This is your story and we are just happy that you want to share it with us. You should never let anyone discouraged you. This is your work, and you should be proud of it. It’s a FICTION story so if someone is not mature enough that to read it then they shouldn’t. It’s as easy as that. Despite my views on relationships and affairs, I have not taken any offense to this story. I think its entertaining and its very interesting to read about these things in a different perspective.  Usually the main characters are always sweet, perfect and faithful. So to read things from the “other girl” POV is nice.

Great chapter. After this, I don’t really feel that sorry for Ingrid anymore.

I just started reading this story and am enjoying it immensly. 

Andrew really needs to make up his mind what he wants to do and stick with it; he is so wishy washy about things and when he starts to feel guilty about his actions, projects that to Dana instead of owning up to his short-comings.  He really needs to just grow up or grow some balls, or something:)

Please do continue with this story...I know it''s not everyone''s cup of tea, but variety in story-telling is what makes us unique.  Since this is a work of fiction, folks just need to get off their high horse and either read and enjoy or don''t read.

Just remember; opinions are like asses...everyone has one, so just do what makes you happy.

Looking forward to the next update!

Wow, Andrew is not well liked.  He does need to end the farce of an engagement to INgrid.  I so don''t her at all!!!  Thanks for the new cha[pter it was awesome!!

even with his thoughts i cant begin to understand what''s going on in his mind. but he does have an unfortunate habit of initiating these intimate events and then projecting blame onto dana to appease his guilt.  i think these two need some distance btw each other. ingrid doesn''t deserve this and neither does dana.  andrew needs to make up his mind, once and for all.

Loving this. I want them together but he needs to decide if he can still be with Igrid if he''s feeling the way he does for Dana.  Hope you update soon :)

Loved the update but Andrew was being a shithead. Glad Dana was able to calm Marie down eventhough it cost her a jacket. He needs to get it together!!!

Author''s Response:

You''re right, he was. Thank you baha!

Interesting update.

Author''s Response:

Thank you Baha! :D

I am loving this, cant wait to see what happens during the photo shoot :)

i think this was a pretty successful chapter. tons of tension. i''m lying in wait, though it''s so wrong for these two to hook up!

okay. that was terrible.

BECAUSE YOU STOPPED THERE!!!!

how dare you?! LoL Andrew''s got it bad and i can give a guess as to what pushed him to this point (considering what you so successfully relayed), but . . . calling her out of the blue and barking at her for some bs photoshoot? smh. terrible, my dude.

i love, love, love this story so far and cannot wait for more updates. thanks so much for sharing this!

Love it

i am soooo glad that nothing happened, as much as the bad side of me wanted it to. they seem so greatly matched and i''m really wondering how deep Andrew''s feelings run for Ingrid. he says he can''t leave like there''s some sort of obligation to her. though Dana seems a bit emotionally mechanical, i feel for her character. the explanation is great and eye-opening. i''m really rooting for these two.

btw, super great, but dumb (in a good way) creepy cast. Aaliyah? Heath? and Michelle? gawd, even Jake. just . . . perfect, yet so creepy.

i adore this story, woman. you have a wonderful handle on your characters, settings, and storytelling. i''m not sure of the entire intent or just how dark you plan to go, but there is an ominous tone to it that absolutely enjoy. i think the casting goes hand-in-hand with that as well. the two leads are dead, almost like star-crossed lovers (hate Romeo & Juliet, btw). it already sets the stage in some dark shadows. the tragedy of both flourishing, amazing lives and careers cut short by (mostly) unforseeable circumstances and events. craziness.

all that to say, love, love, love this story and it is now a favourite.

very good - cant wait for more! XD

Author''s Response:

Im hoping you like the next update then, thank you Cassius!

Andrew might want to think about why he got so pissed with convo with Rafe. Interesting. Very.

Author''s Response:

lol i agree,  althoug rafael is a jerk :P Thank you Bella!

Me likey! More please.

Great start. Interested in reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)