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Title: More Than Words

More please :)

 Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2013 01:46 am
Title: More Than Words

Oh man!  What happened next?!  LOL!  Excellent!

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Date: July 25 2012 11:45 pm
Title: More Than Words

Thanks for a great update. He seeems to understand the way Lulu thinks.  Finally, they are there being intimate. I can't wait to read her POV. 

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2012 10:50 am
Title: More Than Words

Grrrrrrreat chapter, these two are HOT!!! Can't wait for the next installment!!!!

 Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 21 2012 04:16 am
Title: More Than Words

I so love Lulu and Dennison, they are so cute. Lulu is finally breaking Den off a piece! She finally admitted that she loves Den! I can't wait to read more.

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Date: February 20 2012 03:20 pm
Title: More Than Words

OHHH NOOO...  it can't end right here



Author's Response:

I'm sorry keikei. There will be another story after this one. And trust me...Lulu and Den are still very together in more ways than one.

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2012 02:30 pm
Title: More Than Words

OMG!  That was more than beautiful, Scribe.  *pants*   It was well worth the wait!

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Date: February 20 2012 02:19 pm
Title: The Cast

Love this story. I'm hoping for an update. Soon. Like tomorrow.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 19 2012 01:54 am
Title: Pep Talk Royale

This is another great story. I like this so much. I'm not even kidding. It's great. I look forward to the update.

Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 19 2012 11:28 pm
Title: Pep Talk Royale

This was a fun and sad update at the same time.  The fact that Mrs Lord is dying is awful.  I like the new and improved Lulu.  The dress sounds really sexy, I guess her and Dennison will be heating the sheets soon.  As for the conversation between Dennison and his dad it was a good one but still very sad.  Thanks for a great update.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2012 06:40 am
Title: The Cast

The story has promise and some funny moments. However I think the men don't have enough of a manly vibe. Their voices sound quite feminine to me, men dont just blurt out their feelings to each other.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review mims...just a brief interjection...

This is the third story in the series so I felt that it was appropriate to begin to allow my dudes to begin to express themselves. There are a ton of layers within Dennison's relationship with his dad...much of that speared on by his mother's illness. Ellis Lord now feels it's appropriate to share more with his oldest than he would have in the past. The title of the story is intimacy...it's not just about the physical aspect of intimacy...many avenues are growing in the relationships spotlighted. Not all men feel the need to be manly by clamming up and not expressing themselves. I know plenty who do...sometimes its eloquent...other times its a colorful array of explicit language. Either way, I'm sorry the voices aren't working for you but I'm happy with the dynamics I'm creating. Thanks for taking the time to read and share your comments.

 Reviewer: mims Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 18 2012 02:06 am
Title: Pep Talk Royale

To short, but excellent update!

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Date: January 17 2012 01:24 pm
Title: Pep Talk Royale

Dennison's father shocked me; he was the last person i expected to see at Den's door.  What's more shocking is the encouragement to pursue Lulu or better yet, the love of a father toward his son.  Ellis uses his wife's illness as an excuse to get closer to his child but hell...whatever it takes to bridge the gap works for me.

I'm ready to see the intimacy between thse two deserving people, not just the physical but the true meaning of the word.  I have no doubt that's what they'll find.

Update soon! :)

 Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 17 2012 09:01 am
Title: Perceptions of Reality

The guys had me rolling!  Gita was a trip too!

It's great that Lulu and Dennison have vested time into each other...it makes for a stronger relationship.

Loving the series Scribe!

 Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2012 04:29 am
Title: Pep Talk Royale

LOL  I think I like dad.  I want more and soon!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2012 01:37 pm
Title: Pep Talk Royale

Lived the chapter, especially the scene between dennison and his dad, it was really sweet. 

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 16 2012 07:16 am
Title: Tete -a-Tete

I loved this couple with the first story and didn't realize you started a second story, so I'm catching up, please, please update soon. I'll be tracking!

Great start to this one.



Author's Response:

Intimacy is the third story. So assUme and Take Two are the others. I'm glad you're enjoying Dennison and Lulu. I really like writing this couple.

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Date: January 01 2012 06:30 pm
Title: Tete -a-Tete

Thanks for a great update.  I like Raj and the fact that he was honest about his relationship with his wife and that he cheated on her.  Hopefully, this will elp Dennison not to bang his neighbor. Because if he does I don't think that Lulu would be so forgiving. She may caught off his blue balls. 

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2011 05:18 pm
Title: The Friendly Neighbor

Damn Izzie, now you want old boy.  I was stunned that Lulu was jealous.  I can't wait to see them together again.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2011 05:11 pm
Title: Tete -a-Tete

This is good, well intentioned and I even love the side characters.

Thanks,

Symph

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 28 2011 03:11 am
Title: Tete -a-Tete

Ahhh  Excellent as always.  I can't wait for these two to get together.

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2011 01:54 am
Title: Tete -a-Tete

Another great chapter can't wait for an update!

 Reviewer: Bert Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 28 2011 12:36 am
Title: Tete -a-Tete

Nice to read about dennison having one "normal" guy friend like raj. Update was great!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 28 2011 12:26 am
Title: Tete -a-Tete

I love this. The depth and intensity is unlike anything else I've read in a long while. Dennison sounds like my kind of guy. :)

 Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2011 12:10 am
Title: Tete -a-Tete

Oh goodness, no more please get to the intimacy part soon. Lulu's gagging for it (and so am I). Seriously though I'm really enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Date: December 27 2011 09:58 pm


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