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Title: TWO : Dismal Discourse

Is that a warning? Is he trying to tell her that she will die if she doesn't follow the rules or something?

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 01:34 am

Title: ONE : Church of Chains

Interesting. She didn't remember him until he bit her. She was just too willing to take those pills. Is he going to take her now?

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 01:20 am

Title: Prologue III : Present Day

So she is having a miscarriage. That's so sad. Why do they hate each other soo much? They were in love!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2015 11:58 pm

Title: Prologue II : 28 BCE

Aw man she died! How crazy. I was wondering how she was able to get pregnant by a vampire but she isn't one herself. So when she comes back she will be a vampire or a human?

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2015 11:48 pm

Title: Prologue I : 30 B.C.E.

Wow. What happened to her? So he is a vampire and he didn't turn his wife into one? Okay

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2015 11:30 pm

Title: TWO : Dismal Discourse

Woohoo! You're back!! Great! On with the tale!! 

Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2015 04:35 am

Title: TWO : Dismal Discourse

Constantine will have to protect Neff from Cinersra, that ho is jealous.  Was Constantine a born or made vampire?   It has been long time since this story was updated, thank you!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2015 11:03 pm

Title: Meet the Cast

Hot man alert!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2015 10:55 pm

Title: ONE : Church of Chains

Hi there I'm a new reader. And I'm hooked to this story.  I love vampire stories.  Awesome story!!  I can't wait for the next update!!! 

BTW Constantine is fine!!!!!!!  Lol ツ

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2013 09:55 am

Title: Meet the Cast

OMYGOSH!!! Where have you been lovelyOne?! I am WAITING for this to unfold!!! Love the tension! PLLLLEEEEZE stay with it!

Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2013 03:21 am

Title: ONE : Church of Chains

First of all Nef was stupid for taking drugs not to mention that she is a foreign country high and stupid.  How about Marc transporting an illegal substance from the US to Great Britain and he passed her the pills out in the open.    I really hope that Constantine's true appearance that she saw while high and stupid? So he finally turned Nef, but how will she explain things to Marc? Nef was reincarnated until Constantine could turn her, so will the bite bring all of her memories back?

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2013 02:47 pm

Title: Meet the Cast

The men of this cast are yummilicious! !

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Date: September 30 2013 06:10 am

Title: Prologue III : Present Day

Interesting update. More please.

Author's Response:

Will do :] Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 08:45 am

Title: Prologue III : Present Day

Was there and update? I re read all the chaps but I cant see where it was updated... maybe the photos of the cast? IDK I cant wait for the next chap



Author's Response:

I didn't realize updating the castpics would make as though I added a chapter. I haven't just yet, but keep an eye out for one in the next couple of days! I hope it doesn't disappoint!

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2013 06:24 pm

Title: Prologue III : Present Day

Missing this story. Please update when u can.



Author's Response:

Absolutely, shug. I've got one coming in the next couple days. Thanks for keeping up :]

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 21 2013 05:08 am

Title: Prologue III : Present Day

is this version different than the one on fictionpress? I've been waiting for a update on that one for years? What happened?



Author's Response:

It is different; several years worth of revision, adding in and taking out, switching up pieces that made sense with what might've been odd or too strange. Not to mention after the move down here my MoTH muse dissipated for a while ;/ Thanks for reading anyhow, dear; it's always exciting to hear from readers I've had from my early FictionPress days :]

Reviewer: fan1233 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 08:24 am

Title: Prologue III : Present Day

That has got to be the longest pregnancy on record! Why us the pregnancy forbidden? Who is Constantine to Nef? Me like!



Author's Response:

lol not hardly! And you'll certainly find answers to all your questions in good time :] Glad you enjoy, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 08:23 pm

Title: Prologue III : Present Day

Oh wow. I take it she's miscarrying their child. So sad but why does she long for death? Even if Constantine won't turn her, she still has their love. I like this story!



Author's Response:

Indeed, it looks that way :[ At this point it's seems more dillusional she longs for a permant solution to a temporary problem given what pain she's undergoing. And thanks dear :]

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 11:59 am

Title: Prologue II : 28 BCE

Interesting start.

Author's Response:

Thanks :]

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 02:49 am

Title: Prologue I : 30 B.C.E.

woops. ever since march u've uploaded. thnx though



Author's Response:

Haha no worries ;]

Reviewer: mischief Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2012 11:54 am

Title: Prologue II : 28 BCE

I had forgotten about this story so I'm glad you updated. Very interested in seeing where this is headed.



Author's Response:

Thanks bunches! I'd forgotten I had posted here, too!

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2012 11:07 am

Title: Prologue I : 30 B.C.E.

Pretty, pretty please continue this. If you do I'll give you a sundae with sprinkles and whipped cream :)



Author's Response:

lol I gotcha :]

Reviewer: LadyK Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 12:59 am

Title: Prologue I : 30 B.C.E.

Interesting start!! Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2012 05:25 am

Title: Prologue I : 30 B.C.E.

I am so happy you added your story to this site! I was following this story on FictionPress, but I'm still really excited to see it here too! Yay!

Reviewer: Darling Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2012 04:58 am

Title: Prologue I : 30 B.C.E.

*Gasp*

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2012 06:29 pm



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