the fact that Mina is not a push over and I love that the Spauldings are there for her. What is Christine doing though, I'm a bit confused with her atitude towards Lucus and Mina. Oh well I am tracking this story. Its way good so far and I'm in for the duration just don't leave your fans hanging.
Kim
Author's Response:
I am working on the next chapter but it may take a little longer because I really need to have two completed to make sure this is fitting right to end the way I want. I don't want to cheat you all but I think that I will be dropping a major bomb on you with it. maybe I should release a chapter 10.5. I have been with holding key mina info that I want to share with everyone but I also want to "consumate" the relationship. Definately conflicted but having a lot of fun writing their story.
Christina has issues and needs help, but don't write her off just yet. Everything happens for a reason.
Thanks for the review and see you next chapter!
CL
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 05:10 pm
this is one of my favorite stories on the board - i'm addicted; very well written. Please update again soon.
Author's Response:
I just outlined what needs to happen to drive the story its conclusion and I don't anticipate a quick posting. Maybe next week. I may break it up into shorter more discrete chapters that don't try to take on too many characters. Just a couple of thoughts like before. But I really want to wrap this up in the next 4 chapters if possible.
I am so glad you are enjoying it. It is being editted as well so if you want to re-revisit it, it will be n easier read with out all the typos, dropped words, wrong words etc that I have been known to use because I am in a rush to submit.
Thanks for the comment, the rating, and for reading.
See you next chapter,
CL
Reviewer: katie Signed
[Report This]Date: May 05 2012 04:22 pm
Glad you updated so quickly,but I personally think it is taking too long for Mina and Lucas to consummate and a continuous rhythem between the last few chapters is off.It can be confusing, especially the sexual interaction between Mina and Lucas.I still love this story and the concept.
Author's Response:
I can't say that I see what you are talking about. Shoot me an email to give me some examples when you can okay?
Thanks for the critique and for reading.
CL
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 10:45 am
Nooo! Why the cliffhangger! Or should I say cl*thangger? Lol XD
Author's Response:
That is naughty... But so am I, right?
There has been so much build up. People just want them to get it on. But keep in mind that only 1 day has passed since Luke and Mina completly revealed their feelings to each other at the party. The other stuff was just foreplay.
Thanks for reading and see you next chapter,
CL
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 05 2012 10:27 am
well done sweetie iblove it, i am at the edge of my bed so to speak.
Reviewer: vanessa Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 09:21 am
A ten as always!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 09:13 am
sticks and stones may break my bones...but chains and whips excite me!!!
Love it
Author's Response:
So Mina isn't the only one. Glad you enjoy my story.
CL
Reviewer: Mochagirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 08:38 am
This story is so addictive. Please update soon.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 08:34 am
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Well if you are still up you don't have long to wait. It is up ... now!
CL
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 06:15 am
What the hell is going on?!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 06:05 am
Who is Mina Lewis?
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 05:55 am
What is mom's issue? Yes, Gabe does need his own story and woman!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 05:51 am
I'm glad he's taking his time with her!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 05:44 am
Keep it coming!
Author's Response:
Working on it!
CL
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 05:26 am
Loving it!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. I don't have much more to go before I complete part I. Yay!
Thanks for reading!
CL
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 05:00 am
Excellent start!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 04:37 am
So far loving the story. However what the heck is the main character's name? Is it Lucas,lucus or Luke? Make up your mind as this is very distracting to the reader.
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying the story. The main character's name is Lucas. But his nickname is Luke. Just like a person named Michael may also go by Mike or even Mickey. I will correct the typo of Lucas's name. Thanks for your attention.
CL
Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 04 2012 06:56 am
Love this story. Please I need to know who wants Mina and who Randall just text. i wish i could meet a family full of dominant males
Author's Response:
I am answering that question in the next chapter. Christina's call won't be reveal just yet however. I'll try fill in more about Mina without giving it all away before the explosive ending.
I do have a plan, mostly i stick to until the characters lead me in a new direction.
Thanks for reading!
CL
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2012 06:50 am
Loved the update and can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2012 03:56 am
Well done and the mystery remains. I am glad she didnt take off and they found it within themselves to talk. Now I am even more intrigue to find who is watching her. Cant wait for the next update...
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 03 2012 03:36 am
Mina is a walking contradiction.The last chapter she was being strong making the right decisions for her well being or so she thought,but this chapter she has reverted back to being needy again in my opinion and settling to being only the submissive to Lucas alpha...Still can't wait for their alone time if you know what I mean,lol
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2012 03:32 am
Wow! I am glad he told her, but, what is it about her past. And who is that guy she called.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 03 2012 02:55 am