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Title: Chapter 1

More please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2013 12:00 am
Title: Chapter 1

Cute

 

 Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2012 04:50 am
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I really like this stroy and would love to read more of it.

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Date: August 27 2012 10:39 pm
Title: Chapter 1

hmmm interesting. I would like to see how this story turns out :)

Cool Story!

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Date: May 17 2012 03:54 am
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okay, i'm already hooked.  Great start.

 Reviewer: Nu Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 14 2012 04:38 pm
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I know I'm late with this review, but this was great. I hope you're inspired to revisit these characters again.

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Date: March 27 2012 02:13 am
Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for a great read.

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Date: March 16 2012 01:48 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Will there be more?  Doesn't sound like the end.

 

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Date: March 13 2012 04:29 am
Title: Chapter 1

You are awesome as usual!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2012 04:04 am
Title: Chapter 1

Love this, so real!

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Date: March 06 2012 05:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Really nice one shot!

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2012 05:59 am
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Great start! Or I hope it's a start and not the whole story! ^_^

 Reviewer: Jamilla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2012 11:52 pm
Title: Chapter 1

As always you leave me with an awwwwwwwwwww at the end! I love it! You are the best!

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Date: March 05 2012 03:30 pm
Title: Chapter 1

You always write a chapter that makes us want more!  

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Date: March 05 2012 09:12 am
Title: Chapter 1

Cute... .Love it 

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Date: March 05 2012 03:35 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great start to this story so far Brenda... Jazz and Derrick have great chemistry so far, and I can't wait for their second date.

I really enjoy readinhg your stories, you have a way of making each character seem so real, and it draws you right into the story.

Looking forward to more.

 Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2012 10:50 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Awwww. That is so ute. Loving this story so far.

 Reviewer: Monique Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2012 03:20 pm
Title: Chapter 1

This is nice shold turn this into a story. It sad how people treated someone because they don't looked like them trust me I understand Jazz and Jack. So it nice they meet each other. I hope you turn this into a story thanks for the update

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Date: March 04 2012 02:07 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Aww beautiful :)

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Date: March 04 2012 02:00 pm
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well done, Chica.

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Date: March 04 2012 12:54 pm
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I like it

Reviewer: the girl next door Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 04 2012 11:42 am
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This was such an adorable piece...love that their individual imperfections made them the perfect match for each other.

I am really loving this challenge; really fun reads are coming forth:)

Thanks for sharing!

 Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2012 09:27 am
Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful but I must say that I am bias I have read a story of yours that I haven't thought was wonderful.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2012 07:12 am
Title: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh i know that there has to be another chapter hidden somewhere whoo i have to know what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: March 04 2012 07:11 am
Title: Chapter 1

Awww that was a great start!! I like Derrick and Jazz,it seem like Mary will be a problem.Can't wait for the next update.

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Date: March 04 2012 06:52 am


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