Daniel is an evil a hole and should die a horrible death!!! Okay, so he know that Niamh is his daughter what an jackass. Why did Joseph get caught up in Daniel's madness? I am on pins and needles awaiting another update. This story rocks!!!
Author's Response:
Joseph's naivety when he was younger will be shown soon. =)
Silly kid he was.....
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: January 23 2012 04:38 am
I'm glad Darla is frienda nd that her intentions seem innocent. Finally Niamh stood up to Daniel and who knows, may have earned just a tiny bit of respect from him. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: January 14 2012 03:07 am
How could Joseph involve his family in with mess? Is there a way for Blaise and Niamh to come out of this situation unscaved? Daniel is still making my teeth itch and I can't wait for him to die. I want him to be blown up with one of the devices that they plant. It would be poetic justice for him to die in the manner in which he's killed others. It would be even cooler if Niamh planted the device.
Which government agencies does Justin work for? I am sure that he is plant for the goverment. Thank you for posting the update, it rocked!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 14 2012 03:04 am
I'm so glad that you were able to update today. Daniel and his little tidbits he's been throwing out. I just wonder if Niamh picked up on it. I can't wait til it hits her that Daniel is her father.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: January 14 2012 02:05 am
Daniel is ahole of the highest order!! So Matthew knows that Niamha is their sister but Darla doesn't? Thank you for this update!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 24 2011 06:41 am
loving the cast pictures. they are great
Reviewer: readlover Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 23 2011 01:28 pm
Wow. Matthew figured it out...how interesting. NOw the family is advancing and I wonder if Daniel is going to try to knock all of Lorrianne's family off? Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: December 22 2011 09:10 pm
Thank you! Thank you for the update. I've been waiting and you didn't disappoint. Daniel is just evil wanting someone that didn't want him and then forcing himself on her like that. It also shows just how jealous he is of Joseph. This is just too good of a story and should be a movie! LOL. Please update as soon as possible. Merry Christmas!
Author's Response:
Waaaaaaahh....a movie you say?! That's EXACTLY how it goes on in my mind and there are so many details and other things that are hard to convey through words without sight. Ugh! Thank you very much and MERRY CHRISTMAS TO EVERYONE!!~~
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: December 22 2011 12:16 pm
I hate Daniel and can't wait for him to die, is Daniel mobster? How did Joseph get mixed up in so much evil? I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Daniel is a big wannabe gangster guy. He think he's the stuff but he ain't haha. Joseph got around the wrong crowd. It's taken him more than half his life to even realize it, or for it to truly smack him in the face...
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 22 2011 06:51 am
i'm enjoying this story, it's very interesting, i cant wait 4 a new update!
Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2011 12:27 pm
Wow. I don't even know what to say about this chapter...
Except...Wow!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: November 25 2011 09:01 pm
Okay, what's the deal with Lorianne. What's her fucking problem. She really piss me off. I don't like her at all. I thinks she is hiding more from her children. What a selfish bitch. Why would she turn on her own daughter like that. I don't care what this woman bent through but she needs to get her shit together. Its like she hates her own daugther. She always treat Niall better than Niamh
Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 23 2011 10:57 pm
Wow what a mess. I can't believe Lorriane turned on her daughter like that. I know she's distraugt. I hope that all this mess can be straightened out and the hate be directed to the one who caused all this chaos.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: November 23 2011 10:24 pm
Wow, that was deep!! Lorraine that was so wrong, what you did to Niamh. Whatever happened to you with Daniel isn't Niamh fault you to tell her something. This chapter was powerful you are such an amazing writer.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 23 2011 10:24 pm
IM LOVING THE STORY!!!! You are doing a great job of giving insight to why the charactors feel the way do
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 21 2011 06:53 am
OMG! I was so happy to see the update and I had no idea it was going to turn out like this! I am so into this story...so on the edge of my seat! I feel so sorry for Joseph and Lorriane. OMG. I hope they work things out and that all of them can be a family and get back at Daniel and "the family" for all the heartache and grief they have caused! I pray tht Niall will forgive his father. I can't wait for the next update! Now I'm going back to read it again for the second time!!!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: November 21 2011 01:08 am
Damn, so Niall didn't know that Joseph was father. So why does he hate him if he didn't know he true parentage? Lorraine you are really stupid!! Both of your children need to know the truth. Lorraine were you raped by that ahole Daniel? If that was the case I can understand you not telling Niamh about her father. This is so good!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 21 2011 01:03 am
OMG! Daniel is such a jerk! Why in the world is he angry about the daughter HE created??? I now feel like he must have taken advantage of Lorraine and then got pissed because he got her pregnant and then just wanted it all to "go away".
I would really really love it if that asshole would somehow need his daughter in the end and be at her total mercy! Maybe he'd need some bone marrow or something where she'd be the perfect donor after he found out that Matthew and Darla weren't a good match! LOL
This is a great story! I eagerly await your next installment!
Author's Response:
I'm sooo happy you're enjoying this! Daniel is a sicko and just doesn't know what Niamh will soon mean to him. Big dummy.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2011 12:04 pm
That scence with Daniel, Matt and Niamh makes me think that ahole knows that she is his daughter. Each time I read about Daniel and the things that he does and says I want him dead. If Daniel was on fire I wouldnd't spit on him!!!! How did Joseph get mixed up with that ahole and why? Didn't he know that he was crazy? This just keeps on getting better!!!
Author's Response:
Daniel definitely knows exactly who Niamh is. Daniel took Joseph under his wing, and after so many years of trusting him, Joseph is going to have a hard time taking him out of his life.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2011 06:08 am
Wow! This story really has me. Does Naill know that Joseph is his father? Does Blaise know? Does Joseph still love Lorriane. In the beginning of the story it was said that the two, Niall and Niahm are "irish twins" less than a year apart. Did Daniel take advantage of Lorraine right after she had Niall to prove a point to Joseph that he was "in charge?" So many questions....and I can't wait for the answers!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2011 03:20 am
Wow, that slap came out of nowhere and was completely uncalled for, why not just tell the girl instead of keeping secrets. Tell her so that she can make an informed decision. Lorrain and Niall both make my teeth itch. Daniel is crazy, when is someone going to kill him? I wander is Justin a mole for the FBI, I hope so. I want Daniel dead PDQ and ASAP!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2011 02:47 am
Wow! This was intense! If Lorriane was in love with Joesph, how did she end up having a baby with David? Was it rape? Did David do it to show Joseph he was in control.
This is all very intriguing. More please!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: November 12 2011 10:12 pm
Ok this is confusing. So Loraine slept with both Joseph and Daniel?? I really don't know what to think about that woman anymore. I'm confused.
Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 12 2011 05:30 am
Who was Carol? Lorraine thinks that Joseph had something to do with der disapperance. Niall is Joseph's son, but who is Niamh's father? How did Lorraine and Joseph meet? How does Daniel have so much power and why hasn't anyone eliminated him yet? Daniel makes my teeth itch!!! This is so good!!!
Author's Response:
Carol was Blaise's mother, the one who walked out in an earlier chapter
I don't know if you caught it, but when it was speaking of Daniel cutting off his support for Niamh's hospital treatment, and Lorraine reffered to Niamh as their child.
So Niall's dad=Joseph
And Niamh's= Daniel
And Joseph and Lorraine dated in high school.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: November 12 2011 04:09 am
Wow! Blaise knows that shes the one....I'm impressed.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: November 09 2011 01:26 pm