Title: Chapter 19

YEA....Nashville it is. Ass for the farm, make David a partner, and let him run it.

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2012 05:32 am

Title: Chapter 19

I like this story a lot-so much so that I've read the story from the beginning a couple of times and read a few of the chapters several times.  Sure, it was weird how they cashed and argued all the time, even after they had sex for the first time but there is something that draws me to these two-maybe it's because when they are together they let go of any inhibitions and are so wanton without worrying about any possible (dangerous) backlash.  I knew Richard felt something-that would lead to stronger feelings-when he defended her to that trashy white woman.  

Shonti is a diva but she wouldn't be Shonti if she wasn't-I'm glad that she is sharing her feelings with Richard about how much she cares for him and wants him to see his full potential.  Good for Richard-sometimes you just need someone who cares to push you towards your dreams when you are you are not sure of them yourself-you want to do something but afraid of failure.  Fantastic that he is going for his dreams but I see that he wants Shonti right there beside him.

Now, I would love to read about the two apart-realizing how much they miss each other--LOVE each other. It's amazing that you could fall in love after such a short period of time (especially when most of that time is spent bickering) but I think Richard started falling for her in Nashville.  I would love for them to admit their love to each other...we haven't read Richard's thoughts on whether he was in love with her but you can tell.  I think Shonti will move after several months...maybe Richard should visit her in Chicago to help her make up her mind quicker, lol.  It would be interesting to see how she reworks her new blog or maybe she will start a new career.  Until Richard make it big, she will most likely be the breadwinner-because yes I think they will be together (maybe they will get married?).

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2012 10:24 am

Title: Chapter 19

Aww, he wants Shonti to move in with him. Yay! He's moving to Nashville. Can't wait to see what Shonti decides.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 12 2012 10:00 pm

Title: Chapter 19

I hope she stays she really loves him and they are great together. I could see it now him making hits and she his manger popping out 12 kids lol. thank for the update

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2012 04:07 pm

Title: Chapter 19

She finally admitted to herself that she loves Richard, I'm so proud.  I am proud of Richard for choosing to leave the comfort of Hohenwald for the chance of music career in Nashville.  SO awesome!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2012 05:20 am

Title: Chapter 18

Good chapter!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 30 2012 05:37 am

Title: Chapter 18

Ok I love these two they are so cute togehter  smiling  holding each other and love how richard went king lion when he saw david  talking to his girl lol.  Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2012 02:58 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Nice to see Shonti treating Richard a little bit better.  Was Richard feeling a little jealous about David being near Shonti?  He was spending a little too much time in Shonti presence, I sure hope that he doesn't do something that would cause Richard to want loose David's friendship. More please!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2012 07:02 am

Title: Chapter 17

Thanks for a great update.  At least they were able to have a civil conversation.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2012 02:47 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Finally Shonti!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2012 03:37 am

Title: Chapter 17

I hope he listen to her and go for his dreams he has the skills and the looks to go to the top. Shonit she take her own advice and go for what she want and she want him. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2012 10:09 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Shonti finally admitted to herself that she's in love with Richard. I already know that she's not going to tell Richard because she's going back to CHicago  and she's scared.  But when is Richard going to admit his feelings?  Whose gonna crack first?  Loved it!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2012 09:50 pm

Title: Chapter 17

I like the way they got along in this chapter.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2012 09:07 pm

Title: Chapter 17

A sweet chapter.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2012 03:58 pm

Title: Cast Pics

I think the both of them have already fallen for each other and just haven't come to terms with it yet.   Good stuff!  More please!

 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2012 12:46 pm

Title: Chapter 16

I just read this story and I really like it. I cannot wait to see where you take it and cannot wait until you update!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2012 05:45 pm

Title: Chapter 16

That was kinda sweet with these two.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2012 06:45 am

Title: Chapter 16

Those 2 make me laugh every time! Don't try to figure things out just enjoy each other in  every way possible.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 07 2012 09:48 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Now richard not right scared the crap out her lol but those two can try all they wanted they love each other and hope they fight to stay together.Thank for the update

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2012 08:01 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Thosr two are stupid which makes them perfect for each other. Why do I get the feeling that Joseph wanted them together? Ricahard is so hot, love him!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2012 03:16 pm

Title: Chapter 16

LOL  Richard didn't get none laughing at Shonti in a shower cap! 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2012 12:55 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 01 2012 06:29 am

Title: Chapter 15

Cute and funny chapter.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 09:41 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Ha!  Richard is better than I am.  LOL

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 11:30 am

Title: Chapter 15

Richard, you are too funny.  I laughed out loud when Carl said that he and Jack had made a bet that Richard would hate Sushi.  So loving this story!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 05:34 am



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