Title: Chapter 5

really good



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 13 2012 10:33 am

Title: Chapter 5

If an attrative guitarist with piercings and a cook was not great, a ghostly encounter was the chocolate whipped cream on top of the white hot chocolate. The connection between Kei and Eva is so thick you can cut it with a knife. I am becoming more addicted with each chapter. Your gift for detail is spot on.

Author's Response:

I'm thrilled you're enjoying this.  Kei and Eva are so much fun to write and sometimes I never know how they'll surprise me.

Reviewer: reader101 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2012 02:32 am

Title: Chapter 5

Kei is sexy and tortured I love that combination!!!  I am waiting for Eva to see Shane and I hope that he talks to her.



Author's Response:

LOL, that will be something considering she doesn't believe in ghosts.  Thank you so much for the feedback.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2012 01:24 am

Title: Chapter 5

Very good read and I love the way you tell a story.

 

Kei is a very intriguing man to say the least... definitely sexy.  Why am I picturing a midnight haired Sesshoumaru??  (I guess you'd have to know Inuyasha).

 

But I really like Eva too. 

 

Reading your story, I can't tell if it's supposed to be part supernatural or not!  lol, and I guess that's a good thing.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  It really is a work in progress and I've even changed some of the chapters that I've already posted.  My biggest concerns are in the characters and in the plot.  Kei is actually an amalgamation of several of my favourite metal musicians, including Michael Romeo of Symphony X, Sugizo of Luna Sea/X-Japan, Chachamaru of GacktJob, and John Petrucci of Dream Theatre, amongst others.

Eva is awesome, but I must confess that Kat and Dragon have grown on me a whole lot, LOL. 

Reviewer: ladake79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2012 06:20 am



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