hmm i wonder what fred's son will say about this. Jared getting the promotion and Val and Fred starting a little something.

Yay, my story is back thanks Brenda!!   Charlie is making up for lost time, I don't know if Inga can handle it.  Jared is handling his business with Lu and hopeful she will believe that he loves her.  Valarie is about to get her groove, and it's about time.  This update was most excellent!!!

Well worth the wait whooo let me tell you those brothers charlie and jared really know how to leave their ladies panting for more wow no other words for those two and look like mama Val on her way to some companionship love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Those boys are getting some loving, why can't mom get some too? lol

love all the couples. please update soon. can the twins fall in love with 2 good young ladies of color too? they understand and accept them but they make them strive hard.

Awesome fic! Great characters and storyline!

Brenda1257, I finally had the opportunity to read the entire story.  Just wow, I was so blown away by the fact that their father tried to pimp out three of his sons to pay his gambling debt.  I was sorry to read that Charles mother had a problem with INga because she was black but accepted Lu because she knew her mother.  I was glad to read that Jared woke up and decided to do something with his life after his dad tried to pimp him out.  I was glad that the twins decided at the last minute not to have anythind to do with that crazy chick that was trying to have sex with both of them.  As for Charlie just wow, once he got a taste of Inga he just sex crazy.  Thanks for a great read. 

Charlie is going to have Inga knocked up with a quickness!  I'm glad Jared is taking his time with Lu!

Good Dad is finally gettint his due!  Inga better get that jelly quick! Lucinda and Jared need each other!

One of you best Brenda!!!! Well worth the wait... I hope things have slowed down a bit at your job, life!s too short to work away the joy of living and loving....

Oh My!  Who knew what freaks those Peterson men were.  

Charlie is so damn hot I actually feel a little sorry for Inga. Looks like she better get used to limping and walking sideways - hahaha.

The 'sleeper' in this whole wonderful story has to be Jared, so far (still waiting to see what Brenda pulls off with Lu's character). I especially loved that one part with the secret move...you know which one I'm talking about...'legs in the air' ladies; legs in the air!  

Shame on you Brenda. Why am I on line looking for local places to take yoga!

Next update please.

Excellent chapter. Lots of sex talk in this one. Looks like Charlie and Jared got what they wanted.

Well Jared is turning out to be a surprise. I'm glad of it.

I dont want Valerie to hate Inga just because and I dont want her liking Lucinda just because of her mom. That would be unfair to both women. I don't know why she's having such a hard time with Charlie. Until recently, as long as he took the load off her hands, she didn't care what he did. Now, its all she can do to keep her nose out of his lovelife. I wonder, did she ever try to fix Jared up? Because lord knows all those skanks were all wrong for him.

And Charlie, as long as he can work 12 to 14 hour days on end then come home and give his wife some good loving after feeling neglected, then I wont say anything about his neediness with the sex. Reciprocity, I say!