Title: Chapter 14

Shonti is a trip...lol!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 03:04 am

Title: Chapter 14

Loved this story. Love the direction that Richard and Shonti's relationship is moving in.

 

Please update again soon.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 06:20 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Richard and Shonti are too funny. Those ground rules Shonti came up with are priceless!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 10:24 pm

Title: Chapter 14

I don't care what either ones said they both have huge feelings for each other and I belive it love. Neither one just sleep with someone to get their rocks off no they slept with each other because they love each other just my thought. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 03:13 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Shonti is a hot mess, and is so fighting her feelings for Richard with his fine ass.  I hope that they work out their feelings for each other and don't run from them.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 04:36 am

Title: Chapter 13

Hope they figure out their relationship before Shonti leaves.

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 08:20 am

Title: Chapter 13

Glad he finally made another move.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 05:35 am

Title: Chapter 13

Yes!!!! Shonti and Richard should enjoy each other while they can! Great chapter!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 01:40 am

Title: Chapter 13

Ok how sexy is he holding her  being there for her it nice. Passion party I would been blushing all over ever went one those lol.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 04:57 pm

Title: Chapter 13

YEAH!!! Glad that Richard admitted his feelings to Shonti. One down and one to go.  Amazing update.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 04:25 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Hound doggy, there is about to be some hot, butt, naked sex!! Richard Shinti don't you but I'll take you! This chapter was sexy!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 04:04 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Ah!  Loving this!  More please!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 11:27 am

Title: Chapter 13

OMG you did such a good job! This was an A+ chapter! = )

Reviewer: MeganRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 09:03 am

Title: Chapter 12

Give me more! Seriously this chapter was too short. I like it though.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2012 04:26 am

Title: Chapter 12

An the award for the King and Queen of Denial goes to Richard and Shonti!1  And the crowd goes wild!!!! 

Why are they fighting their feelings so hard? Shonti, you better recognize Richard is fine and you know that he loved you just right.  They both need to quit tripping!!

Excellent chapter!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 11:11 pm

Title: Chapter 12

So Shonti is fantasizing about Richard huh? More sparks soon I hope.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 04:54 pm

Title: Chapter 12

I with Carl these two need to get togther. They liked each other alot and I think they bring out the best in each other. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 04:02 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Thanks for a great update.  I wonder what Laura is up to. 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 01:17 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Shonti is such a city girl! She needs to get on up out of there. Richard is funny with the secret looks.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 01:39 am

Title: Chapter 11

Too short but I really like the chapter. Richard should just go for it. He likes her and she likes him. She's just too stubborn to do anything about it. I really like Carl.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 08:45 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Thanks for a great update. Laura is a mess. At least they have a nice place yo stay and it is free.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 01:59 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Carl is hound dog with a cougar, you go boy!!!  I am still waiting for Shonti to be likable but I love Richard.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 06:17 am

Title: Chapter 11

It's time for some more loving between the two of them. Fighting always leads to a little loving.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 04:19 am

Title: Chapter 10

I wonder why richard is mad and leon. I think when shonti leaves she going to mis richard like crazy. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2012 10:15 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for a great update.  

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2012 06:11 am



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