Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

Great update as aways.Glad everything went well  for Jared,and him getting a promotion for job came right on time. Looking forward to see what will happen with Lucinda at dinner with his mother.

This was the second time Jared was able help his little brothers out,how wonderful to see the twin having some self respect for themself.Poor Lindsay can't help to feel sorry for her,I hope she will be able to get the help she need.She was more concern if the twin still wanted to be her friend then having sex with the both of them.I think it bother her alot that she not able to make any real friends.So I think she's acting out to get attention.

Falling more in love with this story evertimes I read a new update,can't wait to see the next one.

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

Oh! I'm so proud of those two. It was a life lesson learned they will NEVER forget that thankfully, didn't cost them much. Little fast girls come and go, but they will ALWAYS be brothers.

And Lindsay, that poor child; she has a horrible thing happen to her and she needs help.

Fred Jones..ok...I guess everybody wins in the end, but using Jared like that is still shady.

Jared..ok..good for him. This will help him loads, I'm sure.

Good work!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 01:26 am

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

well that was odd, that girl was a creep.

Reviewer: chocolateorange Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 11:40 pm

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

Great update!!

Things are progressing nicely for Jared. Curiosity almost killed the twins. lol Lindsey needs some serious therapy, like yesterday. Poor girl.

Well, guess who's coming to dinner?? I'm glad Jared and Charlie talked about it. I'm sure Valerie's reaction will be priceless.

Actually, she should be honored. Lu is special and should be considered a good "catch." It is withLu's influence that Jared is finally getting his act together.

Can't wait to read the next chapter!!

 

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 11:18 pm

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

Another great update!!! Please don't make us waior long for the dinner fireworks...

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 10:25 pm

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

I am loving a more responsible Jared and know that he is going to do well as Manager of the Car Wash!

I am also enjoying watching him sweep Lu off her feet.  If anyone deserves that type of romance it is her.

Also proud of the twins!  I am glad they came to their senses before it was too late.  Hopefully Lindsay can get some real help!

Can't wait to see mama Peterson fall in love as well!

Loving this story!

 

Reviewer: Redbird Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 09:30 pm

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

So glad that those charges against Jared were dropped, as Sr. took himself of the picture,  Michael and Marqis I am so glad that you came to your senses before the ho Lindsay gave them a disease.  Lindsay needs help and I hope that she makes a change when she realizes that neither Michael or Marquiswant anything to do with her. I can't wait to read about Valerie's reaction to meeting Jared love.  If Valerie is not careful she will push two of child away. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 09:22 pm

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

They are sooo cute lol:)

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 07:53 pm

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

Whooa!  I am glad Jared got a break in court and out...with this new job prospect and such.

Val has a love interest I hope she has gotten over Charles and move on with her life I know it won't keep her out of her children's love life but hopefully it will be a start.

Glad the twins got their lesson and dodged that bullet. Lindsey needs help, help that will work not help that she over looks and keeps on down the path she is on.  She was willing to have sex with both of the boys without protection and I am so happy my boys had the sense God gave them to say NO THANK YOU! LOL!  All while reading about them and their experience I kept saying no no no....we need chocolate brown twins that are only for you LOL! I know I took that bone and ran with it.  That would really take Val over the top.  LOL!

As always great update thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 07:26 pm

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

Great update. I'm just glad the twins didn't allow Lindsey to manipulate them.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 05:37 pm

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

another great chapter that poor girl lindsay needs some serious help it is really sick and disgusting what happen to her at the hands of her own father he should have been castrated and bleed to death ugh why do these type of sickos get jail time i will never understand glad the twins realized what a big mistake they were headed to if they were have done the deed with her even though it went pretty far glad one was strong enough to stop the other before he made a mistake he will regret oan cant wait for the family dinner oh and i am sooo happy jared is not going to jail and he is finallly realizing his worth as a young productive male whoo i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 05:32 pm

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

So glad the twins stopped before it was too late. Dinner should be interesting. I did miss not reading about Charlie and Inga.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 03:43 pm

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

thanks for the update brenda!! im sooo ready for some jared and lu lovin for real!!! he needs to really rock her world. i feel sorry for lindsay and is inga pregnant? more please!!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 03:15 pm

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

Thanks-a-million for updating...I'd been going through "Charlie" withdrawals all week...lol...

So glad that Jared not only beat the charges from him evil sperm-doner, but is also moving up at his job.  So glad that he'll be more respectable and I know Lu will respect that.  I can't wait until he brings her to dinner...can't wait to see what Valerie's reaction will be!

I like that the twins had that talk with Jared and that he gave them sound advice!  So glad they didn't go all the way with Lindsey, even though they went far enough...ewww.  In a way, I feel sorry for the girl, because she didn't ask to be molested by her sick pig of a father, but not accepting the help provided, and deciding to become a tramp is truly tragic!  I'm happy that they're cutting ties with her; they are so cute...

I'm really looking forward to this family dinner; should be very revealing:)

So Valerie has an admirer, does she...interesting...about time she moved on from that pig Charles, and started to live...hopefully he'll actualyy be good for her.

Don't work too hard! 

 

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 03:14 pm

Title: Chapter 10 Moment of Truth

so HOT! i really have read the love scene like five times.

Reviewer: chocolateorange Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2012 11:12 pm

Title: Cast Pictures

Great Story, Ms. Brenda. I stalk VC everyday just to se eif you have updated this story.

Please continue, loving it so much.

Reviewer: Serenity Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 27 2012 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Lol never really thought Carlton Heston could be hot It just always brings to mind "let my people" but that's beside the point I really like this story congrats



Author's Response:

LOL!!!  Bedding Moses...

I understand.  In fact one black actress said that very thing when she kissed him in that movie Omega Man.  She said something to him about kissing Moses.  He thought it was funny.

Reviewer: mags Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2012 01:31 pm

Title: Chapter 10 Moment of Truth

I like this so far;I didn't think I would but you have done a good job convincing me otherwise

Reviewer: for real Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2012 08:14 pm

Title: Chapter 10 Moment of Truth

The thorn is gone, for good. Loving Charlie and Inga. So happy Charlie is not backing down to mom about his love for Inga. You should really get to know a person first before you pass judgment on them. would love to see what's going on with Tina and her friend. Jared and Lu, are making good progress.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2012 04:50 pm

Title: Cast Pictures

Loving this story so far!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2012 07:55 am

Title: Cast Pictures

Charleston is always hot, Jared is so fine I could just sop him up with a biscuit.  The twins are cute and I am loving me some John!!  Great choices Brenda.  Although the people you casted as  Valerie and John were not as I had pictured them.  For Valerie I was thinking maybe Amy Irving.  Charles Peterson I really didn't have a picture in my head.  So loving this tale!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2012 05:17 am

Title: Cast Pictures

Well, Brenda I cannot wait for another update, things have gotten hot, lol! Charlton Heston, okay that's cool, I can see the appeal, but  if and when you make more stories, give us some Clark Gable, Montgomery Clift, Sean Connery, Rock Hudson (of course when they were young)and it goes on, lol! They were fine as young men. The rest of the cast is awesome as well.



Author's Response:

Girl, don't get me started.  All of those you named are hot.  Gawd Montgomery Clift, I'd forgotten about him!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2012 01:45 am

Title: Cast Pictures

Love Love the pics of jared and lucinda and just breath taking charlie whoo just how i pictured all the chracters especially lucinda!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2012 01:18 am

Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

I Love The Pics... But Um.. The Twins Look A Little, Idk Girly To Me. Lol. They Are Cute, But It's Almost Like They Are A Little Too Cute. Idk Maybe It's Just Me, But From Look At Charlie and Then Jared. The Boys Don't Seem To Fit.

But I Love Lucinda and Inga! Lol. I Think This Picture Of Lucinda Fit Her Like Exactly Right!



Author's Response:

LOL.  The twins can't help how they look.  LOL  They are cutie pies in the story too...and a bit naive, which is why Charlie is so protective of them.  It is also why their father thought they could relieve him of his debt.  There's always someone who looks different in the family.  (Mine's like that).  I'm dark skinned with full lips and my baby brother is very fair skinned with curly brown hair.  I can't tell you how many times people used to ask me if he was my 'real' brother.  LOL  Of course, no one in the family cared because our entire family ranges from the lightest of light to the darkest of dark. 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 26 2012 12:10 am

Title: Cast Pictures

Nice pics!

 

 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2012 12:03 am



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