Title: Epilogue

Loved that this was written from the hero pov solely...you don't see that often in romance. Great story.

Reviewer: kuriouskale Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2016 09:34 pm

Title: Chapter 8: 'Skin'

I would like to know her thoughts.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2014 06:00 am

Title: Chapter 3: Green-eyed Monster

Nothing from Allegra's point of view? What is she thinking about Chris?

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2014 04:33 am

Title: Chapter 1: Miss Allegra Carter

Perfect..love this story

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2014 05:54 am

Title: Epilogue

I just discovered this story & fell in love with your characters. Thank You!

Reviewer: Madi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 01:59 am

Title: Epilogue

I like this story, and thank you for translating.  Some authors do not take the time to do that.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the nice comment. :D I'm glad you liked my story.

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3@gmail.com Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 04:56 am

Title: Chapter 9: Sex Therapy

I like him. Allegra has been blowing hot and cold, encouraging him to have a one night stand. I honestly think that he could have waited for her indefinitely, if only she gave him consistent encouragement that she could feel for him what he felt for her. However, absent that type of encouragement, she really has no right to be hurt or otherwise upset.



Author's Response:

Dear Oh wll. Anonymous,
I totally agree with you. The guy has urges and it's not clear whether she likes him or not. Plus, she wanted him to have sex and he complied with what she wanted, so I think that she really needs to get a life and let Chris live his.

Reviewer: Oh well. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 13 2012 04:47 pm

Title: Epilogue

I really did enjoy your story....Especially apart about working to gain trust from the most unlikely place or person



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks. I can't believe this is over. This is the first story I've ever completed. Yay!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2012 09:00 am

Title: Epilogue

Allegra is popping babies, I love it!!  Rebecca seems like she's a such a little sweetie.  Francisco is such a little man and already has a crush.  How are Francisco and Imogene the same age?    Giselle was way into her pregnancy when Allegra would have moved to London.   Great story!!



Author's Response:

I love Rebecca, and Francesco is just as nice. Imogen is Laurence and Giselle's second child. Their first kid is Christopher who is 9. Imogen and Francesco were born in the same year.
Thank you for reading and for reviewing. Your comments were amazing and they really made me want to write more.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2012 04:33 am

Title: Chapter 21: Life can't get any better

Nice ending...please let them get married.

Author's Response:

You'll find out soon enough. :D

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2012 05:40 pm

Title: Chapter 21: Life can't get any better

sighs in relief...I am happy for them



Author's Response:

Aww. I am happy for them too. :D 

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 10:17 am

Title: Chapter 21: Life can't get any better

The best part was when Chris knocked the hell out of Jake. He so deserved an ass whooping and he would have gotten one if Allegra hadn't gotten in the way.  Allegra was funny when she was jealous of Chris' ex-ho,  She was in denial.



Author's Response:

I know right? That was just too hilarious. I wish I could punch Jake as well. Good stress release.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 02:16 am

Title: Chapter 21: Life can't get any better

great update



Author's Response:

Thanks! :D

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2012 01:16 am

Title: Chapter 20: Departure

I really live this...I thought she would go with him. Can't wait for the update.

Author's Response:

Thanks. :D

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2012 03:25 pm

Title: Chapter 20: Departure

Chris is happy, Allegra is happy and I am happy with these updates. I can't for Allegra to visit Chris in London.



Author's Response:

I am happy too! Allegra will visit him soon. I'll fast forward to a few months, though

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2012 01:48 am

Title: Chapter 19: 'Dance For You'

Allegra is putting it down and working it!!!  Chris is so gone and I love it.  Allegra I am so glad that you are finally over your stupidity.  This was so good, yippee, skippy Rodney Allen Rippy!



Author's Response:

Oh I'm so glad you liked this. I apologise for my ignorance but I don't know who Rodney Allen Rippy is.

Thank you for reviewing. I cant wait to write more.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2012 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 20: Departure

Great update



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2012 11:21 pm

Title: Chapter 18: 'I'm in no rush. I will be waiting.'

I hope they work it out.



Author's Response:

Me too.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2012 12:30 am

Title: Prologue

I love this story. At first I wasn't liking Allegra's attitude but now I like her. Please more.



Author's Response:

Aww, that makes me happy. :D

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 12:27 am

Title: Chapter 18: 'I'm in no rush. I will be waiting.'

I'm so happy that Chris is sticking to his guns and not jumping into anything with Allegra. He's already been burned once and refuses to go through that again with her. It's her time to prove that she's worthy of him and his love. He's made up his mind that he's moving to London and now it's her move. Great chapter and I agree, not that many more chapters are needed.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the amazing review. I am so happy for Chris as well. We'll see how it will go later on. Still trying to find the muse so that I'll write the next chapter.

Kisses.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 01:43 am

Title: Chapter 18: 'I'm in no rush. I will be waiting.'

Chris is still moving, which will allow Allegra to really work hard for Chris's heart.  She needs to earn his trust again and what better than for her to constantly fly over to London to wear down his defenses.  I love his friends and there attitudes towards Allegra.  Chris you just need to realize that your friends have a right to feel how they feel, they saw the end result of Allegra's treatment of you.  That whole situation was not pretty, give your friends a break.  But make Allegra jump through hoops for your heart!!



Author's Response:

Your reviews really make me happy. His friends are real friends. Sad that today they are a rare and endangered species. I would be more pissed off than that if I were one of Chris' friends. I would hate on Allegra for forever! Allegra still needs to work a lot. Will she succeed in the end? Whether she does or not is not necessarily important. The most important thing is that Chris grew up and is a fantastic confident man.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 11:42 pm

Title: Chapter 18: 'I'm in no rush. I will be waiting.'

How about she moves with him. They could get to know each other again, share all it is they need to know, that has not already been shared. Nice update!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the suggestion. I really appreciate it. Who knows, it might become part of the story.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 11:06 pm

Title: Chapter 17: Confessions and Conversations

Giselle has a BIG MOUTH...how can she betray Allegra's confidence like that. 

 

Great UPDATE! looking forward to the mini-story and the next update.



Author's Response:

I agree. I guess Allegra is going to go crazy once she finds out. And believe me, she will.

Thank you lots for reviewing. <3

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 02:24 am

Title: Chapter 17: Confessions and Conversations

I'm really loving the new Chris. He's confident, self-assured, not easily led by emotions--definitely on his grown man. That year was the best decision he could have made. I laughed when he hung up on Allegra and I know her pride was probably hurt but oh, well. His was hurt for months while he wore his heart on his sleeve basically. I think it's fitting that Chris is in this place of peace and fulfillment while Allegra is running after him.



Author's Response:

I love him too! He's a new person, an adult.

I think Allegra will have to do a lot of running after him before he gives her the time of a day.

Thank you for reviewing. :D

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2012 06:10 am

Title: Cast Pictures

I know a lot of folks are pissed with Allegra, but I just feel Chris ambushed her with his feelings. Yeah she didn't handle it in the most tactful way, but I don't think either one of them were ready for love. She still had to deal with the death of her husband and move on while he had daddy issues and self-worth issues. He came across too desperate for love and acceptance. Sure they became friends but they never truly opened up to each other. He never helped him get over her husband and She never helped him find his backbone and sense of self. That bad break up was exactly what both of them needed. 



Author's Response:

I agree with you. Chris and Allegra weren't supposed to get together then. They both had issues that they needed to be solved in order to be truly happy together. Now Chris is okay and Allegra is on her way to full recovery. :D

Reviewer: Eclectic Charms Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2012 01:50 am



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