Wow! Fallon is scary!
Author's Response:
Very. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 11:46 pm
Fallan is crazzzzzy!
Author's Response:
[nods head in agreement]
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 09:23 pm
Fallon is really crazy. I guess she was on the raw in end of a bad relationship so now she had decided that it will never happen to her again. At this point she is coming off as a psycho. Feels like a fatal attraction scenario. Thanks
Author's Response:
A few bad relatonships actually. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
[Report This]Date: May 05 2012 09:06 pm
Oh, oh...that is definitely a clue that she can be a little psycho. However, no woman wants to think that they are being played and listening to the conversation that he just had she did have a right to ask the question. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 08:51 pm
A challenge. What are they in high school? I am sure he took his friends up on the challenge. I wonder if that is the reason why he went to jail. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 08:38 pm
I wonder who the she is that had him arrested. Good start. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank You!
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 08:27 pm
Welcome to the Chamber. Good cast. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 08:21 pm
Ahhhh I need moreee! Fallan is crazy as hell! I hope they catch on before its too late but from the beginning chapter, I'm gonna say its not gonna happen that way. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
I'll be typing more soon. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2012 05:03 pm
Why is Darren so blind. So Fallen is beautiful. She's also kooko coe CoCo Puffs. Her Elvis has left the building. If he says its not serious, he should try to see another girl and watch what happens.
Looking forward to the update.
CL
Author's Response:
Her elvis has left the building lol! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crocuslady Signed
[Report This]Date: May 05 2012 04:15 pm
Yep, Fallon is crazy as a sh*thouse rat. Darren is oblivious and Janice might be in a world of danger if Darren ever leaves Fallon.
This is deliciously disturbing and I love it. :)
Author's Response:
lol! Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: April 27 2012 11:35 am
Interesting! I like this story. The part where Darren says looks can be deceiving, and her response sent a nice chill down my spine. Darren has no idea what he is in for...
Keep writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: ribboninthesky Signed [Report This]Date: April 27 2012 04:30 am
I have such an intense dislike for Fallon right now, I want her to choke on a peanut!!! More please!!!!
Author's Response:
[dead] choke on a peanut!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 27 2012 03:17 am
Great start!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 07:22 pm
Fallon sounds like she has the potential to be a lunatic!
Author's Response:
A great potential.
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 07:21 pm
I'm so loving and scared of Fallan, she's already someone not to be messed with . Darren better watch his back . Good job. Loving this story .
Author's Response:
thank you!
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 07:15 pm
Jaince seems awesome! Fallan is clearly not all there...Jealous is such a scary emotion. And Darren is an idiot.....lol. The cast is very sttractive! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
lol @ Darren being an idiot. Yeah...he's a little slow on the uptake when it comes to this situation.
Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 11:14 am
Quick read well wriiten, great start
Author's Response:
thank you!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 10:05 am
Yep this is gonna be good. Can't wait till you update.
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 09:30 am
Humph...Drunk Frat boy Challegnes...gets u in trouble every damn time.
Author's Response:
lol, yep!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 09:24 am
I like it so far...so my guess is that the girl in question...is crazy as a betsy-bug, like ol' girl from Thin Line Between Love & Hate?
Author's Response:
lol You are correct.
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 09:20 am