Okay, went to Amazon to purchase The One, but like always I read the reviews. I was very disappointed. The kindle price is nearly $10 (given it is over 500 pages) and a few of the reviews state the same issue I had already noted on Valentchamber. I want to purchase the ebook, but I was hoping a published version would have revised and edited the constant and repeated flashbacks, apparently purchased readers said it didn't. Even Mallory Malone and Sienna Minx's kindle versions with their numerous successes and publishings are at least about $5 or $7. Why pay an exorbitant price for a book that is reputed for repeating pages. If this story is revised, i would happily purchase it and recommend it.
Fisrt off, thanks for reading the chapters.
About the reviews you read, I can only say each person is free to have their opinions, but the chapters are not repeated, the flashback are essentials because they point to each person interpretation of one event and how they act/react according to what they feel to the event. This is why each character have their own voice.
it is not for everyone, but it is what is is, and as a writer I don't change my style of writing or storytelling to suits comments.
And yes, the price reflects the work. a 800 pages book cannot be the same price of a 150 pages novel.Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2017 08:34 am
Hello, can you put a link on the book on Amazon.com or the author's name?
It's on my details page, the title is the same" the one" by Vivienne Harris-ScottReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 03:54 pm
I hope you come back and complete the story. I really enjoyed reading it. I understand that life happens.
The story is finished. You can buy the book or ebook on Amazon.com with %50 off. Check my author's details page.
Thank you for reading.Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 05:49 pm
What I like about this story is you don't have to guess what these people are thinking and feeling. Each person tells their side of the story leaving the reader to go back and forth about how they feel about them. I thought Ethan was an ass, with no redeeming qualities, until I read his side of the story and realized he's scared and desperate. Then there's Julien's situation with Belinda. Finding out his daugther is not his child. That's got to be a kick in the head. I am glad to hear that I can get the book and finish the story...So thanks for the interesting story and I won't be back to reveiw so I don't spoil it for the rest of the readers by talking about something you haven't posted yet...I love the story and give it two thumbs up and a snap.
Thank you so much! I truly appreciate the comments!Reviewer: VeMo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2013 08:21 am
That was OUTSTANDING! I'm on an emotional rollercoaster.
You managed to make me hate, love; pity, hate; find him admirable yet loathesome But mostly, though, I hate him!
Waiting with baited breath for the next chapter!
Well done you!!
Thank you!Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 01:00 pm
Woooooow!! Ethan is truly a monster!
Hmm, aren't we all?Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 16 2012 04:27 am
This story is amazing I really like it but the price of the book is really expensive. Ill be sorry to see this go.
I am sorry too, but this is a very large book, and $10 is not what I would qualify expensive ...Reviewer: Coco Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 16 2012 01:35 am
I really don't like Ethan, I am still trying to figure why she married that fool. Good sex does not make a good marriage especially if the sex is the only thing that you have in the relationship. I can't wait to get to part where she finally gets away from that ahole!!!
I encourage you to re-read chapter 8. Maybe you missed it.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2012 12:07 am
So, I don't have wait for updates, I can purchase this story in full?
yes, you can get it on kindle, or if you wait for a week, you'll be able to buy the paperbackReviewer: Grace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 10:16 am
this is goooooood! keep the updates coming!
thanks, but you can always get the book...Reviewer: skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 02:07 am
I really don't like Belinda, that man loved that little girl and she lied to him from the very beginning. What a lying ho!!! Belinda and Ethan would be perfect for each other.
you are funny! I truly never thought of this!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 02:02 am