They are pretty people, indeed.
Reviewer: Die A Mouse Death Signed [Report This]Date: May 22 2013 01:44 am
update soon.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: February 28 2012 08:46 pm
Ready for the confrontation. I hope Keaton doesn't run . Keaton's mother ...I just wanna Punch her. Good update.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 27 2012 08:27 pm
Good story. You have me wanting to know what happen!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: January 25 2012 08:13 pm
OMG!!! As always, I love your updates! Poor Vivi, I want to give her a hug. :( Give her a gf of her won to ease her ache lol. Anyways, I am waiting for the next update!
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: January 23 2012 02:56 pm
Dang nabit! What does he know????? Oh sweet goodness I need more. I will await pateintly... NOT!!! Hurry up get to writing..:)
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: January 23 2012 08:13 am
I love this story with a fiery passion. Every time I see an update, I scream like a kid in a toy store whose parents just won the lotto. Seriouslsy. And the fact that you don't give it all away at once is what keeps me wanting more. Well, that and the fact that I love your writing. Can't wait for an update.
Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed [Report This]Date: January 23 2012 06:35 am
I have to agree, I wanna know too. Can't wait Scribe and thanks for the update today!
Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 23 2012 05:05 am
Damn it !!! I wanna know . Ready for the update .
Author's Response:
Probably tomorrow anon...just hammering out a few more details
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 23 2012 04:34 am
I love this story! More pretty please. :)
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: January 13 2012 04:11 am
DO I look like a crack head begging on a street corner to you? So why did you leave me hanging and scratching like a fiend? LOL! I totally love this! It's mint! I wish you would finish...
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2012 02:34 pm
They are dysfunctional, but what epic love isn't? I am hooked on these two. So don't keep me at bay.
Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2011 11:41 pm
Wow! I love the build up. Every story that you write is like a puzzle. I can't wait to see how you put this one together.
Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2011 11:34 pm
Damnit Scribe, you totally did it to me again. I was supposed to be trying for sleep and instead you just gave my insomnia an outlet. This story is heartbreaking and amazing. I can't wait to find out what happened between them and what they'll do to fix it.
Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2011 12:16 pm
Thanks for explaining that Keaton wasn't the person that died. As for their rrelationship. Wow, they were a mess together. So Keaton works at a bar and Zoe performs there. At least they seem to have good friends that understand the two of them. Poor Zoe won't evenallow Keaton to say he loves her. Thanks for a great update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2011 01:33 pm
IS Keaton now the person that died? Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2011 01:06 pm
Why is Zoe running from Keaton and her feelings? I like these characters so please continue.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 21 2011 10:01 pm
What a beautiful beginning to what I am sure will be a beautiful story.....I will definitely follow it...
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2011 03:37 pm
I'm liking what you're cooking here
Reviewer: Inthenykoftime Signed [Report This]Date: December 19 2011 12:22 pm
Good start to the story. I wonder why Zoe thinks that she should have been the one to die instead of her friend. I am looking forward to reading how Keaton and Zoe reconnect. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: December 19 2011 12:17 pm
Good cast. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: December 19 2011 12:00 pm
Sounds good so far! I love the slow build-up, dont want everything to be revealed at once, makes reading more worthwhile. Keep it up, this chapter was excellent!
Reviewer: annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 19 2011 08:44 am