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Title: New World, Old World

love the update, a little on the short side but I still love it. as far as the font goes it seems to happen sometimes.

 Reviewer: nikol Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2012 07:53 am
Title: The old lion.

Well, this side of Vita is like able, and I hope he shows that side to Cara. I can't wait to see how Aza reacts when he comes bak. He and Cara were spending time together and he really liked doing the horrizontal mambo with her:) Now Vita seems to want to cut in on the fun:D

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Date: September 09 2012 01:25 am
Title: Consuming Warmth

Interesting I wonder how she feels about him...hmmmm

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2012 01:55 pm
Title: Princess.

Wow that was Cold Blooded @ Rick James

 

LOL

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2012 01:21 pm
Title: Consuming Warmth

Ah so that explains why one minute he seems alright then the next like he has lost his ever loving mind.

The Junirk suffer from multiple personalities if I understood that correctly.  I hope that he is able to fight the mean part of his personality and try to get to know Carla and even bet better to Aza.

Thank you for the update.

Happy writng

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2012 06:36 am
Title: Consuming Warmth

Loved the update. Hmm, maybe Ruasu was right and Vita is cracking up!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2012 05:31 am
Title: Princess.

Wow, killing his father!!, what a turn of events!! He claims to love Aza and Carla. Hope they all can make it work eventually.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2012 11:52 pm
Title: Destiny Revealed

Gross Vita!!! Poor Carla... Aza,I just don't know about him,very unpredictable...

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Date: August 28 2012 05:30 pm
Title: Princess.

Ewwww Vita,that's one cold MF,lol

 Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2012 05:06 pm
Title: Princess.

I enjoyed this chapter. 

Hmm, when did Vita decide that he loved Carla? I haven't read a single indication of that. It would be nice if there were more scenes of them getting to no each other, and perhaps a with only Vita and Carla. Again, Vita is something else. I wonder how Aza's going to feel when his father dies. 

The story has good movement, but it's a tad rushed. I don't think it should move slower, but I think you should spend a little more time on the character's bonding. I don't want them to fall in love over night, but the story is lacking a little depth. 

Also, her gown was a tad confusing as Aurora's gown doesn't hug her hips. I'm so over these snooty Aliens. I hope she puts them in their place soon.  



Author's Response:

Hehehe...You are so asking the right questions. Don't worry this story is going to be long...probably going to have to break it down, but don't worry they aren't going to fall in love over night. I'm just trying to emphasize Vita's crazy right now. His words are a clue for the chapters that come.

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 04:49 am
Title: Princess.

Great upate!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 26 2012 10:45 pm
Title: 22 Hours.

Oh no poor carla

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2012 02:38 am
Title: 22 Hours.

I can't wait to see what happens at the ball. I am glad that Aza is beginning to recognize feelings for Carla. I hope some one finds out about Vita's plan and that he has the sickness.  Looking forward to more chapters!

 Reviewer: Drea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 03:30 pm
Title: 22 Hours.

I like Carla!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 08:48 am
Title: Destiny Revealed

OH...MY...GOD OH...MY...GOD              

 

                                      Sad and evil

P.S.Congrats on the jobs

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 08:04 am
Title: 22 Hours.

Interesting! =D

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 07:14 am
Title: 22 Hours.

Wonderful update I can't wait to see what is in store for Carla!!!

 Reviewer: Tempestsunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 05:19 am
Title: 22 Hours.

I'm looking forward to the ball. 

 

Vita is something else. 

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 03:50 am
Title: Destiny Revealed

That was entirely too short wanted more details on that hot and sexy scene,lol

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 03:07 am
Title: Destiny Revealed

I wonder how Carla is going to act? Will she push Aza away or start to have deeper feelings? Vita is a dirty b@stard and I hope he dies.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 01:26 am
Title: Bonding

That's a bad man a very bad man! luv this story

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 01:21 am
Title: Destiny Revealed

Oh nooo, poor Carla!! Hope she survives with her mind intact. Wow, Vita sure has alot of control over Aza. Can't wait to read what happens next!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 04:25 am
Title: Destiny Revealed

Wow, keep it coming!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 08:53 pm
Title: Destiny Revealed

Aww, Poor Carla! :( 

 

Vita disgusts me. 

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 08:20 pm
Title: Bonding

Cute Cat <3 

*See even the cat is begging for an update *

 

I cannot critic your work O_o

But I can encourage you^_^

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 02:51 am


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