Simply wonderful.
Reviewer: juno Signed
[Report This]Date: January 07 2012 12:47 am
Simply wonderful.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2012 12:47 am
This is really nice. I like how this series is progressing.
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2012 10:14 pm
I look forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2012 10:08 pm
If I was Vanessa I would not bring Henry to meet my family. I don't care if they are from another time or not, the fact is they are racist. Why would I bring my boyfriend to them? To hear them talk to him about white vs black people and all those racist things and be rude to him. Vanessa is a grown woman, and what happens between her and Henry is no ones business. Her grandmother doesn't have any right to judge her.
Author's Response:
True, Vanessa is grown, but she has lied to her family from the beginning. Everyone needs to face their prejudice and deal with it including her grandmother. The meeting is not going to be as bad as you think. The Uncle is the one that is more of a trip than grandma. LOL More is coming soon!
Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 06 2012 09:00 pm
Brenda you know that you must update this story sooner than February. Girl with all due respect to the other writers on this site, you are the best writer here hands down!!
Author's Response:
LOL Thank you for the compliment, but I beg to differ with you on that one. I'm hooked on A.Caine right now and a few others. I have to update my other stories and Valentines Day is not that far away. The candy is already in the stores now. Ha ha!
Thanks again.
Reviewer: Nakia Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2012 08:26 pm
You still managed to make me want to cry when Vanessa visited her mother! I can't wait for Valentine's Day!
Author's Response:
Sorry, I didn't mean to make you cry. All of Vanessa's past is affecting how she views her future with Henry. More to come soon!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2012 08:13 pm
You really know how to tell a story! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. More is coming as Valentine's day approaches!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2012 07:08 pm
excellent addition to the story. 10/10!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2012 05:09 pm
wow the look in their past were similar when it came to their family beliefs on interracial relationships and vanessa grandmother is something else can't wait til she and henry have their greeting and meeting together whoo until next time wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, there is prejudice on both sides. More is coming in Febuary.
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2012 04:56 pm
Whoo another contiued masterpiece whoo i love it and especially loved how minnie lit into young henry when he came running to her for symathy and she told him the truth and helped push him into his independence away from his parents whoo as alway love your writings!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Henry had to learn about the real world and Minnie had to help him! thanks for the review!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2012 04:43 pm